MILF 2

[Spokavriel]

I think Ranma-kasan is still a bit younger than Nodoka.

[Tuisto]

This is a very rough, spur-of-the-moment type of scene that I just thought up.

The karaoke bar was loud a smoky, filled with half-drunk and fully drunk patrons crooning away badly on several stages.
Two women that could've been sisters had just finished their set of "Hot Stuff".
Over the last few weeks the two had become good friends ever since they literally bumped into each other in the park one evening.
"Kampai!" the two said in unison as they downed their dishes of sake once they had returned to their table.

"Oh, Ranko, I can't think of the last time I had this much fun! Just to get out and... just be a woman for a night, oh kami how I've missed this!" Nodoka said as her cheeks took on more a pink hue from the strong alcohol.
Ranma, under her alias replied with a throaty giggle, "I hear you there! School right now is a total madhouse, and my ol' man has been harping on me, so just to get out a cut loose, oh we've both needed this. When I first saw you I knew you were on a path to a breakdown or somethin'."

Nodoka, who didn't know the actual name of the man Ranko had always just referred to as her "ol' man", just laughed a little sadly and said, "yeah, I've been in a rut ever since my husband walked out on me ten years ago, it wouldn't be so bad if I knew what happened to my little boy. Is there some other woman out there he calls 'mom'?"

'Ranko' snorted in derision, and said, "I'd doubt that, I've seen a lot of guys like how you describe your husband, he's a deadbeat and probably with an 'open fly, open bimbo' policy if you get my drift! As for your son, I can put some words out through the schools, if he's anywhere the school system will know!"

With glistening eyes Nodoka asked "you'd do that for me?"
"Sure what are friends for!"
"To Best Friends!" Nodoka said as the two women raised their sake dishes again, "Kampai!"

The two were just about to go see about another song set when a bishonen looking fellow approached Nodoka and introduced himself as Toji, Ranko smirked a bit drunkenly at how flustered Nodoka was with the man that was flirting with her.
"Oh... but I can't, I'm married... and it would be wrong to..." the man was begining to lose interest when Ranko helpfully said, but her husband walked out on her ten years ago. Nodoka shot Ranma such a look!
"Go on No-chan, he's a hottie and don't you deserve a little fun? You can sure as bet your husband hasn't abstained all these years, so go for it girl friend while the getting is good!"
Maybe it was the atmosphere of the club, maybe it was the alcohol or maybe it was just the encouraging of her new friend Ranko that Nodoka decided she was right. Nodoka DESERVED this, so with a smile she looped her arm around Toji's arm making sure to press her breast into him as he led them out of the club to find someplace more... private.

Ranko, who was in fact the older woman cursed form of Ranma, the aforementioned son of Nodoka, had unknowing of this relation just pushed his (her) mother into adultery for the first time in a decade, and all that was on her mind now was that she had lost her singing partner, but maybe she could follow Nodoka and find a different kind of partner for the evening.

[LawOhki]

Ranko.......

Why? Why not come up with some name that better fits someone older? It's not like that was the first name that Ranma came up with. (Yoiko) And Nodoka being a more traditional woman when it comes to female roles would need more incentive to go off with some guy who just showed up in a bar than him introducing himself.

[Spokavriel]

Kinda leaves a few questions.
1) Why is she going by Ranko?
2) How did the name Ranma get avoided?
3) How have they gotten out to hang out without the Tendo Dojo or any of the NWC regulars being an impediment?

[frice2000]

if he's anywhere the school system will know!"

'We'll' not will.

Nodoka asked "you'd do that for me?"

Think you need to capitalize the Y in 'You'd'. Also think you need to put a comma after asked but I am no means a grammar master so I may be wrong.

when Ranko helpfully said, but her husband walked out on her ten years ago. Nodoka shot Ranma such a look!

Hmm...well if you don't want to actually have her deliver the line maybe change it to then Ranko helpfully mentioned that her husband had abandoned her ten years ago. Nodoka glared angrily at her friend 'Ranko' in response.' That sounds a little better.

This is quite the entertaining snippet and it also makes me really anxious to see how you get to that point. Very nice scene!

[Tuisto]

Kinda leaves a few questions.
1) Why is she going by Ranko?
2) How did the name Ranma get avoided?
3) How have they gotten out to hang out without the Tendo Dojo or any of the NWC regulars being an impediment?

