Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Sun Dec 02, 2018 1:26 pm

That's not dressed to the nines. That's dressed to the XXXs.
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Dec 02, 2018 2:33 pm

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:That's not dressed to the nines. That's dressed to the XXXs.


Heh. Well... succubus.

But 'tis a fair cop.
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Sun Dec 02, 2018 5:42 pm

Sunshine Temple wrote:Heh. Well... succubus.

But 'tis a fair cop.

You mean she really is lighter than a duck?
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Dec 02, 2018 9:46 pm

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:You mean she really is lighter than a duck?


She is a wee lass, but even then, it'd have to be a pretty big duck.
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:56 am

Sunshine Temple wrote:She is a wee lass, but even then, it'd have to be a pretty big duck.

Giant Ducks do exist. But what happened to the carrot?
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Sunshine Temple » Mon Dec 03, 2018 2:10 pm

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:Giant Ducks do exist. But what happened to the carrot?


That is a big duck.

Heh the Monty Python reminds me of Ranma's newest sister (who will also quote it).

And this image of the two, where Ranma is dressed well... not as "Fancy" as the last one
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby J. St.C. Patrick » Mon Dec 03, 2018 10:40 pm

Perhaps if she were a duck?

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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Tue Dec 04, 2018 9:35 am

I wanna buy a duck!
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Postby Sunshine Temple » Tue Dec 04, 2018 2:18 pm

J. St.C. Patrick wrote:Perhaps if she were a duck?

:wink:


Owwww. Such pun!

Though I suppose that looks does work for her ;p
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