Crimson Hunter

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Crimson Hunter

Postby Konsaki » Sun Dec 22, 2013 3:12 am

I just want to preface this with a quick A/N: I'm been trying to work out a Ranma/One Piece crossover in my head over the past few weeks. I've got alot of the big ideas ironed out but no planned 'end state' yet, so I'm just writing in the hopes that this all 'clicks' in my head. If you want a basic breakdown of what I'm planning, just open the spoiler below. If you have any ideas or comments on where to take this, let me know.

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Basically, Ranma will be reborn into the One Piece world, growing up in Foosha village via Makino and 'Red Haired' Shanks. Ranma'll grow up interacting with Luffy, Ace and Garp, acting like an older sister to Luffy and Ace. Once reaching late teens, Ranma will go out to become a great bounty hunter to protect the world without submitting to the iron fist of the marines. I plan on having her being seperate from Luffy and Ace except for some random encounters outside of Luffy's normal story-line. This work would focus more on Ranma (and her partner, backup, crew, rival depending on what I roll with) hunting down bounty-heads who are legitimately bad people.


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Cerulean blue eyes looked unblinking at the scene set before them. On the wet, muddy earth two young women lay unmoving even as the fake rain fell down about them as if the sunlit sky was crying for those who could not. Even as these eyes looked on, their owner let out a soft sigh; observing how one of the girls cradled the other protectively in her arms.

"It wasn't supposed to happen like this..."

Hearing the intruding voice, the eyes flicked away for just an instant; enough to register the girl with sky-blue hair tied back in a long ponytail leaning on a wooden oar nearby. Silence between the pair reigned absolute, sound holding no sway in the otherworldly stillness. Then, after what felt like an eternity, it was broken once more by a soft voice, the drive and utter need of a favorable answer filling each word, "Did I make it? Is she...?"

Even without looking away towards the pink kimono clad girl, the owner of those cerulean eyes could feel the soft smile filled with sorrow directed towards her.

"You saved her..." The girl quiet answer came slowly, filled with equal amount sadness and admiration. "She'll live because of your heroism, Ranma."

Silence once again took sway as the moments passed in the stillness as the fake rain stopped falling, sunbeams flaring out and walking over the two girls below. Though her eyes could see it, she failed to hear the mob of martial artists rushing to check on the two still forms. Somehow knowing she couldn't affect anything below, the red haired young woman just floated there as the two entwined forms were separated and inspected for signs of life.

Letting out another breathless sigh, she closed his eyes, unable to bear the sight of her father cradling her lifeless body. It was too late; the sight of Genma silently screaming to the heavens, anguish stressing every fibrous muscle in his face, was burned into her mind as perfect if it were a photograph. It was small blessing that she couldn't hear anything from the world of the living, if only so she wouldn't have her father's screams of agony burned into her memories...

"It wasn't supposed to happen like this... I'm so sorry..."

Taking a deep breath to try and calm her nerves, the crimson haired martial artist turned her body away from the events happening in the lands of the living. Only once she was fully turned towards the otherworldly girl floating with her in the darkening sky did Ranma open her cerulean eyes once more.

One corner of her lips quirked up into a sardonic grin as Ranma shook her head slightly. "Doesn't matter now. All that matters is she's alive. Don't care what happens to me." To most people, the last statement would have been a pure lie, but Ranma had already made her peace by making a deal with the kami; her life for Akane's. She might have lost her life in the deal, but in the grand scheme of things; she won what mattered most to her.

"So, I'm guessing your here to take me away." Ranma bluntly stated more than asked, a wry hint of a smile on her lips.

Still holding a sad smile, having witnessed so many sacrifices in the name of love before, the girl held out a hand towards the black clad martial artist while nodding slowly. "You can call me Botan and, yes, I'm your grim reaper, Ranma Saotome."

Still sporting the wry twist of her lips, the scarlet haired girl shook her head once ruefully. "Never of expected a cute 'grim reaper' to lead me into the afterlife..."

Botan couldn't help but give a slight laugh and a hint of a true smile at that admittance. "You're not the first to admit that, but thanks." Looking up into the beams of light filtering through the cloudy sky, the reaper set the oar floating beside her before sitting back onto it. "Do you need more time?"

The question made the Saotome heir let out a breathless sigh. If she were to be honest with herself, she'd say yes, but there'd never really be enough time in the world. In the end, she glanced over her shoulder in a moment of selfishness; seeing her fiancée cradled in her rival and best friend's lap while Ryoga's yellow gi top brought her some modesty. Almost as if waiting for the moment of Ranma's observance, Akane violently coughed out a blast of water before drawing in a deep breath, shivering and curling up into a tight ball.

Running an arm across her eyes, Ranma turned away one last time, never again to see her father, friends or... love...

Taking one last deep breath to steady her nerves, the martial artist gave a quick jerky nod to the waiting reaper. "I'm ready."

With one last sad smile, Botan gently took hold of the recently deceased girls hand and guided her to sit with her on the long wooden oar. "It's time to go, now. You have someone who wants to talk with you."

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If the situation was any different, Ranma would have been awestruck by the fantastic geometries only possible in the lands of the dead where the physics of the living world didn't seem to exist. She just couldn't bring herself to care though, and the vast scenery of buildings, forests and other things just past by in a blurry mess in the corner of her vision. Through the entire trip, the red headed martial artist kept her eyes firmly locked on the pink kimono of her otherworldly guide.

Eventually, like life it seemed, all things come to an end, and the pair dismounted the mystical ferryman's oar to stand before a grand marble covered palace that seemed to run from horizon to horizon.

Trying to take in the entirety of it all, Ranma whispered out in awe, " It's huge..."

Giggling slightly behind a pink kimono sleeve, the light blue haired took a moment to enjoy the bit of personality shining through the funk. "It is pretty big, isn't it?"

A quick bob of the martial artist's head in the affirmative was quickly followed by the question, "Who owns this place?"

"That would be King Koenma, ruler of Reikai." Botan replied with a warm smile and a beckoning wave of her hand, the other holding the oar they arrived with. Walking into the open portal to the estate, the perky grim reaper stated, "In fact, he's the reason we're here; you have a meeting with him."

Blinking at that surprising information, Ranma quickly caught up with the other girl to incredulously ask, "What's the King of the Underworld want with me?!"

Botan just shrugged slightly, at a loss herself, "I don't know for sure and even if I did, it's for him to say, not me." Flashing a comforting smile and placing her hand on the black shirted redhead's arm, she added, "Don't worry, everything will pull through alright; I'm sure of it."

"But I'm just a martial artist; I mean, I'm a damn good one, but..." Ranma started to respond back before a loud, gravelly voice broke in.

"Your late!"

Jerking her gaze from Botan to the conversation crasher, Ranma stepped back and brought her arms in reflex. She blinked and relaxed an instant later once she realized the two meter tall blue oni wasn't yelling at her but towards Botan. Still, Ranma was kinda surprised to see a true stereotypical, one horned, tiger striped loincloth wearing oni in the palace of the Underworld's king.

Botan just stood her ground to the oni, yelling back, "How can we be late, George?! This shouldn't have happened in the first place and I got her here as fast as I could!"

