[R.5/SM] Windborne Ch4

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[R.5/SM] Windborne Ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Oct 18, 2014 6:03 pm

Here's the 4th chapter of Windborne.

Chapter 4 Wakeups: With and Without Regrets.

Now since I posted the last chapter in June the warning isn't as needed but.. Remember this is a fic where Ranma becomes queen of the fairies and is engaged to Tatewaki Kuno.
So that should give you an idea of what to expect.


Now in good news, the next chapter of Return will be released once I've gone over it again and this chapter is all posted to ff.net and such.

Edit: Added a link to some new fanart.
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Re: [R.5/SM] Windborne Ch4

Postby LunarAdept » Sun Oct 19, 2014 10:54 pm

Nice. Thanks for another chapter, I was waiting on this one. :D
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Re: [R.5/SM] Windborne Ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:58 pm

LunarAdept
Nice. Thanks for another chapter, I was waiting on this one. :D

[Thanks!

[Hope you had fun with Ranma's antics.

[Things are starting to heat up with the number of followers starting to take off.
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Re: [R.5/SM] Windborne Ch4

Postby LunarAdept » Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:40 pm

Lol I most certainly did! I find it more than hilarious that,
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regardless of how she knows that sweets get to her, she still can't help but keep getting them.
It's also fun to see her interactions with Kodachi. Though, it might just be me, but I can't say that I'm that impressed with Akane and her attitude towards everything and everyone. Don't mind me though, I just have a disliking of her in general. But yeah, Ranma's court is starting to take off! Although, her most recent one was certainly unexpected! Not even she herself saw it coming~ And yet, can you not call it poetic justice?
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Re: [R.5/SM] Windborne Ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Oct 20, 2014 6:44 pm

LunarAdept

Lol I most certainly did!

[Excellent. I do wonder if I have things get too...."sparkly"
[But this is a story where Ranma becomes a fairy queen.

I find it more than hilarious that,
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regardless of how she knows that sweets get to her, she still can't help but keep getting them.


[I know!
[There's an interesting mix here.
[Ranma is very vain, and egotistical; she is also very stubborn.
[She also has a notorious sweet tooth and likes indulging herself when she can.

[All traits she had as a human, but now as a fairy they're ramped up.
[Then add in that there's no fiscal limits to how she could indulge herself...

[(Something that Nabiki has noted.)

It's also fun to see her interactions with Kodachi.

[Kodachi's fun. She has some more fun in the next chapter.

Though, it might just be me, but I can't say that I'm that impressed with Akane and her attitude towards everything and everyone. Don't mind me though, I just have a disliking of her in general.

[Akane has the proverbial "straight man" role.
[And her own jealousy and egotism are working on her mind as well.

But yeah, Ranma's court is starting to take off! Although, her most recent one was certainly unexpected! Not even she herself saw it coming~ And yet, can you not call it poetic justice?

[It was certainly laid out with enough poetic irony ;p

[Yah her court's building and she's starting to "upgrade" the Kuno Estate.

[Thanks for commenting.
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