Sunshine wrote:Edit: And yes, this is a fic where the feminization of Ranma squicks *me* out. Look at my CV and ponder that.
Crescent Pulsar S wrote:Attempted, minimally/mildly (your mileage vary depending on the term) successful. Had the process proceeded to its conclusion, however, Ranma probably would have been mind-raped to identity-death.
jasonjkay wrote:although I love star trek, I cant quite remember that either
Sorta paraphrased but it was an iconic scene.Picard: There are four lights.
Cardsasian Interrogator: I'm sorry, you're mistaken. As you can clearly see, there are five. Until you start telling the truth, I'm afraid we won't be making much progress...
Kris Leena 2/4/12 . chapter 1
This is a very depressing story. The characters did not seem true to each others they brought in these magical, girl, characters but it felt like it was going around in circles and it was very confusing.
Not to mention that the chapters are very, very long.
It feels like it's creating their own alternate universe and not true to the Ranma story. I... I felt... lost reading this story. And it's just, I don't know how others are feeling about this story, I... I tried to read this but it wasn't really explained well enough.
It felt... weird.
I can't continue reading this story.
I don't know know to describe it. I... I went through all of the chapters, trying to find some hope for the characters, but its all depressing.
You want to be able to read the story, yes, I know what you were trying to do, but... I tried my best. I can't get into what this person was trying to do.
I felt DEPRESSED after reading this story.
I think if anything to give them more hope. There was no hope for Ranma, no hope for any of the characters you know. It was a struggle reading this story because of the way the story was portrayed. Even the friends Ranma had made... it just no hope. It just really got me down. You just keep reading the story feeling like that there was going to be the light at the wend of the story but it was not there.
I don't know what the author's intent was but...
It felt weird and everything. The story is stuck in my head.
Ranma was supposed to be a lighthearted story, but... even in the darkest parts Ranma always ends up finding hope for himself and others... but not now. they browbeat him, in a way.
The way they just did the characters around him... they didn't give him hope, didn't give them anything.
I hope the author doesn't have this in their own life.
I kept reading it and reading it trying to get around what this author was supposed to do... it just...
Just... EHwah...
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