
Vahn wrote:Just like the title say, do I have to reintroduce the characters for each and every single chapter? I get that I had to describe them the first time around as I introduced them but when they show up again, is it correct of me to assume my readers already know what they look like base on my earlier description OR should I just go ahead and describe their looks all over again and give back history? I am sort of assuming it's the first but maybe someone can correct me?



Do I have to reintroduce the characters for each chapter





Vahn wrote:So since my warp realities deal with the sailor senshi and I had introduce them quite some time ago. Would it be correct of me to write "No!" Rei shouted in despair. Instead of "No!" Sailor Mars shouted in despair or "No!" Mars shouted in despair. Since they are still technically in their powered up form but readers already know from earlier chapters who's who and all the character on the battle field already know each other anyway. Trying to nail down the correct method or could I use those interchangeably if I feel like I wanted?
I believe that distinction between the civilian and Senshi forms is very important and that it is wrong to call the Senshi by their civilian names.
Use their features in addressing them. Readers need reminders. Don't be stingy with these, but don't overdo it either.
For example, I introduce an OC who is a pink rabbit. Once in a while I write the pink rabbit said: "... instead of addressing him by name. I repeat this in each chapter, several times, until he is finally gone from the story.
Hair color, occupation, mode of dress - anything would do.

Yes, but their civillian names are still proper in senshi form, while the opposite is rarely true.





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