Putting a hand to the large bald spot on the top of his head to rub it, the oni now identified as George glanced away from the irate reaper to the freshly reaped soul. "Look, I know, but there's a V.I.P. up there waiting too and Koenma's been in one of those moods and..." He gave the reaper a pleading look. "Just, please, hurry up. Please?"

"Fine, fine." The blue haired grim reaper replied with an annoyed air, muttering under her breath, "So much for the tour and the mood." Letting out a sigh, she waved a hand towards her charge, "Come on, Ranma. Let's get to King Koenma's office."

"Ah, okay." Ranma automatically replied, with more than a little confusion with the situation flowing through her voice.

After a quick trip through the inner workings of the palace, passing by uncountable other oni running around with stacks of paper or furiously typing away on typewriters, the pair arrived at a grand pair of gold color doors... and a familiar blue oni standing before it, tapping his fingers on his crossed arms in annoyance.

"How'd you get here before us?" Ranma asked, glancing back to the long hallway and staircase they had previously traversed to get to this point.

"I used the elevator." George succinctly replied, pointing to said device not twenty meters from their current position.

A short embarrassed laughter escaped the pink kimono clad young woman along with a short, "Oops."

Letting out a suffered sigh, George just stepped to the side and jerked a thumb over his shoulder towards the office doors. "Just hope he takes this 'Oops' better than the last one. I think he's still stuck in Section 27."

Ranma had no idea what Section 27 was but she saw the obviously fake smile plastered on Botan's face and heard the girl's forced dismissal, "I'm sure it's just fine."

Moving over to the door, she placed a hand on the handle and pulled the door open a crack. The next instant, her hair was blown straight back as a deafening voice roared, "Botan! Get in here! Now!"

"Just fine... right..." George muttered to himself as he walked away, twisting a finger in a ear to regain full hearing out of it.

"Come on, Ranma. Don't want to keep King Koenma waiting." Botan directed with obviously false cheer as he ponytail stayed in its blasted back position.

Ranma just blinked at the situation as presented before following the grim reaper guide into the office, wondering what the guy who could do that would look like.

She definitely wasn't expecting the blue clad toddler grinding his teeth on a pacifier sitting in a tall backed chair behind a huge desk filled with stacks of paper. Her questioning suspicions were proved true once Botan approached the desk with deference to say, "Hello, King Koenma."

"Don't 'Hello' me, Botan." The child looking King of the Underworld tersely replied to his subordinate, slamming his small hands on the disproportionately huge desk while standing up in his chair. "I expected you back here ages ago! You've kept a very important person waiting and, more importantly, you've kept me waiting!"

As if flipping a switch, Botan went from subservient to defiant with a crossing of her kimono clad arms, "Hey! It's not like I knew you wanted us back immediately! I also didn't know you had a V.I.P. waiting either."

A moment passed as one of Koenma's eyes twitched slightly before he took a breath, "What matters is you're here now and you've brought Ranma Saotome with you." With that being said, the young looking king bought his full attention to bare on the subject of the meeting. "And now we can get down to the business of deciding your future fate."

Blinking at that new bit of information, Ranma scratched at her cheek with a finger. "Ah, I'm honored and all, I guess, but why see to me personally? I mean, I'm pretty sure you have something better to do..."

Clasping his small hands before him on the desk, Koenma nodded in agreement while stating, "Normally, I'd agree; I do have more pressing matters to attend to." Pointing to the redhead standing before him, he then added, "Right now, though, that's not the case. The fact of the matter is, your death shouldn't have happened and that's led us to this situation."

Furrowing her brow, Ranma cocked her head slightly before asking, "What do you mean 'I shouldn't of died'? I had freaking bird-boy blasting me with fireballs and wrecking the entire mountain!"

"Yes, you did." Koenma easily agreed, while waving a hand away dismissively. "But before we get to that, I need to invite our guest to join us." Reaching to the side, the small king pressed a button on an intercom box sitting on his desk.

"Yes, King Koenma?" George's voice answered through the device.

"Please invite our guest in."

"On it, sir!"

Moments later, a side door to the office opened outward showing the blue oni who quickly stepped to the side with a bowing wave. Ranma quirked her head slightly at the woman who entered, feeling... something tickling the back of her mind, like she should know the woman but kept drawing a blank.

Seeing this, the platinum haired woman smiled coyly with a small welcoming wave of her hand, placing the other on her violet clad hip. "Hello there, Ranma. It's been a while."

Hearing that, Ranma's brow scrunched up even more as the martial artist was sure she would have remembered meeting a bombshell wearing a memorable risqué purple dress with blue triangle tattoos on her face. "Ah... sorry? Do I know you?"

The woman pouted for a moment before pounding a fist down into an open palm. "Oh! That's right, I didn't look like this back then! This should help." Saying that, she waved her hand to the side and a ghostly image appeared in the air, showing what could have been the woman's grandmother in a modest deep purple kimono. "I don't normally like to take this form, but sometimes you have to do what you have to do."

"Oh, hey! That's the old lady who helped me out with..." Ranma spouted out, figuring out where she remembered the image from before flicking her gaze back to the one who conjured it. "That was you? How..."

"Goddess Urd, Second Class, Catagory Limited at your service." Urd broke in with a grin and flourishing bow.

"I remember now, you helped me out with the Neko-ken! Thanks!" Ranma picked up where she left off, smiling her thanks out.

"No problem, kiddo. Just I've been keeping an eye on you for a long while and that was just one of the ways I could help out." The goddess replied with a grin but showing an obvious ego boost from the praise.

"Ahem." Koenma cut in with a fake cough, gaining the attention back. "Sorry to interrupt the reunion, but the matter at hand?"

"You need to learn to relax, Ko-chan." Urd cooed out with a smirk towards the child like ruler.

The blue clad administrator of the dead just slammed down a stamp on a paper placed before him and then indicated the rest of the reams of paper he had yet to get through. Ranma just glanced towards Botan who was standing silently off to the side, getting a nervous smile and a shrug from the grim reaper girl.

Letting of a short theatrical sigh, Urd shook her head, her long platinum blonde hair waving behind her. "Fine, fine. I'll get on with it." Turning back towards Ranma, she composed herself while saying, "As you've probably been told already, you shouldn't be dead right now."

"So I've been told. Just haven't let me know why, yet." Ranma responded, crossing her arms in mild irritation.

"Well, how do I explain this..." Urd mused while tapping her chin in thought, while Koenma resumed his administrative stamping in the background. "It's like this; there's a master plan, of sorts, which governs the flow of things in the universe. The thing is, it's not absolute and changes slightly over time, allowing for free will to mean something."

Seeing Ranma nod in understanding, Urd continued, cupping an elbow in hand while gesturing with her free hand. "Now, most of these changes are relatively minor in the grand scheme of things. Like, 'do I have katsu-don or ramen for lunch' or 'should I walk or take my bike to school today'. They change the 'how' things happen but usually things work their way back in line of the plan without too much hassle."

"Okay, I get all that, but how does it affect me?" Ranma asked, suspecting where this was going but unsure where exactly she went 'off plan'.

"Things went off track when you didn't throw your fiancée into the fire blast." Koenma bluntly answered, pointing towards the martial artist with the stamp he was just using.

"She would'a died! Hell, she barely made it as it is!" Ranma furiously yelled back at the child king.

