Voices of the Revival - Ranma/Nanoha/SM Crossover

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Postby Pale Wolf » Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:47 pm

Alrighty.
Anyone have any corrections before I post it to FFNet? Anything you want to have addressed?
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Postby Pale Wolf » Fri Jul 28, 2006 4:55 pm

Okay then.
Posted, to FF.Net.
No major edits, so feel free to ignore this.
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Postby Adyen » Sat Jul 29, 2006 4:56 am

Pale Wolf wrote:Hm... Thing is, I had other plans for Silver Millenium technology/magic that wouldn't really fit the crystal...
Meh. Okay then! It is now a Lost Logia power well, like the jewel seeds!
Which means Usagi isn't AAA anymore, at least not without her rock.

Well, in a way, by the end of the series, the Crystal was pretty much a part of Usagi, so there isn't much of a difference anymore...
Honestly, it seems that Nanoha is one of those combat geniuses that comes once every Ranma when it comes to magical combat. The fact that she pulls all those attacks in RH's Ex form should prove that.
Anyways, funstuff! I'll be watching for more Nanoha/SM/Ranma good-stuff from now on!
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Postby Pale Wolf » Sat Jul 29, 2006 12:59 pm

Well, in a way, by the end of the series, the Crystal was pretty much a part of Usagi, so there isn't much of a difference anymore...

True enough. And it doesn't really matter that much anyway. I just like to be a perfectionist and have everything accounted for. Iceberg theory and all that.
Honestly, it seems that Nanoha is one of those combat geniuses that comes once every Ranma when it comes to magical combat. The fact that she pulls all those attacks in RH's Ex form should prove that.

Yep, she's damn good. Of course, I've gotten the vibe that unlike such individuals as Fate and Signum, she doesn't actively enjoy fighting - she takes it seriously, uses it to accomplish her objectives when necessary, and has a freaky rate of skill development and power level, but doesn't seem the type to fight in her spare time. Versus Fate and Signum, 'Let's beat the hell out of each other lots and lots' as the start of a beautiful friendship ;)
Anyways, funstuff! I'll be watching for more Nanoha/SM/Ranma good-stuff from now on!

Roger that. Do my best not to disappoint.
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Postby DCG » Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:50 pm

Will kasumi make a uniform for ranma so she can be a proper Magical girl like the rest?
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Postby Pale Wolf » Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:52 pm

Kasumi, no.
Will it happen, somehow or another? Yes.
Ranma's gonna have three magical girl outfits, poor fool ;)
He might have something or another for his male form, but I've got pretty much no ideas for that one just yet.
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Postby MC80a Liberty » Sat Jul 29, 2006 10:14 pm

Pale Wolf wrote:Ranma's gonna have three magical girl outfits, poor fool ;)
Three? I'd assume that there's probably a barrier jacket and a sailor fuku but another one (or two)? Ouch.
Pale Wolf wrote:Posted, to FF.Net.

I find it oddly amusing that your first reviewer called you a "brave and true man" for writing this.:D
This is one of the most interesting new fics though, nice to see something new from you.
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Postby Pale Wolf » Sat Jul 29, 2006 10:24 pm

Three? I'd assume that there's probably a barrier jacket and a sailor fuku but another one (or two)? Ouch.

A barrier jacket can be in the form of a sailor fuku ;)
One was his own design.
And the third is his own fault for focusing on a joke his enemy made.
I find it oddly amusing that you're first reviewer called you a "brave and true man" for writing this.

I made note of that very same fact in my reply to him/her.
This is one of the most interesting new fics though, nice to see something new from you.

Nice to be writing something new. Thank yas.
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Postby DCG » Sun Jul 30, 2006 2:48 am

Wolf, Hows you PC problem working out?
We got an RP starting up again and could use a good player as yourself
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Postby Pale Wolf » Sun Jul 30, 2006 3:26 am

My computer's great. I just can't seem to log into IRC - I posted a thread on that in Site Suggestions. Everything else is going good, although I lost all my Crystal Tokyo RPG stuff.
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Postby Rei-chan » Thu Aug 03, 2006 10:11 am

Well seems I am a bit late to comment on this, but since I didn't quite spot in on my troll through FF I just caught it here. Good story Pale, I really look forward to seeing more of this. I also like your idea of magic=ki, since that seems to make sense in my opinion. No complaints other than the Nanoha cast didn't get much 'screen' time so to speak in this chapter. Keep it rolling.
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Postby Pale Wolf » Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:33 pm

No complaints other than the Nanoha cast didn't get much 'screen' time so to speak in this chapter.

That's my main complaint too :cry:
Problem is, they don't really get started on doing much till chapter two, and it'll be a few more chapters down the line before they actually cross with the others. So basically, they're doing normal life, which is my weakest point.
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Postby Rei-chan » Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:51 pm

Ah well, I am sure you can pull it off Pale. Don't try to rush the crossing because this is already good and looks to be going up from there.
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Postby Saedin Casoria » Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:26 am

X_x What? I'd never even GONE to this place until you drew my attention to it, of course I'd make a guess.
Oh, yeah, and greetings >_> This fic has drawn my attention to this board, go me.
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Postby Pale Wolf » Mon Aug 07, 2006 1:37 am

Heh. I've recruited another to our den of madness. So saying that, I take no responsibility for any harm that may befall you upon your entrance herein, to your body or your sanity. 8)
Post an intro thread!
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