True Origins

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Postby Lenneth » Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:47 am

Chapter 1 is finaly up on fanfiction.net
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Re: True Origins

Postby Lenneth » Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:06 am

Guess who is back?

Updates to come soon (if all goes well.)
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Re: True Origins

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:58 am

Excellent to hear.

This is the best kind of thread rezing.
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Re: True Origins

Postby Lenneth » Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:20 pm

Sunshine wrote:Excellent to hear.

This is the best kind of thread rezing.


Yep. :mrgreen:
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Re: True Origins

Postby Lenneth » Mon Dec 06, 2010 1:41 pm

Ok, Latest Updates of the Prologue and Chapter 1 are up, Chapter 2 in the works.

Please Read and Review
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Re: True Origins

Postby Spokavriel » Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:10 pm

Got a link? Things might have changed a bit in the 4 years since the thread went dormant.
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Re: True Origins

Postby Lenneth » Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:24 pm

Spokavriel wrote: Got a link? Things might have changed a bit in the 4 years since the thread went dormant.


*coughs* erm, try page 1 of this topic.....
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Re: True Origins

Postby Spokavriel » Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:33 pm

I asked because I wasn't sure and its the link that changes if you alter your author handle. http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1054260/ the one with the User Number is the one that isn't suppose to change.
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Re: True Origins

Postby Lenneth » Mon Dec 06, 2010 2:39 pm

Spokavriel wrote: I asked because I wasn't sure and its the link that changes if you alter your author handle. http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1054260/ the one with the User Number is the one that isn't suppose to change.


oh, that, should still be the same.

the chapter 1 update isn't up there yet though.

in the 4 years since the thread went dormant.


jeez, hard to believe it has been 4 years.... :shock:
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Re: True Origins

Postby Lenneth » Mon May 23, 2011 1:53 am

Work got busy, sorry for my absence...

Got some comments on ff.net and could use some input from my friends here.

Most seemed to request that i reformat the story so that each characters dialogue is in a separate paragraph, I'm honestly not sure if its a good idea or not so i could yous your (everyones) input.

Thanks! ^_^
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Re: True Origins

Postby Spokavriel » Mon May 23, 2011 8:20 am

When most authors write character dialog and there are two speaking parts in the same paragraph, the same character is saying it.

So when there are multiple comments from multiple people in the same paragraph it can be disorienting.
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