Mercury in evening gown

[mondu_the_fat]

Mercury in an evening gown for Josh Temple's "The Return".

[Spokavriel]

It could use a little more work in the face but I really like the use of light. Beautifull gown.

[KonokoHasano]

I really loved how that turned out, mondu. The hair and gown most of all.

[Sunshine Temple]

Wow very nice.

Coloration is really good. It's great how the end of her gown fades into the darkness

Good hair and pose to her. Her expresion hmm, she looks thoughtful or a bit bemused. She doesn't look sinister, which is good for the character.

Her right hand seems odd where it is. Maybe have it holding one of her fans?

[mondu_the_fat]

click!

"make the fan smaller! and close it! You don't fan yourself when you're wearing something like that!"

Having my sister look over my shoulder is a double-edged sword sometimes.

[Spokavriel]

"make the fan smaller! and close it! You don't fan yourself when you're wearing something like that!"

Having my sister look over my shoulder is a double-edged sword sometimes.

I have to admit your sister gives good advice. There's not much reason to hold it open unless she's planning to be indiscrete soon.

[Sunshine Temple]

"make the fan smaller! and close it! You don't fan yourself when you're wearing something like that!"

Having my sister look over my shoulder is a double-edged sword sometimes.

Sweet. Yeah she's right. That is the right size. And I suppose she wouldn't fan herself dressed like that.

Of course it is a battle fan, but she's looking good and having a drink, not fighting.

And it does look obviously like a fan.

Do like how her position is changed slightly.

Very good work.

[DCG]

Thats great mondu.
You covered the look from the chapter.