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Re: Ice Squared - Revision

FYI, I tossed the modifications I made to the SG1 universe to fit Sailor Moon and just chose mid SG1 somewhere for their crossing point. (The modifications would have required a ton of work to do well, and just weren't worth it.) I also had everyone but Teal'c and Jack busy elsewhere to minimize the...
by Lerris
Sun Mar 23, 2014 7:47 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Re: Ice Squared - Revision

I read/edited through 12, and right now the plan is to keep both main arcs, as I can invision how I intended them to come together. Also given it has been years since an update, I'm hesitant to make unecessary significant changes to what now is basically canon. That doesn't mean there won't yet be s...
by Lerris
Thu Mar 20, 2014 5:18 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Re: Ice Squared - Revision

I've read and edited through eleven and things seem doable at this point, but yes axing one or more series is on the table. I'm not sure whether SG1 is going to stay or go as I haven't reread/plotted it yet, but yes keeping forcus on core characters is always a consideration. One danger I have is th...
by Lerris
Wed Mar 19, 2014 10:01 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Re: Naruto/AMG crossover asking for C&C

I thought I'd take a wild stab at editing/polishing this in the hope that it would be useful. Minato knew better than to tempt fate, yet he was sure that no day could be worse than the day they had won the war with Iwa. There was so much death on that day. Every death then felt like a slice to his v...
by Lerris
Tue Mar 18, 2014 8:30 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Naruto/AMG crossover asking for C&C
Replies: 7
Views: 6870

Re: Ice Squared - Revision

Thanks for the info. I guessed that was likely the case, as I didn't get any new chapter alerts either, but it is still useful information. 7,8, and 9 are revised and posted. The changes are not extensive. At this point I'm probably going to hold off putting off updates until I basically get a handl...
by Lerris
Sun Mar 16, 2014 8:46 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Re: Ice Squared - Revision

1-6 edited and uploaded. I'll likely do a few more tomorrow, and if things go really well might even be through the old material by next weekend. The main thing is if anyone ever does a read through let me know if I left anything big there. I only do a minimal check on the ff version, as I just edit...
by Lerris
Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:41 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Re: Ice Squared - Revision

I created an icon. It is not quite as detailed as suggested, but perhaps it will do. Chapters one and two have been edited and reposted. I'm not too concerned with spelling/grammer. Anything not caught on my reread at this point is not that important, to me anyway. If anyone sees plot holes/areas I ...
by Lerris
Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:15 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Ice Squared - Revision

I have an old story at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2658126/1/Ice-Squared that a few people expressed an interest in me finishing... I plan on trying to do so, before moving on to something else. To do this, I have to reread it of course. I also intend to do at least minor cleanup during it, but maj...
by Lerris
Fri Mar 14, 2014 6:40 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Ice Squared - Revision
Replies: 36
Views: 22785

Re: Hinata Sedai

Once again, the remaining chapters are just whatever I had left. I thought I made that clear. It was purely for those who have already started, should they dare to proceed regardless. You see inconsistencies, because originally Naruto didn't come back and because I no longer had the motivation to sp...
by Lerris
Fri Mar 14, 2014 5:47 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609

Re: Hinata Sedai

Remaining chapters posted for anyone interested. Note they are my original drafts for the most part, and that is unlikely to change, at least in the near term. If by chance anyone has an interest in taking over the story just let me know.
by Lerris
Thu Mar 13, 2014 11:20 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609

Re: Hinata Sedai

Another chapter is up. I did have one flame on it already that I removed (no actual criticism, other than not doing what they wanted). It seems someone didn't like that I didn't promise to remove Sakura. Sakura fits with the story as is, so nope, not going to spend lots of time on a story few people...
by Lerris
Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:48 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609

Re: Hinata Sedai

Well after reading all five of the chapters I found it to be interesting. I find my major complaints with it to currently center around how nice and neat that everything is being swept away. That is a valid point. Mostly the reason is to avoid covering canon events. That story has been written and ...
by Lerris
Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:20 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609

Re: Hinata Sedai

FYI, I only have one character from Gundam Seed, and she isn't one of the mech pilots. She was brought in for her vision of the future and being one of the more interesting characters from the series. As far as the others, I'd have to reread, and resist the temptation to edit/revise everything (whic...
by Lerris
Wed Mar 12, 2014 10:03 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609

Re: Hinata Sedai

A part of me was tempted to try to find a way to merge where Destiny and Minako's story are and then go forward. The problem is, I don't have a good way to do it. I suppose I could bring Minako's Story to a close prior to the events in Destiny. That would also require going back and at least adding ...
by Lerris
Wed Mar 12, 2014 9:44 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609

Re: Hinata Sedai

FYI, There are now 5 chapters up if anyone cares to comment here or there.

If anyone has a suggestion for a different story to work on, well I'd certainly consider it...
by Lerris
Wed Mar 12, 2014 6:50 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Hinata Sedai
Replies: 19
Views: 15609
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