Strained Harmony, chapter 1

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Postby Metroidvania » Sat Jan 20, 2007 7:39 pm

Dumbledork wrote:After reading the fic once again (yes, I love it that much) I have one question. How accurate are the Time Gates in your fic? Apparently it was very easy for Setsuna to get Ranma to work as a nanny (placing the ad at the place Ranma would look and the newspaper she knew Ranma would buy) but she was unable to foresee the speed at which Ranma accepted her femininity.

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I wrote:And from your earlier comments on the time frame, and the fic, I gather I'm pretty close, especially remembering Pluto's comments on the Timegate being closed, at least for a while, which is why she can live with the other outers in canon-verse.

Sunny wrote:Heh Sailor Moon SuperS, first few episodes of the manga.

IIRC, the time gates are temporarily closed after Saturn tells Pluto to send 9-chan and Pharaoh 90 through them back to the Tau system.
As for before that during season R....only Sunny and Tri know how much or little it was used then.
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Postby Dumbledork » Sat Jan 20, 2007 7:46 pm

Thx for the info. I hadn't noticed that line.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:13 pm

Thanks for rereading and commenting again Dumble, and thanks for answering for me Metroidvania. Heh
Yeah, durring the chapter Setsuna is never shown going to the gates. They're not even mentioned.
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Postby Raneko » Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:52 pm

Well at least Setsuna didn't drag poor Ranma to her bedroom to and have her wicked way Ranma, after thier date.
yet. :wink:
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Postby nodregah » Wed Jan 31, 2007 9:37 pm

Well at least Setsuna didn't drag poor Ranma to her bedroom to and have her wicked way Ranma, after thier date.

What would be so bad about that? I happen to like the Ranma/Setsuna matchup.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Wed Jan 31, 2007 9:57 pm

You missed the last word Raneko typed "yet"
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Postby nodregah » Thu Feb 01, 2007 3:14 am

oops!!
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Postby Raneko » Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:58 pm

What Ranma considers dessert
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What Setsuna, wants Ranma to consider dessert.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Feb 02, 2007 9:13 pm

well... that might be on the mark;p
I also changed your img to a url. the later one wasn't working. Odd
Got it to work. cool
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Postby Dumbledork » Fri Feb 02, 2007 10:30 pm

Hehehe, good one Raneko. Although the ice cream... hmm... the quantity ok, but it doesn't look very tasty. Rather something Akane would prepare. And don't you think your Setsuna is somewhat too busty?
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Postby Seraphim » Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:01 pm

Dumbledork wrote:Hehehe, good one Raneko. Although the ice cream... hmm... the quantity ok, but it doesn't look very tasty. Rather something Akane would prepare. And don't you think your Setsuna is somewhat too busty?

I was thinking that too.... :oops:
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Postby Raneko » Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:36 pm

Dumbledork wrote:Hehehe, good one Raneko. Although the ice cream... hmm... the quantity ok, but it doesn't look very tasty. Rather something Akane would prepare. And don't you think your Setsuna is somewhat too busty?

I agree with the Ice Cream, I should have use double scoops side by side.
About Setusna's bust. Well You can never tell big they are because of that damn bow.
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Postby lwf58 » Sat Feb 03, 2007 4:11 pm

Raneko wrote:About Setusna's bust. Well You can never tell big they are because of that damn bow.

Be careful about what pictures you post, though. That one is sort of okay, since she is technically fully clothed, but it's a little risque. I doubt the average employer would see much difference between nudity and women in lingerie. It probably would have been better to link to the picture, rather than displaying it... especially since it's so large.
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Postby Dumbledork » Sat Feb 03, 2007 5:46 pm

Bah, that picture isn't bad. Some people are too prude. Although personally I have a big distaste for tentacle sex, moe and pedophilia in general.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:19 pm

Dumbledork wrote:Bah, that picture isn't bad. Some people are too prude. Although personally I have a big distaste for tentacle sex, moe and pedophilia in general.

Yes people can be prudes. Like a reader's boss. Office managers can be quite humorless.
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