Ranma as a Senshi

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Ranma as a Senshi

Postby Jerry » Sun Apr 16, 2006 6:44 pm

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2894757/1/
Call "Travelers" Ranma and Kasumi are Senshi.
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Postby Lightspire » Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:18 pm

that was...interesting. By the way, I found it through the link, but not at fanfiction.net. How is that? Is it showing up later, or something? The same happened with Innortal's fic. I used the link, but it wasn't really up yet...
Anyway, so long as Ranma doesn't constantly go off about havin' to be a man all the time, and how the curse sucks, and he can't stand the fuku, etc., I'm liking it. (Of course, I realise he DOESN'T do this, I'm just venting over the times that he does...)
I really like the idea of seeing Kasumi as a senshi! I only saw it happen once, in "firefly", I think, but it never got past the prologue. Good stuff.
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Postby bishop_hikusaak » Sun Apr 16, 2006 9:48 pm

:D Yeah, I also found it rare to have Kasumi as a senshi. Although I think she was mentioned as a cameo senshi in Burger Bill's Sailor Ranko.
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Postby iiradned » Mon Apr 17, 2006 12:14 am

Lightspire wrote:that was...interesting. By the way, I found it through the link, but not at fanfiction.net. How is that? Is it showing up later, or something? The same happened with Innortal's fic. I used the link, but it wasn't really up yet...

I think it is bug of fanfiction.net I have subcribed to alerts for a couple dozen stories on ff.net and when I click the link for a new/updated chapter, ff.net reports back that the fic is not up yet.
But when I open the first chapter of a fic, either directly or by the listing and then go the new chapter, it shows up properly.
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Postby WG_Writer » Mon Apr 17, 2006 8:33 pm

I found the first person writting was hard to read. it didn't feel like a ranma fic. Its more like a female SI fic that goes from Ranma to SM. Ranma is completely out of character, and over powered (debateable). Kasumi is done decently, but the writting in general lacks feeling. this fic needs a rewrite badly.
The Plot is good, but to be honest, if feels so fast it makes my stories seem slow, and i have a speed problem in how mine start.
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Hi and thanks

Postby deathgeonous » Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:25 pm

Hi! I loved this site before it went down, though I never did join. Thanks for giving my story a chance. I wish this site had been up before though. I just got a Beta Reader for Travelers and my other Ranma/SM fic Youma Slayer, which i just updated and corected the mistake in title today. i should have the next chapter of this story out, if not this weeked, next weekend. Thanks to the one who linked my story, I apprecate it. I hope I can do a decent job for all of you who contine to read this story. a little off topic, but I still am looking for a Beta Reader for The Merger if any one is interested, just contact me. Thanks again! deathgeonous.
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Re: Ranma as a Senshi

Postby AshK1980 » Sat Apr 22, 2006 8:05 pm

Hey Deathgeonous(spelling?) That is an excellent story. I also found it throught the link. It isn't even listed on Fanfiction.net . I noticed one thing in your fic though(I wrote it in my review but here it is again.): I have read most of the Manga at my local Borders. The Tea Kettle of Restoration unlocks the Jusenkyo victims curses and the Pail of Preservation locks Jusenkyo Victims in their cursed forms. I love your story. I found another possible Fukufic on Fanfiction.net it is called Blinded Stars I'm not sure what Ranma-Chan's Senshi name is going to be. There is no Fuku yet. It is heading that way though because in the most recent chapter Ranma-Chan has a symbol on her forehead. It was a Blue Star. So far it is pretty good. Hey could someone help me out with Pokeranmoon I am totally stuck with writers block? I'm going to make half the new senshi I mentioned in the summary from Ranma 1/2 and the other half from Pokemon. Wiseman is back in my story. He is also going to try and ressurrect the past Sailor Moon Enemies. My fic also takes place before Sailor Stars. Anyway could someone please help me out with ideas Iam totally stuck?
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Re: Ranma as a Senshi

Postby Greybara » Sat Apr 22, 2006 9:41 pm

Jerry wrote:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2894757/1/
Call "Travelers" Ranma and Kasumi are Senshi.

i tend to not like having Ranma as a senshi, only because it seems to take away or make useless his powers of the martial arts, only the extremely long sailor ranko had a remody for this, and i still thought it was lacking, ill give it a shot though
gave it a shot, it was a waste of my time, the fanfic is horribly ooc, and the auther dosent know the difference between a kettle and a ladle.
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Re: Ranma as a Senshi

Postby Shadow Wolf » Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:16 pm

Greybara wrote:
Jerry wrote:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2894757/1/
Call "Travelers" Ranma and Kasumi are Senshi.

i tend to not like having Ranma as a senshi, only because it seems to take away or make useless his powers of the martial arts, only the extremely long sailor ranko had a remody for this, and i still thought it was lacking, ill give it a shot though
gave it a shot, it was a waste of my time, the fanfic is horribly ooc, and the auther dosent know the difference between a kettle and a ladle.

If you don't like Ranma as a Senshi, you may want to avoid this site, or at least this particular forum. The entire *purpose* of the Temple is discussing stories where Ranma is a Senshi (or near-Senshi).
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Postby Greybara » Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:22 pm

ranma as a senshi can be fine with me if its done (IMO) right
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:24 pm

Greybara wrote:ranma as a senshi can be fine with me if its done (IMO) right

Yeah... this has drifted guys.
Stick to the topic of the fic at hand.
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