Strained Harmony ch5

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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby Cheb » Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:56 am

> Smiling, Ranma found Setsuna taking her hand again and pulling her to her heels. Smoothing out the layers, Ranma looks up and gives a happy squeal at seeing the front entrance of Green Mountain. As the redhead relished her sto

> The nanny's ears brightened.

> The green-haired women opened the


I think you'll really like the end

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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Aug 30, 2014 1:18 am

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> Smiling, Ranma found Setsuna taking her hand again and pulling her to her heels. Smoothing out the layers, Ranma looks up and gives a happy squeal at seeing the front entrance of Green Mountain. As the redhead relished her sto

[Ah there's the tense problems!

> The nanny's ears brightened.

> The green-haired women opened the

[Okay, got the changes.
[Thanks!

I think you'll really like the end

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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby Té Rowan » Sat Aug 30, 2014 4:26 pm

Smiling, Ranma found Setsuna taking her hand again and pulling her to her heels. Smoothing out the layers, Ranma looks up and gives a happy squeal at seeing the front entrance of Green Mountain. As the redhead relished her stomach's happy gurgle, Haruka closed the door behind the nanny and then gave her a hard rap.


And much as I want to hold Hotaru's pix in hand, art will have to do. I really do not think my imagination is sufficient to image Ranma in all that kit.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Aug 30, 2014 4:41 pm

Té Rowan

Smiling, Ranma found Setsuna taking her hand again and pulling her to her heels. Smoothing out the layers, Ranma looks up and gives a happy squeal at seeing the front entrance of Green Mountain. As the redhead relished her stomach's happy gurgle, Haruka closed the door behind the nanny and then gave her a hard rap.


[Whoopsie! Okay got the changes.

And much as I want to hold Hotaru's pix in hand, art will have to do. I really do not think my imagination is sufficient to image Ranma in all that kit.

[Oh my. Well I've got some fanart in the pipeline.
[Unfortunately the artist has been pulling some very long days so RL has gotten into the way.


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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby ckosacranoid » Sun Aug 31, 2014 11:07 pm

Ranma in that outfit wou.d be very cool to say the least for fanart though......add more vote for art peice.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Sep 01, 2014 8:38 pm

Are we talking about the getup at the start of the chapter or the end... or both?
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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby ckosacranoid » Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:37 pm

I would vote the end for sure, but we can hope for both can we? JUST a lot of detail for sure in the end peice screams to to surewhat all that looks like Iincluding the hair style ranma has taken on.
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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby HopeSeiketsu » Sun Sep 21, 2014 10:02 am

Well looks like I need to re:reread you story lols i think I miiight have missed your upload of chapter 4 :oops:
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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Sep 21, 2014 12:16 pm

Well fortunately ch4 is at the same link in the first post.

Or can be read here. fic/SH_ch4.htm

I think you'll enjoy it ;p
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Re: Strained Harmony ch5

Postby HopeSeiketsu » Sun Sep 21, 2014 2:55 pm

Well considering I read it on fanfiction.net last time I read it and it should be improved quite a bit I should hope so lols D$*#N MY SHORT ATTENTION SPAN must read atleast 1 chapter a day :o
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