Picking up a different piece of paper to read from it, Koenma clinically stated, "Throwing Akane into the blaze would have allowed you to defeat Saffron with one last attack, preventing the extra four minutes of battle which happened after your decision. Additionally, she would have been saved by your next technique usage, reducing her recovery time to one day's rest instead of the current two weeks. Finally, you wouldn't be dead."

Placing the paper back down on the desk, Koenma noticed the stunned redheaded girl before him, standing there with her jaw hanging at the realization.

Urd shot the young administrator a scathing glare as she moved over to envelope the stunned girl with a comforting arm. Glancing down, she gently lifted the girl's chin till they looked eye to eye. "Blunt and uncaring... but, unfortunately, he's telling the truth, kiddo." Urd's violet eyes showed worlds of sorrow at the situation but her lips held a small comforting smile as she continued to softly say, "I know it sounds horrible, but there's a silver lining here because of your selfless sacrifice."

"You can send me back?" Ranma whispered hopefully, cerulean eyes full of pleading hope.

Instead of answering, Urd turned her gaze towards the stoic youngster king.

Shaking his head forlornly, Koenma replied in the negative, "I'm sorry, but resurrection isn't an option here. Unfortunately, we've hit our limit and can't afford another for around..." He trailed off, picking up yet another piece of parchment from his desk. "Around fifty-seven years and one hundred sixty-four days."

"So, if I can't... what happens now?" Ranma asked shoulders drooped in defeat.

Tapping another document on his desk, the blue uniformed king answered, "As it is, your karma is relatively balanced between positive and negative values, though leaning towards positive overall. Normally, with this value, you'd probably spend a few decades working for me to up your positive karma before moving on to your heaven or reincarnation into your next life."

"But, due to the current situation, I was able to pull some strings and help you out a little." Urd triumphantly stated, cutting off Koenma.

"So you can't bring me back to life, but you can help me?" Ranma brought up, her confusion showing through in voice and curl of an eyebrow.

That curbed some of Urd's enthusiasm but she nodded anyways. "Well, yes. You see, even though this wasn't supposed to turn out like this, it has. So all I can really do is offer you a choice you wouldn't normally get." Raising her free hand, she ticked off the two options by raising her fingers as she stated, "One: you pass on to be with your ancestors until such a time you decide to reincarnate anew. Two: you choose rebirth to live a new life as yourself, keeping your memories and personality mostly the same; regaining them over time through your new childhood."

"Just those two? Aren't they pretty much the same thing?" Ranma asked, honestly hoping for more than that, considering they were pretty close together as options go.

"Just those two." Urd parroted back with a nod before adding, "Just keep in mind, normal reincarnation washes away almost all the memories and personality of your last life. So, keeping what makes you 'you' into the next life is an extremely rare thing."

"Indeed, this offer is quite generous, all things considered." Koenma chimed in, with a nod, drawing Ranma's glance.

Pondering her options, which were pretty bare at the moment, the deceased Saotome heir looked between the three beings present with her in the huge executive office. It was only a few moments before the redhead nodded, her decision made. "I'll take the second option."

At hearing this, a smile grew on Urds face as she gave the smaller female a small squeeze with her arm before releasing her and stepping back. "I'm glad we could do something to help you, Ranma."

Nodding in agreement, Koenma reached over, picked up yet another stamp and slammed it down on a document before him. Pushing the paper away from himself, Urd moved over and placed her hand upon it, causing a faint glow to flash from the parchment before backing away. Koenma glanced over it one more time before nodding, rolling up the document and holding it out to the deceased martial artist.

"This is your Authorization for Rebirth." Koenma explained as Ranma accepted it from his hands.

Glancing down towards the rolled up document, Ranma said, "Thanks... What do I do now?"

"Once you're ready, just open it and activate it by pressing your thumb to the seal." Koenma efficiently explained.

Before Ranma could consider doing just that, Urd stepped forward and put her hands on the shorter female's shoulders. With a serious look in her eyes, she spoke to the young martial artist. "Just remember one thing, Ranma; you might not have been the perfect hero in this life, but no one ever is. You've got a good heart, though, when it matters. Please don't lose that, okay?"

Looking up in the goddess's violet eyes, Ranma gave a small smile before nodding. "I'll remember... and thanks, Urd."

Smiling back down at the martial artist, Urd ruffled the girl's scarlet hair, bringing a squawk of indignation as the goddess stepped back and away.

Glancing between the three beings smiling towards her, Ranma gave a nod of finality. "Okay, then. I guess it's time to do this thing." Putting actions to words, she unrolled the document to see what looked like a legal document of some kind; 'Ranma Saotome', 'rebirth' and 'immediate authorization' being prominent items. At the base of the page, her blue eyes found a large red stamp marking Koenma's seal surrounded by a circle of glowing blue runes via Urd's work.

Looking up one last time, Ranma said, "See you guys around." Pressing her right thumb to the seal set off a quick flash from the parchment. Instantly, an explosion of light flared from beneath the redheaded martial artist, a column of solid white shooting from floor to ceiling. Just as soon as it came, it faded away, leaving empty space in its wake.

"Well, I guess that's it then... I hope she's happy in her next life." Botan mused, still smiling at the overall outcome of a bad situation.

"Yeah..." Urd agreed, though something was bothering her. "Though, I just can't shake the feeling that I'm forgetting something..."

Stamping yet another form, Koenma didn't even bother to look up at the pondering goddess. "That's because you forgot to turn her male before letting her activating the rebirth program."

"Son of a bitch!"

Spoiler'd the old opening just as a historical marker of where I tried to start. All the stuff below will be new.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Dumbledork » Sun Dec 22, 2013 8:38 am

Introduction s okay, but I can't really say anything until I read a bit more.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Sun Dec 22, 2013 10:22 am

Too many adjectives and adverbs. Calling Botan "Grim Reaper" the first time makes perfect sense. After that, "reaper" will do just fine. Same with "Cerulean blue" -- cerulean is a color, fine, but then "blue" is redundant. You could mix-and-match among "cerulean", "blue", and "sky-blue". Probably avoid "cerulean", that's not a common word, though that first use does define it somewhat.

The vocabulary you're using here is more appropriate for poetry than prose.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby LawOhki » Sun Dec 22, 2013 4:00 pm

Seen this setup a few times before so it's almost painfully predictable. Very start is a bit unclear what's going on, probably just needs a few names included. Throwing Urd in is completely unnecessary and unless there's some OMG stuff going on later just adds needless complication.

I'm less than a fan of One Piece and I'm not sure what Ranma's involvement would add to it. Or why Ranma needs to be a girl to add to the story. Seems like it'd be funner to have him be reincarnated as a boy and end up with a similar curse after thinking that he was safe.

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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby ckosacranoid » Mon Dec 23, 2013 12:15 am

hate to say this, but i have read this scene before in a different fic. it was a harry potter/ranma cross with elementrs of tenchi an sailor moon and slayers in the setup. ranma dies, goddess in the same office i think skuld in this case does the same thing and forgets to turn ranma back to male beforew being reborn.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby LawOhki » Mon Dec 23, 2013 8:12 am

ckosacranoid wrote:hate to say this, but i have read this scene before in a different fic. it was a harry potter/ranma cross with elementrs of tenchi an sailor moon and slayers in the setup. ranma dies, goddess in the same office i think skuld in this case does the same thing and forgets to turn ranma back to male beforew being reborn.

