Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

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Re: Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

Postby Crescent Pulsar S » Sat Oct 12, 2013 4:39 pm

frice2000 wrote:There's a lot that could be made of this other then 'Ranma in a girly profession and grows to enjoy being a girl' is all.

Don't assume all of my ideas have this element. XD

This one I'd merely envisioned as a misadventure while trying to beat someone at their own game. Cue fish out of water, biting off more than one can chew, and then bittersweet victory (like when he beat Picolet, but still owed him money in the end).
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Re: Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

Postby toushin » Mon Sep 25, 2017 6:58 pm

what do you think of this style
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Does his opponent have to be a woman because when I think of an evil idol and kiai I think of Kanade Kamiya from Rosario + Vampire who is a Siren. He uses using his songs to cause unbearable pain to all who hear it, as well as allegedly having songs for brainwashing.

This seems to be what this style is based off of as they use Otonashi for the defensive version. San Otonashi is a Siren who decided to not talk because of what her powers did when she was younger, using a sketchbook to communicate. She could be the one to train Ranma.

San also reminds me of Eucliwood from Is this a zombie as she also doesn’t speak because of her powers writing words on a notepad to communicate. Using these characters or at least characters based off of them might be a good idea.

Finally would the Yamasenken help as you theoretically say that opening shout is at least based on kiai sense its supposed to be a paralyzing scream due to surprise.
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Re: Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

Postby Spica75 » Tue Sep 26, 2017 12:34 am

Finally would the Yamasenken help as you theoretically say that opening shout is at least based on kiai sense its supposed to be a paralyzing scream due to surprise.


As far as i read it, it's just supposed to be something distracting rather than kiaijutsu. Ie. a psychological attack rather than physical.

And kiaijutsu isn't just based on surprise, that's basically the amateur level.
Above that is when you get proficient in projecting your voice, at that point you're basically mimicking the sound part of a flashbang, which is enough to physically stun people for a moment.
Then at the top of the skill, there's the point where you learn how to project the shout as a shockwave of noise. At that point, the stun effect can be serious, able to knock people out, cause minor impact damage and seriously harm or even kill small animals.

(caution, kiaijutsu is NOT safe to practice, even a slight mistake can injure your throat quite badly)
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Re: Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Tue Sep 26, 2017 8:28 am

One reason for a Sailor Moon crossover: Sailor Stars. The three Starlights are boy idols who change into girl supers. Does this not sound like a situation Ranma-idol could be in? (Obviously, we're talking anime rather than manga here.)
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Re: Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

Postby Vocaloid » Tue Oct 17, 2017 12:21 am

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:One reason for a Sailor Moon crossover: Sailor Stars. The three Starlights are boy idols who change into girl supers. Does this not sound like a situation Ranma-idol could be in? (Obviously, we're talking anime rather than manga here.)

Wasn't there a SM/R1/2 fanfic where ranma and the lights got tangled up together looking for the lost princess?
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Re: Kiai school of anything-goes martial arts

Postby Spica75 » Tue Oct 17, 2017 5:22 am

Vocaloid wrote:Wasn't there a SM/R1/2 fanfic where ranma and the lights got tangled up together looking for the lost princess?


Several i believe. It's a long time since, but IIRC i've read 3. In one Ranma WAS the princess somehow(which made him being part of looking for her kinda amusing and difficult).
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