Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

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Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Sep 30, 2016 5:19 pm

Here it is. The third chapter in my Dresden Files / Return Cross.

In this one Harry tries to figure out why he's been sent to this world, and the brood helps.
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Re: Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

Postby Sunshine Temple » Thu Oct 06, 2016 8:00 pm

And here's chapter four: Here

And now we see the results of Harry's summoning.

And he learns more about why he's there and what he's there to do.
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Re: Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

Postby Cheb » Fri Oct 07, 2016 6:29 am

It's nice to have more, even if it is not continuation. :)
Expanding is always good. Interesting read, even as I'm not familiar with Dresden Files.
Because you *finally* bring in an outsider POV character who isn't there just for one scene :)

Also,

>power-blue hair

>she walked walk

P.S. wait, one more chapter appeared while I was reading the third and writing this post! :D There were surely only 3 link when I opened that page. Or was it yesterday and Firefox caching for the "back" button ? :?
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Re: Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Oct 07, 2016 4:48 pm

Cheb

It's nice to have more, even if it is not continuation. :)

[Well it does continue events in the Return universe.

Expanding is always good. Interesting read, even as I'm not familiar with Dresden Files.
Because you *finally* bring in an outsider POV character who isn't there just for one scene :)

[Excellent!
[I tried to make this something assessable to people not familiar with the Dresden Files.

[And yeah having an outsider POV is a big part of the fun here.
[Especially as Harry doesn't know what the brood were like back before... they were brood

Also,

>power-blue hair

>she walked walk

[Made the changes.

[Thanks for commenting!
[Really glad you're enjoying it.

P.S. wait, one more chapter appeared while I was reading the third and writing this post! :D There were surely only 3 link when I opened that page. Or was it yesterday and Firefox caching for the "back" button ? :?

[I posted it yesterday evening so maybe ;p
[Enjoy that one two, as it actually has the results of the summon
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Re: Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

Postby Sailor Sedai (Ellf) » Sat Oct 08, 2016 8:22 pm

Honestly, I can't wait for you to finish this so we can see the Return-side results of the side story from outside Harry's POV.
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Re: Blood Debts Ch3 (and now ch4!) (R.5 / SM / DF)

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat Oct 08, 2016 8:41 pm

Sailor Sedai (Ellf)Honestly, I can't wait for you to finish this so we can see the Return-side results of the side story from outside Harry's POV.


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[I mean.... Yes Harry certainly won't screw things up.
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