I think you mean this one and the rewrite I helped with. I'm also pretty sure I've seen a similar start in at least two other fics besides that. At this point the whole thing seems like padding. Describing the end of the fight then waking up in new life seems less clunky and expositional.

Maybe Ranma is living in the new world, is kind of weird or weirded out by having different memories showing up, goes to some local shaman character who spends about two seconds saying. "Oh they're from your past reincarnation." Which pretty much summarizes this whole section and makes it part of the story rather than a framing device.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby ijp92 » Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:40 am

based on my first impressions

Rarely used crossover: +1 point
Plan on keeping Ranma's adventures separate from Luffy's: +3 points
Ranma has a backstory with Luffy: -1 point
Ranma is stuck as a girl: -1 point (what else could I have reasonably expected?)
Ranma's curse doesn't carry over across reincarnations: +1 point
use of (multiple) other works characters as plot device: -2 points
said plot device characters were (reasonably) in character: +1 point
said reincarnating wasn't presented as a reward or punishment or (fantasy football) trade or etc.: +2 points

all in all +4 points

I agree that the reincarnation plot is cliche and could have been done better (maybe by just leaving it unexplained entirely?) but it could have been MUCH MUCH WORSE.
that said, I'm tentatively feeling pretty positive for your plans for Ranma's adventures in the world of One Piece. I have mixed feelings about making Ranma have a shared backstory with Luffy but it depends on how you handle it. I am very happy that Ranma will be having her own adventures because I always disliked it when a character is dropped in another universe to only be a tag along or only for the purpose of outshining the canon characters (winning their battles etc). Especially when those characters are likable.
And with so many adventures happening in One Piece verse anyway there's no excuse not to give Ranma her own.

so in short, I look forward to future updates.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Blackcat101 » Tue Dec 24, 2013 1:55 am

Genma is rare used in Ranma fics, just get rid of Urd as it makes no sense. Genma being distracted and too busy to remember to change Ranma gender first works the same.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Konsaki » Thu Dec 26, 2013 4:19 pm

First off; thanks for all the comments you've all provided! I really appreciate the feedback.

Overall, based off your comments and my own rereading, I've decided to scrap this opening and rework from a different angle; most likely using something similar to LawOhki's suggestion. I'm still interested in running with the same overall idea for the story, though.

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I'll work on the 'too many descriptors' thing. Rereading it, I did add way too many but it might have been a symptom of needing to get all this creative junk out of my head.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Vahn » Thu Dec 26, 2013 5:23 pm

I like it, of course that's just my taste, writing appears ot be good as is the story flow. It's too soon base on this little bit we see but should be intgraduallyg.

I would however suggest for Ranma to retain all of his memory from birth instead of gradually regaining it. More funny situation that way , if you do the gradual remembrance then to me personally it would feel to original and wouldn't quite feel like Ranma anymore. In a sense Ranma would feel like a watered down version of his and herself. I personally like the being reincarnated as a girl and like someone say gain that devil fruit that turn into a boy.

Of course that is just my humble opinion , but your baby your idea, I'll follow it.:)
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Konsaki » Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:08 am

Okay, got enough of a new start to begin posting again. This new beginning is taking Lawra's idea of just jumping to the reincarnation and going from there. At the start, Ranma's 6 yrs old and just got a blast of past-life memories. Through the rest of the first chapter, I'll be stepping forward in time to give snapshots of important events and Ranma's development. My plan is to have the canon Ranma personality temper'd by the fact that she's had a second childhood to grow up with.

Stealing another idea from Lawra, I've been working on this in a Goggle Doc and letting people post comments. Here's the link to it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UGT ... sp=sharing

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“Ow! My head!” The young redheaded girl cried out, jerking up to a seated position, both of her hands grasping the sides of it. She stayed like that while lightly rocking back and forth, her eyes clenched shut to block out the world as her head throbbed with the beating of her slowly calming heart. After a few minutes of breathing, the pain eased away to a dull throb deep in the core of her brain, still noticeable but manageable enough to risk opening her eyes to the world once more.

Blinking her bright blue eyes to take in the pale moonglow, Ranma looked down at her bed… Wait, she didn’t have a bed… But, she always had for as long as she could remember. Why would she sleep on a futon instead… What was a futon, anyways? A mattress you sleep on the floor. That’s silly, no it’s… “Ow!”

Thoughts cleared Ranma’s head once more as the pain flared again, though it cleared away slightly faster than before. She tried to think of… what she was thinking before but… couldn’t remember exactly.

Cracking open an eyelid to peer out into the darkness again, she slowly gained confidence as the pain stayed that annoying dull throb it was before when… Turning her head, she looked over to the open window to her room, the soft sounds of the ocean’s rolling waves wafting in with the night air. Something about the rhythmic sounds of the waves never seemed to fail at calming her. Yeah, she’d always enjoyed being by the sea, especially camping on the beach with her… her…

Her tiny hands massaged her scalp as the pain slowly built, making her give up on the thought as her eyes teared up. “My head hurts.” She whined out, disturbing the calm night quiet once more. Something was wrong but every time she tried to think about it, the hurting got worse and worse.

‘Mama will help.’ Ranma finally decided, crawling over to the edge of the bed and carefully climbing down, trying not to fall. “Cold!” She whimpered, fumbling with getting the slippers on her feet while dancing on the cool wood floor of her bedroom. Finally safe from the cold night floor, the redhead shuffled towards the door, wrapping her pale green pinwheel pajama clad arms around herself form warmth against the coolness of the night.

Reaching the door, she reached up and pulled on the handle to open it. Some byplay in the back of her mind happened, about why the door was so large but she’d always had to reach way up to the handle; the dull ache rolling forward again. One thought kept her moving down the barely lit hallway, ‘Mama.’

She didn’t even have to reach up to this handle, her mama’s door was already slightly ajar, letting Ranma push it open with just a little effort. ‘I’ve gotten weaker, no I’m not. I’m smaller, no I’m a big girl now. I’m a guy, no I’m a girl.’ The pain flared once more. “Ow! Mama! Mama!”

The figure in the large bed rolled about, a slim arm reaching out to swipe at before finally pulling on the lamp’s chain. A slight click and the room beheld a half asleep woman sitting up in the bed, her long black hair flared around her shoulders as she blinked her bleary onyx eyes. “Baby? What’s wrong?” She asked, seeing the young girl holding her head, halfway between the doorway and her bed.

“Mama, my head hurts!” Ranma exclaimed, the dam breaking as the girl broke down into tears.

Throwing the sheets, the mother quickly but calmly enveloped the girl in a comforting hug, softly saying, “There, there, baby. It’ll be all right.” Feeling her daughter wrap her tiny arms around her neck, she shifted her grip and gently lifted the child up. Turning around, she gently laid them both into the bed she had just left, pulling the still warm covers back over them both. Even as her daughter cried, she just sighed slightly as she lovingly stroked the long strands of crimson hair. Softly, she started humming out a sailor’s lullaby that’d had always helped her baby drift off to sleep in the past, all the while thinking, ‘This is going to be one of those nights...’

Unfortunately for both mother and child, it was.

oO0Oo

The slight creaking of the main door caught Makino’s attention, her dark brown eyes flicking up from where she was wiping down the bar. Seeing the grey haired man step into her tavern, her lips quirked upward into a slight smile. “Good afternoon, Mayor. How can I help you?”

