FTP is a bit wonky.
So chapter will be in message for the time being.
Nevermind. Stendec came in and fixed my issue right away.
So the chapter can be read here.
Sunshine wrote:Shame. I did try to make it readable to someone who hadn't read Dresden Files.
One of my prereaders hasn't read those books and I use him as a gauge.
And I figured by having the Return setting and only handful of characters from the Dresden Files would also have helped.
Maybe it did help, but not enough.
Dang. Unfortunate that.
[I did try to have, in this example, things be a bit more dynamic given the elements from the DF verse were limited
[and focused on Harry and his relation with the Fae
Still very interesting point
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