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Postby migele » Tue May 23, 2006 8:48 am

In german there is KAstanienrot and it means a dark red. A brownish red.
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Postby deathgeonous » Tue May 23, 2006 9:18 am

"Ok, Nodoka, meet your sort of grandaughter Usagi, Usagi, meet Nodoka your sort of grandmother. Now be a nice sacrifical lamb, while the rest of us RUN LIKE HELL!!! I'll see you in a few hours if you live!" (Ranma and the rest of the girls run away, making a bat escaping hell look slow.) "EEP!" Goes Usagi as the death crush hits.
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Postby Blitz » Tue May 23, 2006 11:14 am

Well obviously I think Usagi is about to use Chibi-Usa for her scapegoat. I mean I doubt Nodoka EVER imagined the possibilities of Great-Grandbabies ^^.
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Postby Dragon Man » Tue May 23, 2006 11:37 am

Blitz wrote:Well obviously I think Usagi is about to use Chibi-Usa for her scapegoat. I mean I doubt Nodoka EVER imagined the possibilities of Great-Grandbabies ^^.

She'd probably faint from delight. The only problem is getting hold of the Spore. And I doubt Nodoka will like Mamorou for all the times he broke Usagi's heart and how he's a pansy who throws roses. I loved the interaction with Nabiki, looks like the Ice Queen will be forced to not use the Furo for a while. But what about her daily coffe? That's warm... Nabiki will be forced to drink it cold or come to school as a zombie. And I think she deserves it for threatining the Senshi and their families.
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Postby Shadow Wolf » Tue May 23, 2006 12:08 pm

Sunshine wrote:"chestnut red hair"
phrasing of this is odd. as there are not red chestnuts

It's a fairly standard description of certain hair color, though. Hair colored like chestnuts generally falls into the range of hair color we describe as "red".
Remember, "red" hair isn't frequently not really red (I've seen a couple people with truly flame-red hair that's not from a bottle, but it's *damn* rare, and even that's rather orangish.)
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Postby Ozzallos » Tue May 23, 2006 2:15 pm

deathgeonous wrote:"Ok, Nodoka, meet your sort of grandaughter Usagi, Usagi, meet Nodoka your sort of grandmother. Now be a nice sacrifical lamb, while the rest of us RUN LIKE HELL!!! I'll see you in a few hours if you live!" (Ranma and the rest of the girls run away, making a bat escaping hell look slow.) "EEP!" Goes Usagi as the death crush hits.

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Dragon Man wrote:She'd probably faint from delight. The only problem is getting hold of the Spore.

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Postby Sunshine Temple » Tue May 23, 2006 4:23 pm

Ozzallos wrote:Oh, that won't be a problem...

Indeed. Though there's the question of what's become of the spore. Given what Serenity is like.
Hey Ozz, how annoyed was Chibi-Usagi at having to play the part of the Spore for all those years?
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Postby Screwball » Tue May 23, 2006 4:28 pm

Ozz, you are... well, I'll stop short of saying God (that's reserved for Him on Earth), but I'll spring for demi-god. Just don't let Nodoka hug Usagi into two different pieces. That might cause... problems. :D
And I doubt Nodoka will like Mamorou for all the times he broke Usagi's heart and how he's a pansy who throws roses.

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Postby Ozzallos » Tue May 23, 2006 5:14 pm

Sunshine wrote:Hey Ozz, how annoyed was Chibi-Usagi at having to play the part of the Spore for all those years?

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Postby Sunshine Temple » Tue May 23, 2006 5:19 pm

I supppose that's the best way.
Sailor Moon has far too much timetravel in it.
Though waying Usa-A was transformed into Usa-B... the whole timeline was changed too. And Usa-A is effectively destroyed (but so is her whole universe)
Kinda depressing.
Only closeness is that Usa-A happened to look rather like Usa-B when turned evil.
But since Usa did go back in time... Usa-A did have to exist.
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Postby deathgeonous » Tue May 23, 2006 7:00 pm

Thanks for the complemet Ozzallos. It's just what I saw.
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Postby b_omega » Wed May 24, 2006 12:36 am

Ozzallos wrote:
Sunshine wrote:Hey Ozz, how annoyed was Chibi-Usagi at having to play the part of the Spore for all those years?

Massive divergence in timeline. She'll barely even remember that person. Usa-A is born in a future with the great freeze and CT, having been sent back in time to Usagi's timeframe.
Enter Ranma Saotome/Queen Serenity reincarnated.
Big ice is prevented and Usa-B is born into not only a normalized world, but her grandmother's empire.

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Postby Sunshine Temple » Wed May 24, 2006 5:06 pm

b_omega wrote:"Execute order 66"
:lol: :lol: :lol:

Two things. Don't do nested quotes.
And Don't spam on the C&C board. Do it again and you'll get a ban
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Postby nuclear death frog » Wed May 24, 2006 6:28 pm

Sunshine wrote:Two things. Don't do nested quotes.

Ummm...what's the problem with them?
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Wed May 24, 2006 6:31 pm

nuclear death frog wrote:Ummm...what's the problem with them?

1) First this is the wrong place for them
2) also they get very bulky when they get like 4 entries deep
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