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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri May 18, 2018 9:03 pm

Chapter 12 is up.

The Combat Cyborg s make their opening move.
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Jun 02, 2018 11:08 am

Chapter 13 is up.

We're one chapter from the end of Book 2
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Jun 08, 2018 9:43 pm

and with chapter 14 Book 2 is done!

Well, that's Betrayed Consequences. Thanks to everyone who read and commented. We're starting to see Ranma (and Eve and Usagi and so on...) grow into this situation. Though a lot of this (especially with the combat cyborgs) is setting the stage for the third part "Raising Trouble".

And with that, and the Battle of Ottawa, we'll have caught up to Blood Debts. And from there the new stuff. Such as Dame BlackStone centered short stories like: "Our Sister, the Idiot" "Dreamland", and "Family Business". That last one is also part of showing more of the succubus homeplane in general and Silvana in specific. Something that will also be a major part of the post Blood Debts main story)
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