Hong Ranma

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Hong Ranma

Postby Kadunta » Mon May 30, 2011 2:43 pm

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A very quick sketch, a very quick colouring.
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Spokavriel » Mon May 30, 2011 3:11 pm

Nice image but it looks like her eyes are glazed. Shouldn't she have some pupils?
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Kadunta » Mon May 30, 2011 3:29 pm

Looks like I've been drawing all my characters without black pupils for years now.

I gave her black pupils. She looks... weird in my opinion, but maybe I've just grown accustomed to drawing 'Hyuugas'.

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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Spokavriel » Mon May 30, 2011 3:32 pm

The pupils are a bit large... What about drawing smaller black pupils inside the light pupil you had before?
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Kadunta » Mon May 30, 2011 4:10 pm

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that's the way I changed it first. And I definitely didn't like it. I suppose I'll have to add some more reflections to the eye to make it look better.
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Spokavriel » Mon May 30, 2011 4:20 pm

The images are going in the right direction. But yeah some reflections might help. The big black pupils were so empty it was like looking into a cave.
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Crescent Pulsar R » Mon May 30, 2011 7:34 pm

I just recently had a story idea where Hong Meiling was Ranma's mother. ;p

As for the eyes: have you tried dark blue pupils? You could also make the whole eye dark blue and add a bit of the current blue near the rim, where you think the light would be reflected.

I don't know what to make of the lips...
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Kadunta » Tue May 31, 2011 11:22 am

I tried adding some more white on her eyes, but that didn't do much good. I also did a simple all-black eye version.
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I suppose I should start drawing big eyes that have pupils and different kinds of mouths then.
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Re: Hong Ranma

Postby Spokavriel » Tue May 31, 2011 12:51 pm

I like the more white one. The all black reminds me of something from the movie Krull.
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