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Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Fifteen [R/SM cross]

I thought this chapter was great. This really felt like a chapter that was ripped right out of the manga, with all the crazy cover ups and ironic lies.
by yakumo fujii
Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:17 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Fifteen [R/SM cross]
Replies: 8
Views: 5131

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Fourteen [R/SM cross]

I thought this was a really good chapter.

I would have liked to see Genma's reaction to Ranma's incredible victory, given his previous pessimism. Cologne similarly didn't seem to have any reaction to it which seems a bit odd to me.
by yakumo fujii
Sat Oct 03, 2009 7:09 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Fourteen [R/SM cross]
Replies: 5
Views: 3861

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Thirteen [R/SM cross]

Oh, don't misunderstand--it's definitely way, way too early for things to work out between them. If I called my fic "The Dark Lords of Nerima", and yet only had them be fighting the Senshi for barely more than two chapters before it all got settled and copacetic, I'd be guilty of rather u...
by yakumo fujii
Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:20 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Thirteen [R/SM cross]
Replies: 17
Views: 9575

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Thirteen [R/SM cross]

How do you figure? Most of the examples I can recall off the top of my head (Nephrite, the Black Moon sisters, Nehellina, Galaxia, etc.) would seem to imply that the Senshi would be willing to forgive many different attacks on their lives the instant someone shows even a hint that they might be abl...
by yakumo fujii
Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:05 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Thirteen [R/SM cross]
Replies: 17
Views: 9575

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Thirteen [R/SM cross]

I'd have really liked to see what was going on with the senshi and the Dark Kingdom as well, but this was good. The emotions felt very raw and real.
by yakumo fujii
Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:40 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Thirteen [R/SM cross]
Replies: 17
Views: 9575

Re: Violator (WIP, Ranma-Fate/Stay Night cross)

I definitely like what I see.

This is post wedding right? If so wouldn't Akane need a little bit more convincing that Ranma's gonna be in trouble. After all she saw him defeat Saffron.
by yakumo fujii
Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:57 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Violator (WIP, Ranma-Fate/Stay Night cross)
Replies: 7
Views: 4532

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

After rereading the whole fic another question comes to mind. What's Nabiki's angle? She wouldn't be keeping quiet about the truth unless she has a way to profit from this. The first thing that comes to mind is selling pictures of the youma or the sailor senshi to the media, but that doesn't seem to...
by yakumo fujii
Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:34 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

Definitely agree that this was atypical damage for a normal NWC romp. Usually, as you say, it's at most a few walls and such. Still, no one ever seems to come after the for it, and they do it pretty often, so I'm hoping to extrapolate it to a more general attitude of " keep your head down and ...
by yakumo fujii
Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:49 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

Heh heh. Yes, you're absolutely right. The tricky part is, I can't diverge my themes too far either. "SM, except with the authorities actually taking action like they normally would" is pretty much a full fic idea unto itself. Throwing too many changes into the basic setup runs the risk o...
by yakumo fujii
Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:55 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

But does she have any way to get involved without endangering the future before the appearance of Chibi-Usa? She started out as a DeusEx to get the spore back in time more than anything else. That's never stopped any other author before. :lol: Even if she can't do anything about it a scene showing ...
by yakumo fujii
Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:51 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

Another thing I thought of, what about Sailor Pluto? She's watching this from the time gates isn't she? Shouldn't she be freaking out in the background somewhere?
by yakumo fujii
Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:16 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

Another thought, I know it's traditionally glossed over, but shouldn't there be some reaction on the part of the authorities after a whole block was laid waste?
by yakumo fujii
Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:57 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

Spokavriel wrote: Oh you could give spoilers. You just refuse to. Being a meannie like that and all ;)

Yeah, I noticed he avoided any of the truly spoilerish questions I asked. :lol:
by yakumo fujii
Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:22 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

Re: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]

Very intense fight scene, very realistic and well done. I'd wondered how Ranma and Ryoga would handle Jadeite without any advance techniques and you didn't disappoint. You continue to do very impressive work with Beneda. Writing an OC is hard enough, let alone one as morally conflicted and wracked w...
by yakumo fujii
Sat Jun 27, 2009 7:54 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords of Nerima, Chapter Twelve [R/SM cross]
Replies: 52
Views: 26643

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