Minkei

For submitting and talking about story ideas, individual scenes that need doctoring, outlines, or other detail work that isn't quite ready for the C&C thread.

Idea submissions must be at least five paragraphs long, and include plot points, summaries of which characters are involved, and, for fanfiction, how it differs from canon. Both original and fanfiction ideas welcome. Though original works should have more development. Replying posts must give actual commentary, no "GREAT IDEA" or "THIS SUCKS".

Minkei

Postby toushin » Mon Nov 30, 2015 7:37 pm

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Re: Minkei

Postby WG_Writer » Mon Nov 30, 2015 9:33 pm

Two big things wrong with this and one minor problem. (the actual outline-ish thing is in need of clarifying what its about earlier.)

First - the amount of forethought in the link makes this more an outline then an actual idea. An idea is more something a paragraph would cover. This would be about three solid pages of full fleshed out idea.

Second - This is only has a link. Better then this is expected.

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Finally. while normally I would flag an admin to move this I think as its only a link it could be recreated properly in outline and scenes section with an actual description in at least one paragraph with the link for more information.
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