A desperate heroine risks all for a friend only to become a pawn in someone else's playground. With new abilities, and a friend she doesn't know about at her side, they face the world once again. A redo that actually does things differently. Eventual Naruto/Hinata/Sakura.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10157398/1/Hinata-Sedai
It's been awhile since I've written much of anything, but I thought I would put out a story I wrote a large chunk of awhile back. Of course, I still have to revise over half of it, but feel free to give C&C on what is posted either here or on fanfiction.net if you are so inclined.
The basic premises were:
1) Try to do something mostly original in the Narutoverse, although it is a redo story, so some canon is there, if not much.
2) The concept of the one power from the wheel of time might make things interesting. In general the premise is that the one power was sealed away and now opened on a Narutoverse, but only the female half of the one power for now. (Saidar)
3) Use of the one power is not automatically superior to chakra. For isntance chakra enhancement would allow one to move and fight much faster.
4) In this Narutoverse women, usually those with experience with chakra may have the potential for Saidar.
5) I did ditch the Kyuubi, because, well its impossible to keep him around without his power by definition eclipsing everything else. It also makes Naruto more vulnerable so it may give other characters a chance to shine a bit.
So far I have 110k words written, but less than half is releasable, as I changed my mind about having canon Naruto in the story (minus the Kyuubi).
I am also open to ideas on possible things for them to fight against, with the idea that teams will use a combination of Saidar and Chakra to overcome obstacles.
I'm a little surprised that this crossover doesn't have more than 3 entries, 2 of which are already shorter than I've posted let alone have written, but I suppose the cross section of those who have read the Wheel of Time saga and a particular Japanese Animation may not be great. Ah well.
-Lerris