Blood Debts Ch13 (R.5 / SM / DF) and Ch14!

[Sunshine Temple]

And here's ch13 of Blood Debts.

The chapter can be read here.

As you can tell the story's starting to reach it's climax.

Edit: Chapter 14 has been added as well!

[Dumbledork]

I enjoyed the new chapter. Here are two mistakes I found.

powered rhino horn

Did you mean 'powdered'?

I found her was intriguing

get rid of the 'was'

[Sunshine Temple]

Dumbledork

I enjoyed the new chapter. Here are two mistakes I found.

[Glad you liked it!
[As you can guess I had some concerns about how well BlackStone's "meal' would be received.

powered rhino horn

Did you mean 'powdered'?

[Yes, good catch!

I found her was intriguing

get rid of the 'was'

[got it

[Thanks for the corrections!

[Sunshine Temple]

Annnnd chapter 14 is up!

Now we're getting into the mix of things.