Daimakaicho Ranma , chap 7 in progress.

[lwf58]

Especially since "Tofu" is the doctor's first name, not his family name.

[Tuisto]

Especially since "Tofu" is the doctor's first name, not his family name.

It IS?!?!?
I thought Ono was his given name, not his surname... I'll fix that, and remember it for future reference.

[Akuma-sama]

Nice chapter... can't think of much more to say. Mostly, this post is covering up a brainfart I just did. Woot for the edit button.

[lwf58]

It IS?!?!?
I thought Ono was his given name, not his surname... I'll fix that, and remember it for future reference.

Yep. His family name is "Ono", like John Lennon's widow. His mother, who only appears in the anime, is named "Kin Ono".

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tofu_Ono

[PCHeintz72]

I was about to comment on the name in the FanFiction.NET copy, but noticed it is already posted here.

However, there was one other item I noticed.

"No Ki! But. but how'm I supposed ta fight?!" Ranma asked with some panic.

Hild closed her eyes and said in a soothing voice, "Yes your Ki is gone, replaced by Mana, don't worry you have time to learn, much as you learned to manipulate Ki into attacks, with time we'll teach you to use Mana." Hild's eyes then snapped open and addressed Ranma with a smile, "Does this help?"

I thought humans used Ki, gods used mana, and demons used pishogue?

EDIT1: Another inconsistancy, I think.

To illustrate his point Akihito pressed a remote control, and a moderately large TV slid up from concealment under the floor and came on. On it was a lively debate on DeutscheWelle News, the sound muted, of a blond anchorwoman speaking with a Japanese man as pictures of all the gathered Neriman's, save for Kasumi and Tofu, flicked by in the upper corner of the screen as words like "Murdererous liars" and "Traitors" scrolled by in the translated closed caption.

"As you can see. the entire world already knows; there's no stopping it now. most we can do is roll with it, and use it to our best advantage" Akihito said

The issue I have, is this becoming public kind of messes with the plan he stated would originally occur at the opening of this discussion, where he stated he would give Ranam a full honors funeral, and stated 'during' that event the evidence and knowledge would be present and them declared enemies of the state.

EDIT2: A minor word snafu:

Without warning a massive column of with descended into the courtyard along with many arcing bolts of purple lightning causing a deafening roar to sweep through.

'of with'? probably s/b 'of wind'

[Spokavriel]

Akane still holding P-chan/Ryoga just had her head cocked to the side,

There's a typo in here either the name ordering or her should be his. It seems like Akane is holding while Ryouga is cocking his head to the side. But you have her there. Rearranging it putting Akane after Ryouga with a comma like this {Still holding P-Chan/Ryouga, Akane just had her head cocked to the side,} could keep the actions as hers.

Without warning a massive column of with descended into the courtyard

Just taking out the of with would work here you mention wind earlier and it can be intuited.

This part is nice. I should have pointed out that Ono situation too. The Dr is Ono Tofu his mom is Ono Kin so after marriage they would be Ono's not Tofu's Ono Kasumi seems happy.

Oh boy people are commenting on parts I don't remember seeing time to re-read everything and find what I missed.