I thought this chapter was great. This really felt like a chapter that was ripped right out of the manga, with all the crazy cover ups and ironic lies.
I would have liked to see Genma's reaction to Ranma's incredible victory, given his previous pessimism. Cologne similarly didn't seem to have any reaction to it which seems a bit odd to me.
Oh, don't misunderstand--it's definitely way, way too early for things to work out between them. If I called my fic "The Dark Lords of Nerima", and yet only had them be fighting the Senshi for barely more than two chapters before it all got settled and copacetic, I'd be guilty of rather u...
How do you figure? Most of the examples I can recall off the top of my head (Nephrite, the Black Moon sisters, Nehellina, Galaxia, etc.) would seem to imply that the Senshi would be willing to forgive many different attacks on their lives the instant someone shows even a hint that they might be abl...
This is post wedding right? If so wouldn't Akane need a little bit more convincing that Ranma's gonna be in trouble. After all she saw him defeat Saffron.
After rereading the whole fic another question comes to mind. What's Nabiki's angle? She wouldn't be keeping quiet about the truth unless she has a way to profit from this. The first thing that comes to mind is selling pictures of the youma or the sailor senshi to the media, but that doesn't seem to...
Definitely agree that this was atypical damage for a normal NWC romp. Usually, as you say, it's at most a few walls and such. Still, no one ever seems to come after the for it, and they do it pretty often, so I'm hoping to extrapolate it to a more general attitude of " keep your head down and ...
Heh heh. Yes, you're absolutely right. The tricky part is, I can't diverge my themes too far either. "SM, except with the authorities actually taking action like they normally would" is pretty much a full fic idea unto itself. Throwing too many changes into the basic setup runs the risk o...
But does she have any way to get involved without endangering the future before the appearance of Chibi-Usa? She started out as a DeusEx to get the spore back in time more than anything else. That's never stopped any other author before. :lol: Even if she can't do anything about it a scene showing ...
Another thing I thought of, what about Sailor Pluto? She's watching this from the time gates isn't she? Shouldn't she be freaking out in the background somewhere?
Another thought, I know it's traditionally glossed over, but shouldn't there be some reaction on the part of the authorities after a whole block was laid waste?
Very intense fight scene, very realistic and well done. I'd wondered how Ranma and Ryoga would handle Jadeite without any advance techniques and you didn't disappoint. You continue to do very impressive work with Beneda. Writing an OC is hard enough, let alone one as morally conflicted and wracked w...