Don't know, this was just a scene-concept that popped into my brain. DIDN'T really think it through for nitpicking details.

Ranko.......

Why? Why not come up with some name that better fits someone older? It's not like that was the first name that Ranma came up with. (Yoiko) And Nodoka being a more traditional woman when it comes to female roles would need more incentive to go off with some guy who just showed up in a bar than him introducing himself.

I know.
this type of scene would need to be in the middle of the story with lots and LOTS of lead-up to it.

Do YOU have an alias you would prefer to see Ranma have?

[Spokavriel]

Maybe she should use Kitsune as the alias for her Adult form since actually acting the age of her form is just playing tricks on everyone around her.

[frice2000]

I blame this fic for almost getting a virus. Clicked on something that had "MILF" in the subject line thinking it was a story alert from FF.net and it ended up trying to give me a virus. Your fic is hazardous to my computers health via naming proxy!

[Spokavriel]

Frice there is a simple way to avoid that kind of mistake. Look at the originating E-Mail address every single time. Then no matter how deceptive the rest of it is you have a good idea of when something is not from a place you want to hear from.

[TerraBull]

I like this. Just adding comments.

One thing that may change things is, what will be Ranma's views on S.E.X.

The reason I ask is the change in appearance from the Spring to the Dojo. As a Older Woman, or looking like one, has She experienced such or just has a attitude?

Lol, I do not think Truancy Officers will bother this Woman, who is obviously past the age of Schooling.

Will they stay at the Dojo or elsewhere? The Spare room may not be appropriate while Ranma is in this mature form. I do not think Genma will treat her the same as his son.

Umm.. not sure about the Adultery angle as presented, but I was curious about how they met & the relationship, Drinking friends I can see, some cuddling/ comforting while drunk? Then maybe awaken awkwardly in the same bed, nude while one spoons the other?

Sorry, just have the thought of the 'Sleepover' happening, maybe some fashion/ health/ conditioning tips? on how the other has such a good figure?

Heh, yes, I even have the thought on the MILF Ranma ending up in the same bed with most of the girls, not even having sex, just holding them close to her chest so they can nap/ hear her heartbeat while she strokes their heads, maybe a soft crooning lullaby. Thus most of the young girls views becoming affected by such happening.

Ranma becoming used to that, not sleeping alone thus 'bed hopping'. Unless all the Tendo Sisters end up in the same bed, become used to sleeping with someone safe & 'motherly'.

Rambling.. now have thoughts that spankings will be given as discipline. Naughty images galore.

Name-wise? not sure except thinking on how some will refer to the MILF? Ms.? Mrs.?

Just thoughts, continue when you can.

[Spokavriel]

Thinking about the attitude on Sex aspect. Can't really be a mother without a non-virgin attitude on it.

That might also contribute to her being more likely to seek out companionship that disturbs Boy side Ranma.

[frice2000]

The thing I think you need to be careful with in regards to male companionship is that unless you make it clear that either: 1. Male Ranma doesn't mind this. 2. Male Ranma is disturbed by this but has made peace with it. 3. He has completely disassociated his female side with his male side.

If you don't do one of those or have him deal with it psychologically I expect after his adult form has bedded a man him breaking down totally. Really need to make the psychological effects on his normal male form clearer by the time you reach this point. Perhaps the curse has given him a female perspective that sticks him when he reverts to his male form that he can appreciate but will not act on. Otherwise he'd be a depressed nervous mess who would I think refuse to leave shelter in fear of cold water seeking him out and him bedding another male.

[Spokavriel]

I was thinking just a bit more maturity on the subject. When the guys aren't worthless it a really fun ride kinda attitude. At least in Female form. But Male Form still sees the mature outlook on it but when it gets around to flirting with guys in Akane's class or other guys he knows when he is a guy. Then it really gets to him.

[ckosacranoid]

Ii didn't comment before cause i did not think about it, but somewhere something was made about ranma's aolder form being a cougor....and that is was said she was 35.....i always thought that cougor range was something like 45 years + for that type of thing...but thats just what i thought.

why do i get this idea of reading this and the split personality like the story of the raving newfo of ranma who would bed anything just about for his female side. boy side was really freaked out by female side though.....just my thoughts.

[Spokavriel]

While that might be a common age range it really seems to mean a mature woman who seeks relationships with younger men. More than the next peer group younger. Guess it depends on where you look up your definition.