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Spokavriel wrote: Might be a bit late for the suggestion but the knees come a bit too close together without altering the lay of the dress to allow one leg to be behind the other. Unless there is so little muscle to her legs that her knees are narrower than her throat.
Konsaki wrote:I'd extend the fabric crease line down a little farther then, maybe a few more 'inches' to help indicate the leg's forward position better.
J. St.C. Patrick wrote:The whole image looks good. I like the pattern you put on the fan.
One thing that stands out as being off is that the space between her left arm and torso and the triangular space created by her right arm and the fan seem a bit too light compared to the rest of the background.
Though I'm not sure if that's a real change in color of the background or an optical illusion.
J. St.C. Patrick wrote:Sorry for the confusion, I was talking about the color of the background in the spaces created by her arms being lighter than the background on the outside, making the interior stand out.
Here is a close up with the areas I'm talking about circled with patches of that color exported to show how much lighter they are.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/ ... loseup.png
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