“Good day to you as well.” The aging man responded with a wave, his other hand operating the cane he needed for his bum knee. As Woop Slap settled down at the nearest table to the bar, he watched the young woman as she brought out a glass mug of amber beer. He nodded his thanks, accepting the mug to take a small drink; wiping some errant foam off his greyed beard with his yellow shirt sleeve. “Actually, I’m here to see what’s on your mind.”

“What do you mean?”

Tapping the mug on the wooden table with a dull thud, Woop grunted. “Come now, Makino. It’s rather obvious that something’s been bothering you these past couple of weeks. We’ve all noticed, but gave you your space to work it out on your own. You know we’re always around to help out, tough.”

“I know, it’s just…” The woman sighed wearily while sliding into a seat across the table from the man in the red and white horizontally striped floppy hat. Glancing up, as if to look through the ceiling towards the room where her daughter was upstairs napping, she admitted, “She just turned six a few weeks ago and… and it’s like she’s changed overnight.”

Hearing the Foosha village mayor chuckle in mild amusement drew Makino’s attention once more. “That’s the thing about children, they always grow up so quickly.” He said with a grin before taking another drink of his beer. “You aren't the first parent to feel this way; believe me, I know. Two boys and a girl… and it never failed to surprise us. One day you’re changing dipers, the next…” He took another small sip, turning his head towards the ocean, “The next, they’re moving on to making their own family.”

“I guess…” Makino sighed, looking down at her clasped hands on the table before her. She looked up once more when she felt Woop Slap lean over and pat her on the arm comfortingly.

“Don’t worry, dear. Just enjoy your time with her while you can. Like I said, it goes by so quickly and you wonder where the time went.” Seeing the woman crack a small smile and nod, he smiled back, taking another sip. “So, then. What’s the little scamp been up to anyways that’s got you so fussed up?”

“Well…” the woman started as she stood, smoothing out her orange dress before heading back to the bar. “The headaches she kept complaining about were worrisome. I can understand jsut having them, but for three days…”

“I heard from Doc Brown.” Woop said with a nod. “Didn’t find anything wrong though, right?”

Makino bobbed her head in agreement, “Some sleep and painkillers, they finally went away.” She smiled as she finished pouring herself a mug of amber fluid before moving back to the table. “I was so relieved to see her up and about again.” She snorted a quick laugh. “And boy did she save up energy.”

Woop let out a barking laugh as well. “You’ve got that right! She’s been running around the village non stop this past week! Haven't heard her getting in any trouble, though.”

“There’s that, thankfully.” Makino agreed with a salute of her beer, followed by taking a drink.

After a few moments of silence passed between the two adults, the village mayor raise an eyebrow. “There’s something else, isn’t there?”

After a pointent pause, the young woman sighed. “She’s started asking me questions… about her father.”

Woop let out a low thoughtful hum at that, choosing to drink his beer instead of immediately saying anything. As far as he knew, only Makino and himself knew the full identity of young Ranma’s father. With the close knit community the village had, though, almost everyone knew the child’s father was an errant sailor who had passed through. Not that they held anything against mother or child, as these things happened, but gossip always had a way of guessing at the truth…

“I see…” He finally said, setting down his mug and taking off his hat to scratch at his grey hair. “And you told her?”

Makino just shook her head. “I just told her what everyone else knows; that he’s a sailor on a long voyage and I don’t know when he’s coming back.”

The elder just nodded in agreement. “Probably for the best.” Sighing, he put his hat back on while looking towards the door to the tavern. “Let’s just hope he doesn’t bring trouble with him if or when he does come back…”

oO0Oo

“Ow! Dammit!” Makino cursed under her breath, rubbing her now sore toes to ease the pain. Looking down, she cast a baleful glare over the small stack of training weights just outside the back door to the tavern. Looking up to find her daughter still in the small open area behind the building, she called out, “Ranma Ohmoto, get over here this instant!”

The combination of her full name use and angry mother voice caused the girl to immediately cease all her dance-like motions. Running up to woman who had crossed her arms across her chest and was giving her a stern look, the seven year old girl answered, “Yes, Mama?”

“Young lady, what did I tell you when I got them for your birthday?” The black haired woman inquired, pointing down at the pile of weights she’d just stubbed a toe against.

“Don’t throw them.”

“And?”

“Pick them up after I’m done?”

“And?” Makino asked a second time, more annoyance creeping into her voice.

Shirking down slightly, knowing exactly why her mother was angry, the long haired redheaded girl meekly answered, “Don’t put them where someone might trip?”

“That’s right, don’t put them where someone can trip over them.” Makino repeated, tapping the ground with a foot. “So why are they in front of the door where I almost fell over them?”

“Because I forgot…”

Seeing her daughter sufficiently cowed, Makino just rubbed the side of her head, over the bandana keeping her hair back, in exasperation. “Have you learned your lesson?” Seeing her daughter jerkily nod, she sighed with a small smile. “Alright, put them away and go get cleaned up; dinner is almost done.”

“Alright, Mama!” Ranma cried out, spirits lifting quickly at the thoughts of dinner after a workout.

Makino stepped to the side, allowing her daughter to pick up the hand weights and run inside. “Honestly, what am I going to do with that girl?” The amusement was easy to hear in her voice as she looked back out to the dusty empty area her daughter had just been dancing in. Scrunching her brow, she revised her last thought, ‘Not dancing… shadow fighting.’

Making her way back to the tavern’s grill, she pondered that thought. For the past few months, she’d known her daughter was working out quite a bit; running all over the village, now starting to lug a small backpack with her on the runs, and working out with those weights. While Makino had seen Ranma dancing around before, and even play fighting a couple times, she never thought about where she was learning it.

‘I guess that’s something I’ll just have to ask.’ The raven haired woman thought to herself, placing a couple fish fillets on the stovetop. Glancing over to the side of the bar where she kept her daily use stock of alcohol, she took a quick mental count and compared it to what she knew was in the cellar. “Hmm… might need to head to Edge Town in a couple days to restock.” She mused to herself, flipping the sizzling fish and then checking on the rice.

The minutes passed in comfortable silence, only Mikano’s humming and cooking food filling the tavern. Eventually, she heard the sounds of her daughter shooting down the stairs, causing her to call out, “No running on the stairs!”

“Yes, Mama.” Ranma called back, adjusting her pace for the last few steps. Coming out from the storage rooms behind the bar where the stairs were, Ranma inhaled the aroma of cooking food, “Smells good!”

Makino smiled at that, knowing the seven year old liked the smell of anything she cooked. “Well, it’s almost done, so go set a table, okay?”

“Alright!”

The mother felt pleased that she could trust her child to perform the task, Ranma long having gained the coordination to not drop anything. Those were some annoying and sometimes costly formative skills for her daughter to learn. Smiling the entire time, Makino finished putting the now cooked fish, rice and some pickled radish on two plates and set them up on the bartop. “Order up; table one!”

“Got it!” Ranma called back, smiling at playing waitress, though the large green t-shirt and brown shorts sort of ruined the scene a little.

Walking over with a couple glasses of water, she asked, “Why don’t you wear any of the dresses I bought you?”

“I do, Mama!” Ranma countered with a wide shake of her head, sending her crimson ponytail flailing. “I just like his better!”

