Chapter six is up if you're following along. It's at http://boliver.florestica.com/tint/index.htm
One clue: the title of the chapter is a bit of misdirection. It doesn't really tell you anything about the chapter contents.
I could find only one point that seems arguable. I may be wrong, but "launched" in application to the head feels wrong.
Wow... At last the story feels as a whole, all the pieces finally clicked into places.
Heaven knows the Flash never had to deal with the fact that if you hit somebody at bullet speed, you have to deal with that whole "equal and opposite reaction" thing!
Well, "launched" can be in respect to any object sent forward at a high speed.
Thanks! Glad to hear it got better right around here. I suspect the story may not have seemed like it had a proper direction in chapters 1-5, which were pretty much the intro and setup.
She's still just a teenage girl,
Cheb wrote:Don't forget that the Senshi transformation increases her strength and durability (approximately tenfold, as our calculations revealed - it's pity that old discussion isn't available yet). On the other hand, Jadite should have some reinforcing spells on him too.
, she didn't have anything appropriate to wear for
a job interview.
Not only that, but it's an incomplete transformation in some ways,
Questara wrote:First time I read NETTG, I just couldn't get into it, but I am really liking Terra in Tokyo, and going back to NETTG, I am discovering I like it too. Guess you just need to read it in the right mood, I suppose.
Cheb wrote:Turnig into a pokemon... Brrrr!
But I guess, stil better than dying.
I like this thing more and more
But there goes my serious drawback. The more I like something -- the less I am inclined to notice its downsides or errors (if there are any).
I could find only one bug in the Chapter 7:, she didn't have anything appropriate to wear for
a job interview.
Extra line break.
... + new words: bachelor's pad; schmooze.
Not only that, but it's an incomplete transformation in some ways,
On the other hand, maybe it *does* give her the x10 speed and toughnes -- otherwise she would have been nothing more than a splat on that wall...
Don't forget that the Senshi transformation increases her strength and durability (approximately tenfold, as our calculations revealed - it's pity that old discussion isn't available yet). On the other hand, Jadite should have some reinforcing spells on him too.
First time I read NETTG, I just couldn't get into it, but I am really liking Terra in Tokyo, and going back to NETTG, I am discovering I like it too. Guess you just need to read it in the right mood, I suppose.
Ben's sense of humor is very quirky. Once you get used to it, though, you get absorbed into the cult-- Er, you become a fan for life! ^_^;;
You were able to find the definitions, right?
I argue that there is no strength/speed/toughness increase. The girls are naturally tough. There's one episode in the R series (the Nurse Minako episode) where Minako, untransformed, effortlessly leaps to a second-story balcony.
Likewise, in the first series, I believe Makoto was single-handedly taking on Zoicite with her bare hands, untransformed.
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