Have you ever went randomly looking for a fic and found something that had that kernal of potental; yet you knew deep down that that particular crossover, that particular divergence, or that particular SI/mary sue just wouldn't fit nor could it work. I am not saying that these fic ideas must be bad by default (And no offence to any writer) but some stories you just scratch your head and wonder the simple quuestion of why? I do not want to outright bash fics here. So if you are going to post please make some points in its favor, if only to show a level critique and not a simple sucks.
Here is what made me start this thread:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9005837/1/Primus-s-Blessing
To sum it up:
SI - Check (written in first person) as a sibling to Sam (I think) in the new Transformers movies
Impossible pairing - Hmm a human girl carrying Optimus Prime's child... - check (might have missed something but the summery says this???)
Odd cross... I am sure there is some back story here and it says its a sequal to another story... but crossed with Nanoha... Honestly I am not sure there is a contest here, yes the Transformers are big and bad, but StrikerS Nanoha is able to level a city if she really gets at it. And the biggest transformers on either team are cities... Right... Ahem... Even if Nanoha doesn't kill in one shot, who ever she is fighting WILL feel it. Keep in mind also that Nanoha has taken hits and given hits (*cough* Vivio *cough*) that should not be survivable as these have blown clean through a lot of armor.
hmm
IF we followed the 80s cartoon there was a machine that could turn a transformer Human... so child thing IS possible (not plausable though), I will bite that (I have not read this fic as the writting is a bit hard and the idea is a bit beyond my normal taste with the SI)
Mixing Transformers with Nanoha.... Well there is a deep seated warm fanboy feeling I have for imagining Starscreem getting hit with a Starlight Breaker... So yes I can accept that cross...