Venus' Golden Armor

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Venus' Golden Armor

Postby J. St.C. Patrick » Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:46 am

Here is Venus in her golden armor as described in Chapter 17 of Sunshine Temple's The Return

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Postby Spokavriel » Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:54 am

She looks beautiful but one small catch. Didn't her gauntlets change so that she could feel the handle of her sword dirrectly in her hand?

It looks a little like there's metal in the palm of the hand holding the sword. Or is that just my fatigued imagination?
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Postby J. St.C. Patrick » Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:09 am

Spokavriel wrote: She looks beautiful but one small catch. Didn't her gauntlets change so that she could feel the handle of her sword dirrectly in her hand?

It looks a little like there's metal in the palm of the hand holding the sword. Or is that just my fatigued imagination?


I could be tricky and say this is just before her gloves change.

However. the palm was an oversight. Her sword hand fingers in this picture are flesh coloured - they just don't look it at this scale - I shrank the picture by quite a bit.

I'll fix it but will wait for other comments/suggestions before I post a corrected version
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Postby Dumbledork » Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:00 am

Loooks good to me.
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Postby lcpoketoon » Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:43 am

I'm not sure if it's just me or the longer skirt but i don't think her legs are right. They look too short for some reason. other then that I like the picture.
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Postby Spokavriel » Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:23 am

I think lcpoketoon has a good catch. The torso is ending near the low point of that decoration at the top of the skirt but that still leaves the length of the legs between the knees and hip a bit on the short side.

I like where the skirt ends on the legs So maybe it could be streached/morphed in Photoshop to let that area be longer and let the skirt hang a little more flat?
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Postby J. St.C. Patrick » Fri Jul 06, 2007 4:36 pm

Made a couple of changes to her skirt and legs.

I did fix her sword hand to show a bit of her palm, but it is now obscured by her skirt - but her fingers are still uncovered.

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Postby Dumbledork » Fri Jul 06, 2007 4:59 pm

There's a yellow splotch on the blade, near the hilt.
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Postby Spokavriel » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:02 pm

Dumbledork I think that's a reflection of the golden armor. The legs and skirt now look long enough but the stance is a little too open, still making her seem a little off. The fingers being bare for the tips helps allot. Thanks for that detail.
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Postby J. St.C. Patrick » Sun Jul 08, 2007 1:43 am

Following a comment from Sunshine here is a slightly modified version:

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