Dumbledork wrote:Cool. I really love the story and it's definitely one of the best Ranma lemon stories I read since it has a really interesting plot. Now Will Ranma complete the collection? There's still one of the girls left out.
Oh yes, Ranma will get the trifecta, though that won't be until the chapter after this one. This would be the point where the fecal-matter strikes the oscillating rotational device, and the subsequent fallout from that.
Also, my writing process can suck sometimes. TLDR: I'll write scenes based on various daydreams and then fluff the stuff around it, adding more details here-and-there where I think it's necessary, or when I look at it with a 'writers eye' and say, "Needs a better explanation there, a little trimming here..."
The issues come when I get a brainwave/scene idea, and a way to make a story better through "Show, Don't Tell." and it requires me to re-vamp an earlier chapter, which is what's gonna happen before I put up Chapter 4
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Had an idea for how to exposit "Why Ranma is in Beverly Hills" and realized that I never said who was the villain that originally brought Britney to Nerima. Did some research on TS Villains, found Myrna Beesbottom, and everything flowed from there rather nicely...plus, being able to write some of the most whacked-out lines and have them make sense in the context of a story is so much FUN!
Anyway, the introduction to chapter 1 is gonna get a re-vamp before I put up Chapter 4, which is ALMOST done, as soon as I can 'fluff' the ending up to personal standards.