by bissek » Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:56 pm
I've just posted another revised version.
Oh, and Comartemis, in response to many of the comments on the Spacebattles thread, the reason I chose Rei and Makoto for the stupid action role is because they're the more temperamental members of the team. Ami isn't the kind of person to go for a preemptive strike, and Minako had met Fate and Nanoha and as a result didn't think that one was justified. Haruka and Michiru would have been even more plausible for Senshi likely to go for a preemptive strike against a perceived threat, but I haven't even decided if they're going to show up at all. Hotaru I have plans for, the presence of any other Outer outside of omakes is uncertain.
Rei and Makoto screwed up. That's indisputable. That doesn't mean that I'm going to use them as Butt Monkeys for the rest of the story. They will get the opportunity to redeem themselves, though I haven't worked out exactly how just yet.
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bissek on Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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