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Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:11 pmby Sunshine Temple
And the revision process continues.
This time with the 2nd book. Where things start to... well you'll see.
Right now just have the first two chapters up, but more will come.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Sun Feb 18, 2018 5:03 pmby Sunshine Temple
Hmm. Okay.
Since the Mercury stuff is happening really soon in this story. And given the mess that happened in the last thread. I am invoking Rule 1E1 and doing so /before/ things get out of hand.
Edit: User was formally warned and post was removed due to rule violation.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Sun Feb 18, 2018 9:18 pmby Sunshine Temple
Right. That's a violation of the rules. Formal warning. And posts deleted.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:24 pmby Sunshine Temple
And
chapter three is up!
Things are developing with both magical girl teams.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Mar 02, 2018 4:47 pmby Sunshine Temple
And now chapter four: Treacherous Conditions Ahead.
You can guess what that means....
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:46 pmby Sunshine Temple
And chapter 5 is now posted.
Mercury is being quite the busy villaness...
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Mar 16, 2018 6:56 pmby Sunshine Temple
And ch6 is up!
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Apr 06, 2018 7:19 pmby Sunshine Temple
And now the crossover One Shot with Trimatter is up!
Two Ranma's for the price of one!
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Apr 13, 2018 9:32 pmby Sunshine Temple
And now we have ch7.
And yes this is where we get Eve.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri Apr 20, 2018 10:20 pmby Sunshine Temple
Here's chapter 8.
Enjoy!
fic/BC_8.htm
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Sun Apr 29, 2018 7:21 pmby Sunshine Temple
And chapter 9 is up now.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri May 04, 2018 8:48 pmby Sunshine Temple
Chapter 10 is up.
It's the big fight at that Assembly of Man base.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Sat May 05, 2018 9:02 amby Ellen Kuhfeld
Good Morning, Sunshine!
All along, the revised version has been listed as "complete". It's a bit of a nitpick, but could you take that off until Book Two (Revised) is complete? I read complete stories differently than in-process ones.
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Sat May 05, 2018 12:26 pmby Sunshine Temple
Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:Good Morning, Sunshine!
All along, the revised version has been listed as "complete". It's a bit of a nitpick, but could you take that off until Book Two (Revised) is complete? I read complete stories differently than in-process ones.
Gah! Apologies about that.
Easy enough fix ^^;;
Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences
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Fri May 11, 2018 8:47 pmby Sunshine Temple
And now Ch 11 is up.