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MSLN Test Dummies

PostPosted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:01 am
by AdmiralTigerclaw
I'll go ahead and post this work here.

Or rather, a link. You don't want me to post a (at the moment of posting) 230 page, 100,000 word story on the forum...

MSLN Test Dummies by Admiral Tigerclaw (@FF.net)

Summary:
McGreggor Archipellago is home to the TSAB's Experimental Systems Test Force. A controversial unit filled with equally controversial characters. But it may just hold the key the Aces need to stop a terrorist plot of collossal proportions.

Anime: Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS.
Style: Action/Comedy (With subtle and not so subtle elements of crossover.)


Something for fun: MSLN Test Dummies Opening Sequence


And for those of you who mage it out of chapter five and into chapter six...
Scene transition concept.

And if you survive to the end of the chapter: Trailer Fodder

Be afraid.

Re: MSLN Test Dummies

PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 11:15 pm
by AdmiralTigerclaw
MSLN Test Dummies updated with Chapter Nine.

Have, a nice day.

Re: MSLN Test Dummies

PostPosted: Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:40 am
by AdmiralTigerclaw
MSLN Test Dummies is updated now with Chapter Ten.
Right on schedule.

Merry Christmas.

Re: MSLN Test Dummies

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:34 pm
by AdmiralTigerclaw
Update: Chapter Eleven is up.

Go read 'Bunker Buster Bums' here.

Re: MSLN Test Dummies

PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 7:41 pm
by CRBWildcat
This isn't really my opinion so much as the opinion of someone else (since they seem alright to me), but you may want to make sure that the canon characters maintain their personality and staying power.

I'm enjoying it myself, though. Looking forward to the next update. :D

Re: MSLN Test Dummies

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:00 am
by AdmiralTigerclaw
Thanks for the show of Enthusiasm Wildcat.

Right now I'm kind of slowely working out the next chapter's points of interest. Addressing both the plot, and some inconsistencies as well as complaints to make sure things come out right.