Makino just rolled her eyes with a small grin at the response. Her daughter did, in fact, sometimes wear her dresses when helping in the bar or for special occasions, but did prefer the clothes like she was currently wearing. “You’re such a little tomboy.” She stated in a teasing tone, a warm smile on her lips.

“Uh huh.” The girl replied distractedly, cutting up a piece of the fish to place in her mouth. “Mmm! Good!”

The mother just rolled her eyes with a smile again, used to her daughter’s quirks. Things rarely came between her and food when she was hungry. Partaking of her own plate of food, the two person family ate in comfortable silence for a bit. Eventually, once her daughter had eaten her fill, Makino asked her, “So, what were you up to in the back yard?”

“Martial arts!” Ranma happily chirped back.

“Oh? And why were you doing ‘martial arts’?” Makino continued her questioning, quite interested in her daughter’s response.

“Cause it’s fun. Cause it makes me feel good. Cause I’m going to be the bestest there ever is!” The redhead counted off on her fingers, getting louder and more energetic as she ticked them off.

The raven haired woman continued to warmly smile, pleased with her daughter finding something fun and healthy to do in her free time. She did wonder where she learned it though, so she asked her child this.

“A nice man in white gave me a book!”

Makino blinked in surprise and suspicion at that answer. “A man in white? Book? Where were you when he gave you this?”

“Umm…” Ranma thought out loud, putting a finger to her lips. “I think the docks?” A second later she nodded in confirmation, “Yeah, at the docks! This big ship came in, in white and blue! I was watching the white and blue men all fighting each other but no one got hurt. I wanted to fight too, so I pretended I was like them on the dock. Then the big old man in white started talking to me. When I said I wanted to fight too, he did this big ‘Bwahahah’ laugh.” The girl motored on, giving as deep and loud imitation of the laugh as she could.

Makino couldn’t help but laugh a little at her daughter’s imitation antics of a grown man laughing. “And then that’s when he gave you this book on martial arts?”

“Uh huh!” Her daughter replied with a big nod, causing her ponytail to bob. “He yelled out at one of the fighting men and he ran over with it. Then the big man in white gave me it!”

“Did this ‘Big old man in white’ have a name?” Makino curiously asked, wondering exactly who this was.

“Uhh…” Ranma thought out loud again, only this time it took quite a bit longer, the strain showing on the seven year old’s face. Eventually, she sadly gave up with a shake of her head, “I don’t remember…”

“It’s okay, honey.” The mother reassured her daughter with a light pat on the arm, before requesting, “Can you go get this book while I clean the table?”

“Alright, Mama!” The girl happily nodded, mood quickly re-energizing as she ran towards the back room and upstairs.

“And no running on the stairs, young lady!”

“Yes, Mama!”

Makino barely had enough time to place the last dish into the sink when her daughter ran back up to her, carefully walking down the stairs to spare her her mother’s ire. “Here it is, Mama!” The child called out, excitedly holding the book out for her mother’s inspection.

Gently taking the large book from her daughters grasp, Makino blinked at the cover text. “Marine Basic Hand-to-Hand Training...” she mused out loud, flipping open the cover to read the first page. Quickly glancing through the text, she had to agree that it looked like a legitimate Marine book and, as she flipped through the pages, the bar owner could see text, diagrams and illustrations covering basic hand-to-hand combat lessons.

Closing the training manual, Makino let out a hum, deciding on if this really was a good thing for her daughter or not. Considering what the girl usually got into, it didn’t seem that bad and most likely was a good thing. Still, there was one final question to ask the girl. Pointing out a symbol on the cover, Makino asked her waiting daughter, “Was this symbol on the white and blue boat?”

Ranma stared at the blue thin double arch over the letters ‘MARINE’. After only a moment’s hesitation, she nodded quickly, “Yeah! It was, Mama! On the big sail! I remember now!”

Makino let out a small sigh of relief, handing the large book back to her waiting daughter. “Alright, then. Just don’t hurt yourself or anyone else, alright? You need to be careful with this.”

“Yes, Mama! I’ll be careful!” Ranma replied energetically with a bright smile, clutching the book to her body tightly.

“Alright, then.” The mother smiled back with a nod before waving her daughter towards the back room. “Now, go put that book back up in your room and then come help me with the dishes.”

“Aww, but Mama, I was gonna…” Ranma started up only to be cut off quickly by her mother.

“Don’t ‘Aww, Mama’ me, young lady. Whatever it is can wait until we finish the dishes, understood?”

“Yes, Mama.” The redhead answered, slightly dejected at her plans being sidetracked.

“Good, now hurry up and put that away.”

“Yes, Mama.” The daughter lowly answered, turning away to run back upstairs and put the book away.

“And no running on the stairs!”
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Dumbledork » Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:56 am

The father is Shanks right? Would explain the hair color. And Makino did get along with him. When exactly does this happen in the One Piece timeline?

Does Ranma only learn from the book or is the book merely a decoy to reassure Makino while she in fact retrains in Anything Goes as her memories are coming back?
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Konsaki » Sat Jan 04, 2014 8:09 am

The father is Shanks right? Would explain the hair color.

- Yes

When exactly does this happen in the One Piece timeline?

- Ranma's birth happens three years after Gol D. Roger dies, between Sanji and Zoro's births. This effectively puts Ranma at 2 years older than Luffy.

Does Ranma only learn from the book or is the book merely a decoy to reassure Makino while she in fact retrains in Anything Goes as her memories are coming back?

- Half and half. She uses the book as a start, knowing she wants to do martial arts but not not having anywhere to start from in this life. As time goes on, she redevelops her previous style.
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Konsaki » Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:57 am

It was a warm, muggy afternoon that found the black haired woman humming a jaunty sailing tune as she mopped the floor of her tavern. Considering the warmth of the day, she decided to follow her daughter’s style and wore a loose baby blue blouse and tan shorts, enjoying the slight breeze which made it’s way through the open windows and door. Using a rag tucked into her pocket, she dabbed at her brow, thankful she had used a yellow kerchief to tie her hair out of her face.

About the time that she was halfway through with the main dining area, there was a knock at the door which gained her attention. Seeing the mayor standing in the open doorway, she smiled and waved him in. “Good afternoon, Mayor! What brings you by today?”

“Good day to you as well, Makino.” Looking around the room, noticing the mop still in the woman’s hands, he asked, “Is there a place we can sit down? I’m afraid there’s some things we need to discuss.”

Scrunching her brow slightly at that statement, Makino leaned the mop against a nearby chair while indicating a table in an area she hadn’t gotten to yet. “That table’s fine, if you like. I have to ask though, is something wrong?”

Stepping inside the tavern door, Woop Slap coughed into a closed fist, not moving towards the indicated table yet. “Not ‘wrong’, per say, but a little… complicated. First, let me introduce you to my guests…”

At hearing that, Makino’s eyes flickered back to the open doorway, this time filled with a fedora wearing man in a matching grey suit, a katana strapped to his left hip. Before the man was a tiny boy of around four or five years of age, if Makino guessed correctly. The boy was wearing a cute little marine t-shirt and blue shorts.

Coughing once more into his hand, the floral shirt wearing mayor indicated the large man beside him. “Makino, this is Mr. Bogart and the young boy’s name is Luffy.”

