Strained Harmony ch4

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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Apr 13, 2014 10:57 am

Cheb

>>[ >>[... For one, Ami was very good at neutralizing massed minions.]]
And that's exactly the patch size this micro plot hole deserves :)

[Excellent! I'll upload the corrected

>>[Though I suppose they don't stick out as much.
In short it's the annoying reality of these names being non-native to us. I'm sure a Japanese speaker would not even notice.
>>[And there's if I'll swap out Misato's name in ch4
I think with this eyesore gone the illusion will effectively dispel.
Maybe it's because Misato is such a *rare* name? I, for example, only know one Misato, from NGE.

[True. I'm I think I'll change the name to Misaki

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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Spica75 » Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:00 pm

Cheb wrote:Maybe it's because Misato is such a *rare* name? I, for example, only know one Misato, from NGE.


I checked a few places, it´s not on any top 100 lists of names, but there´s about a hundred Misato (visible) on Facebook and one site says there´s around four thousand people with it as their ( used ) first name.

Found one artist, a speedskater and a splatter of other "public" Misato´s.

So, uncommon but not ultrarare.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Apr 13, 2014 2:06 pm

I wonder if switching to Misaki has the irony of it being a rarer name but a less noteworthy name.

Course I'm sure there's a Misaki in some anime that I'm just not thinking of.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Dumbledork » Sun Apr 13, 2014 4:33 pm

Sunshine wrote:I wonder if switching to Misaki has the irony of it being a rarer name but a less noteworthy name.

Course I'm sure there's a Misaki in some anime that I'm just not thinking of.


When I hear Misaki I immediately think of Taro Misaki from Captain Tsubasa.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Apr 13, 2014 4:47 pm

Dumbledork wrote:
When I hear Misaki I immediately think of Taro Misaki from Captain Tsubasa.


Heh. Well on the upside I wasn't thinking of that series.

And it's still not a name from NGE. So success!
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Spica75 » Mon Apr 14, 2014 7:54 am

Sunshine wrote:I wonder if switching to Misaki has the irony of it being a rarer name but a less noteworthy name.

Course I'm sure there's a Misaki in some anime that I'm just not thinking of.


Lots of Misaki´s. There´s even an anime using the name:
http://www.anime-planet.com/anime/diver ... chronicles ( 1st season is Divergence Eve, which is just another way of saying event horizon, the series is weird but 2nd season is actually good )

And of course there´s http://img1.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire4 ... 8_full.jpg from Railgun.

Anyway, i recalled that you could simply do this:
http://www.anime-planet.com/characters/all?name=misato 14
http://www.anime-planet.com/characters/all?name=misaki >90
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Apr 14, 2014 4:33 pm

Huh.

Well... there's an advantage that I'm not familiar with those, so it's not like made an overt reference.

And it still adresses Cheb's complaint of too many NGE references.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:28 pm

In Tenchi Muyo, Misaki Masaki Jurai is one of the two queens of Jurai, and mother of Ayeka and Sasami. She is a powerful martial artist.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch4

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:42 pm

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:In Tenchi Muyo, Misaki Masaki Jurai is one of the two queens of Jurai, and mother of Ayeka and Sasami. She is a powerful martial artist.


I have seen Tenchi Muyo. But that was years ago. SO there's that.
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