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Postby Zwzn » Wed Apr 26, 2006 12:07 am

Dark Magic wrote:Also the fact that Ranma already had a bad tolerance towards alchol. Ranma is really going to be messed up when he wakes up.
Ranma seems to me to be able to hold his liquor well to me. Every time he is shown drunk he seems to me to have been exposed to large amount in a very short amount of time.
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Postby Nukem » Wed Apr 26, 2006 1:21 am

Dragon Man wrote:What if she orders one of the others to shut everybody up and Saturn interprets this as "Silence everything!" ?????

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Postby Rei-chan » Wed Apr 26, 2006 9:07 am

Actually Zwzn he is shown to have quite a low tolerance in the story about the school play of Romeo and Juliette. I don't even think he had drank a whole bottle before being pretty much plastered. For that matter I don't recall any other time Ranma actually drank any alchohol.
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Postby Vasey » Wed Apr 26, 2006 10:44 am

Raleigh wrote:Actually Zwzn he is shown to have quite a low tolerance in the story about the school play of Romeo and Juliette. I don't even think he had drank a whole bottle before being pretty much plastered. For that matter I don't recall any other time Ranma actually drank any alchohol.

To be fair, Kuno did pour most of a bottle of sake down Ranma's throat in a few seconds. That's a fair amount of booze for someone as unlikely to have ever touched the stuff before as Ranma.
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Postby DBHay » Wed Apr 26, 2006 2:43 pm

Omake:
Ranma/Serenity wakes up in her position on Setsuna's lap, clutches a leg and screams, "My leg! I can't feel my leg!!"
Setsuna, now painfully awake squints down and replies, "That's my leg you twit!."
(With thanks to Billy Connolly)
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Postby Dragon Man » Wed Apr 26, 2006 2:52 pm

DBHay wrote:Omake:
Ranma/Serenity wakes up in her position on Setsuna's lap, clutches a leg and screams, "My leg! I can't feel my leg!!"
Setsuna, now painfully awake squints down and replies, "That's my leg you twit!."
(With thanks to Billy Connolly)
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Postby Zwzn » Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:12 pm

Vasey wrote:
Raleigh wrote:Actually Zwzn he is shown to have quite a low tolerance in the story about the school play of Romeo and Juliette. I don't even think he had drank a whole bottle before being pretty much plastered. For that matter I don't recall any other time Ranma actually drank any alchohol.

To be fair, Kuno did pour most of a bottle of sake down Ranma's throat in a few seconds. That's a fair amount of booze for someone as unlikely to have ever touched the stuff before as Ranma.
Sake or is it saki is strong stuff from what I hear. Ranma drank a large bottle of the stuff, and was still alive, able to fight, and think fairly clearly. He also seemed to get it out of his system fast.
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Postby Dragon Man » Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:14 pm

Zwzn wrote:To be fair, Kuno did pour most of a bottle of sake down Ranma's throat in a few seconds. That's a fair amount of booze for someone as unlikely to have ever touched the stuff before as Ranma.
Sake or is it saki is strong stuff from what I hear. Ranma drank a large bottle of the stuff, and was still alive, able to fight, and think fairly clearly. He also seemed to get it out of his system fast.[/quote]
That's probably because he's in such good shape and due to his body being acustomed to flushing his system out after Akane cooks anything but her curry so it can be back to full power quickly in case Ryoga breaks down the wall howling for a fight.
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Postby WG_Writer » Wed Apr 26, 2006 9:23 pm

ranger5 wrote:Yeah. But you gotta wonder what Imperial Intelligence (or whatever it's called --and I doubt it's still Imperial Intelligence as that harks back to pre-WWII ambitions) thinks about all of this. Respected Samurai clans supporting Serenity (wow) How'd you like that dropped on your desk on a fine Monday morning (g) I suspect that the're keeping some kind of eye on the "supernatural" events in Juuban and the "inhuman" martial artists of Nerima. (Hmmmm not that's got my juices running)
Come on. If most countries keep an eye on the "normal" crackpots they've gotta be doing something in this area.

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Postby migele » Fri May 19, 2006 7:48 am

a few slight spelling mistakes and forgotten words I think.
All in all very good.
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Postby AscendedWarrior » Fri May 19, 2006 7:57 am

... She ordered them to party... well I can only wait for the rest of the insanity to reveal itself 8)
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Postby Innortal » Fri May 19, 2006 8:00 am

“Mmmmuuuhhg…” The red headed figure on the floor grumbled, causing Setsuna to look down at her feet. The girl rolled into a slightly more comfortable postion, prompting her best friend to nudge her with a bare foot.

I think you mean silver-haired.
Other than that, a very good addition to the story, and looking for further development.
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Postby Nukem » Fri May 19, 2006 8:14 am

*imagines Minako trying to get the last drops out of the bottle*
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Postby Dragon Man » Fri May 19, 2006 2:04 pm

Man, I love seeing Setsuna get drunk because she's usually so calm and collected. I bet Hotaru shifted to her adult form in an attempt to keep on drinking or to reduce the effect the alchohol had on her smaller body.
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