“I see…” The young mother hesitantly replied. “Please, have a seat. Would you like anything to drink?”

“Water and some juice for the boy.” Mr Bogart curtly answered with a nod, his baritone voice clear but short.

“The usual pint for me, if you would.” Woop Slap put in his own request, gesturing to his two companions to follow him to the previously indicated table.

It took a minute for everyone to have everyone seated at the table, drinks in front of them. Mr Bogart had removed his fedora and placed it on a nearby table, revealing a rather handsome face but Makino noticed that his mouth was in a near perpetual neutral line. Between him and her, Luffy was carefully sipping his juice happily.

“So, I’m going to go out on a limb and guess that this has something to do with Luffy here.” Makino broke the ice, indicating the boy with a nod of her head.

“You’d be correct, Ma’am.” Bokart answered with a short nod, still having not touched the glass of water placed before him, arms loosely crossed over his chest.

“His grandfather can’t take care of him, due to his occupation, you see.” Woop added in when it seemed the suited man wasn’t going to elaborate. “I’ve been talking with the boy’s grandfather for about a little over a month now about this situation. It seems both his parents are unreachable and as such, he wanted to find a good foster home for his grandson.”

“Alright, I guess.” Makino said, finally seeing where this might be going. “I have to ask, though, who’s the grandfather?”

A moment passed where Bogart made no move to answer, so Woop once more picked up the slack. “Due to the nature of his occupation, it needs to remain as secret as possible for the boy’s safety. To be blunt, I put your name up as a safe place for the young Luffy and if you accept, we’ll tell you his full name and that of his grandfather.”

“If you do accept, you will be paid a monthly stipend to offset the costs of raising another child Ms. Ohmoto.” Bogart chipped in, slightly surprising the woman. “The requirements for this agreement to succeed are; three meals a day, medical attention and replaced clothing when required and a full room to himself in your establishment. Basic bedroom furnishings will be provided for this.”

Makino blinked at the relatively straightforward and methodical sales pitch the grey suited man gave. After she stayed silent for a few moments, Woop added his own explanation. “I’m sorry to ask this of you but I know you have a spare room and he’s around Ranma’s age so they should get along.” Taking a sip of his beer, he nodded towards the boy. “And believe me when I say this, caring for two children isn’t that much more difficult than one.”

Thinking it over for a few more moments, the woman sighed and shook her head. “If it’s that important, I guess I’ll have to explain everything to Ranma to make sure she knows what happening.”

“Thank you, Makino.” The village mayor stated with a warm smile and a nod. “I know the boy’s in good hands and his grandfather will greatly appreciate it.”

“Speaking of his grandfather, who is he?” Makino asked, interest showing in her voice as she leaned forward.

“Vice Admiral Monkey D. Garp.” Mr. Bogart stated flatly, reaching into his coat to pull out a stuffed envelope and placed it on the table. “As per our agreement, this is the stipend for the first month. The rest will arrive via monthly mail.”

“Vice Admiral Garp!?” Makino parroted in shock, realising immediately the significance of the name. “He’s trusting me to take care of his grandson!? Oh my…”

“Don’t worry too much about it. Just make sure not to spread it about; remember that it’s secret for a reason.” Woop reassured and warned the woman in the same breath.

Nodding slightly, the black haired woman looked towards the young boy, who was just finishing up his mug of juice. “You’re going to be staying here with me and my daughter, Luffy. How do you feel about that?”

Putting the mug down with both hands, Luffy looked at his new foster mother with wide eyes. Sitting silent for a moment, he finally said, “I’m hungry!”

That got a quick laugh out of two of the three adults, Bogart sitting stoically as if the boy had said nothing at all. A few moments after, however, he reached back to grab his fedora and place it back atop his head; shadows once more enveloping his eyes from the outside world. “With our buisness concluded, I must be off to report back to the Vice Admiral.” He soundly stated, raising up from his chair, leaving the still untouched water on the table.

Woop just nodded, waving off the business only attitude the plain clothed marine had. “Have a safe journey and give Garp my regards.” All he got back was a silent nod, as Bogart silently bid farewell to the village mayor and the tavern owner. Standing up himself, Mayor Woop told Makino, “I’ll head back to coordinate the delivery of the furniture right now, if that’s okay with you.”

Nodding slightly, Makino let out a sigh while glancing towards the small black haired boy. “Thanks… I hope I can handle what I’m getting into.”

“You’ll do fine.” The aging mayor stated with confidence with knowing smile. “Just let me know if you need any help, anytime.” With that, the mayor left, his cane tapping on the hardwood floors as he made his exit.

It was much to Makino’s relief that after an explanation to her daughter of the situation, albit a rather long one, that Ranma didn’t seem to have any issues with the boy moving in. In fact, she seemed interested in having a little brother and quickly took him by the hand, running him around the town to show him the sights. In fact, after a couple of weeks, it seemed like Luffy had been a part of their lives the entire time. The next few months were relatively smooth sailings, which didn’t bother Makino at all.

It lasted all the way up until the sea brought the next bout of trouble to her doorstep…
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Re: Crimson Hunter

Postby Konsaki » Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:52 pm

A pair of hard rubber sandals slapped down on the docks as their owner leaped down from the side of the ship, not bothering with waiting for the gang plank to be lowered. As his fine black coat finished draping around him like a cloak, he took a deep breath of island air and the smell of the familiar village.

“You could have waited, Captain.” A large man with a black ponytail called down, a grin toying on his lips as he looked down at the straw hat his captain wore.

“It’s almost like he has somewhere to be.” The ship’s sniper, wearing a loud bandana with YASSOP over his forehead, quipped back to the first mate with a slight elbow tap.

“More like someone.” Yet a third voice pitched in, coming from a rather rotund man in a white and red vertically striped shirt.

Seeing their captain tilt his head to look at his closest mates only to silently give a wide grin, the three broke out in barks of laughter. The red haired man just continued grinning as he walked down the pier away from his ship, trusting his officers to run things while he had one extremely important person to see.

His sandaled feet carried him straight down the main street from the docks. A few of the villagers watched him curiously and greeted him along the way. He was always happy to shoot a grin and a wave back, but never wavered in his pace. Walking past all the food stalls and shops to stand before the one place that mattered to him in this coastal town; Party’s Bar.

Taking a moment there, standing in the sun, he looked up at the fading sign with his shining brown eyes. Feeling the needed moment had passed, he stepped up onto the patio and pushed open the main door to the tavern, causing the chime attached to it to tinkle softly. Scanning the empty room, he saw that the place hadn’t really changed since the last time he was here. Just like he left it.

“Just a moment!”

Hearing those words, that voice, caused his breath to hitch in his chest. Locking his eyes on the door to the back rooms and the stairs that led up to the bedrooms, he waited silently, waiting for the first sight of his target. He didn’t wait long before Makino stepped out holding a bowl of radishes, wearing an orange dress with black sleeves, hair still held back with a yellow kerchief.

“It’s been a while, Makino.” He told her, giving his best roguish grins for the woman who held his eye.

Hearing that voice, seeing that man, Makino stopped dead in her tracks. Her eyes shot wide while her mouth tried to say something but nothing seemed to escape. The bowl fell forgotten from her hands, clanging to the floor to spill the radishes about. Slowly, hesitantly, she asked, “Shanks? Is that really you?”

