[R 1/2][SM] The Return ch33

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Re: [R 1/2][SM] The Return ch33

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Dec 28, 2014 9:19 pm

Scene has been written. I'm now editing the scene and the existing ones. I also sent drafts to prereaders.
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Re: [R 1/2][SM] The Return ch33

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Jan 25, 2015 12:22 pm

The revised chapter 33 is up now.

As per Ckosacranoid's suggestion I've added a scene that actually has the Senshi in it.

And due to size limitations I've split the chapter. The rest will form ch34 which will be (re)posted later.

fic/the_return_33.htm


Apologies again for the long delay in getting this up. The middle of January had some events that kept me from revising the new scene.
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