“Yeah, it’s me.” The red haired captain smoothly replied, still holding that same suave grin and arms wide.

A moment passed before she took a step, then two. The next thing Shanks knew, she was flying at him full tilt across the room. He never saw the right hook coming till it connected with his jaw.

“Ow! What the hell was that for!?” Shanks demanded from his crumpled position on the floor, the woman he’d come to see looming over him.

Standing there with her hands on her hips, a baleful glare causing the captain to shrink away from the woman. “That was for taking eight years to come back!” Makino growled out. Before Shanks could even think of saying anything in his defense, the woman threw herself down at the prone captain, grabbing the very same face she’d just punched with both hands to lay eight years of missed time into a kiss that stole his breath away.

After what seemed like forever and a day, they broke apart to gasp for air. “And what was that for?” Shanks breathlessly asked after a few moments passed of them just holding each other.

“That was for coming back.” Makino whispered up before kissing the man one more time, though with much less intensity but with no loss of feeling.

“I need to come back more often.” The red haired captain mused dazedly once their lips separated again. Finally noticing their position on the floor, he chuckled, “Not that I mind being like this, but you want to take this upstairs?”

Makino flushed at the insinuating suggestion, wanting to so much but knowing some things always come first. Separating from her once upon a time lover, she stood up and smoothed out her dress. Smiling down at the now seated captain, she suggested, “Let’s go to the bar. We’ve got a lot to talk about.”

“Sure, I’m always up for a good drink with a beautiful lady like you.” Shanks suavely stated as he pushed himself up to standing and started to follow the woman over to sit on a barstool.

“Oh? So you’ve got some other women?” Mikano asked coyly, eyeing the man as she reached for a bottle under the bar.

“What? No! I mean, sort of, but it was with everyone else! I mean…” Shanks stammered, the entirety of his suave attitude flying out the window.

Mikano laughed at the reaction her teasing had caused, though she was reassured by said reaction that he was most likely faithful to her. Setting two small glasses on the bar, she quickly poured them both a shot of local whiskey.

Shanks recognized the significance of the whiskey as she poured the shots. Rum for happy partying, beer for relaxing, wine for romance, whiskey for receiving or forgetting big. Gulping, he looked directly into Makino’s azure eyes with his own earthen colored eyes. “Good news or bad?” He asked, wanting to prep himself either way.

“It all depends on how you look at it.” She replied cryptically with a lopsided grin. “The question is, does finding out you have a daughter count as good or bad news?”

The seconds passed in silence between the two, Shanks sitting there on the barstool stock still. Eventually, he blinked and shook himself like a dog shaking water off himself. Taking a deep breath, he looked the woman in the eyes once more and pointedly asked, “I have a daughter?”

“From that last wonderful night we had before you shipped out eight years ago.” Makino answered with a dreamy smile on her face, remembering that night quite well as well as the repercussions from it.

“I have a daughter…” Shanks whispered, looking around the tavern as to find her appearing out of thin air. Jerking his head back to what he now knew to be the mother of his child, a wide grin broke out on his face. “I have a daughter.” Shaking his head quickly, he corrected himself, “‘We’ have a daughter! That’s ‘great’ news! One that deserves a toast!” Snagging up one of the shot glasses full of whiskey, he lifted it up and clinked it with his lover’s glass, “To finding out you’re a father and share a child with the most wonderful woman in the world!”

Makino just giggled at that, feeling like she was back to being a teen again as they tapped the counter and threw the liquid back.

Savoring the feeling of the burn down his throat, Shanks coughed into a hand. Taking a deep breath, he took his straw hat off and placed it on the bar beside him. “Man, wait till I tell the guys I’m a dad! I mean, Yassop’s got a son himself, but…” Just at that thought, all the wind blew out of his emotional sails and he grabbed at his hair with both fists. “Shit, shit, shit! I’ve missed everything! I’m not a father, I’m just some random guy!”

Seeing the quick downward spiral her daughter’s father was falling into, Makino quickly interjected, “Be one for her now! You can’t make up for things you missed but you can be the father she hasn’t had since you’re here now.”

Shanks just shook his head, hands still in his fiery red hair. “Yassop at least knows his son’s name! Spent a couple years with him before he joined my crew. I mean, the only reason that we’re in East Blue is to recruit men for our next trip into the Grand Line! I made this stop specifically to see you and now I find I’ve have a daughter for the past seven years. I’m a shitty excuse for a man!”

Thinking quickly of a way to break him out of his funk, Makino spoke up, “Her name’s Ranma.” Seeing him raise his gaze to look at her, she smiled back at him as she continued describing their daughter. “She’s got the brightest red hair from you and she’s got my eyes. Ranma’s also a rambunctious tomboy, which I blame on you.” She joked with a smile.

“I don’t know, you got one hell of a right hook…” Shanks mused, rubbing his jaw where the fist had connected.

The blue eyed woman flushed in minor embarrassment, giving a quick glare to the man. Seeing him hold up his hands in surrender but laugh in amusement, Makino just rolled her eyes. “Speaking of right hooks, Ranma’s been training herself to fight over the past year. She says she’s going to be the best martial artist in the world.”

“It’s good to have dreams.” Shanks mused with a wistful grin. “I hope she makes it.”

Quirking her brow with a smile, Makino stated, “You know, her eighth birthday is coming up in early May.”

“Well, I guess I have eight years of presents to make up for.” The redheaded captain said with his own lopsided grin.

Sharing a quick laugh, Makino poured another round of shots for them both. Silently toasting each other, they downed the whiskey and just sat in comfortable companionship with each other. They were still sitting like this when they heard the sound of the back door open.

“Mama, I’m back!” A young girl’s voice called out of the back room.

“I’m up front, honey.”

Looking towards the same doorway that Makino had entered from, Shanks saw a young girl with crimson red hair tied back in a long braid walk in. The sweat and dirt made it quite obvious that she had been working out and rolling on the ground at some point; the black shirt and pants she wore showing dirt and grass stains from her recent activities.

Pinching the bridge of her nose at the sight of her daughter’s condition, she pointed upward with her free hand. “Go get cleaned up, Ranma. A ship just came in and we’re probably going to have a full house tonight.”

“Oh boy, will you ever.” Shanks confirmed, with a shake of his head. “We’ve been stuck on that ship for a couple weeks now. The men need to let off some steam or they’ll go crazy.”

Ranma blinked, as if finally realising the black coated man was sitting at the bar. “So you’re one of those pirates Luffy was yelling about?”

Shanks snorted derisively, pulling himself up to his full seated height in pride, “I’m not just ‘one of those pirates’, little missy! I’m their pirate captain!”

Ranma looked at the red haired man for a few seconds, as if evaluating him with her clear azure eyes. Turning her head away, she told her mother, “I’m going to go wash up, now.”

“Don’t take too long and put on your green dress when you’re done.” Makino ordered to the girl who was already on her way into the back room.

“Yes, Mama.” Ranma called back, the sounds of her footsteps going up the stairs easily heard by both of the adults.

Shanks just blinked in shock for a second, looking from the doorway back to the mother of his daughter. “Did our daughter just dismiss me as a pirate captain?”

Makino just shrugged silently before she poured the man another shot of whiskey. Something told her that he’d be going through a bit more before the night was through.
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