Night Shift 5

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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Sat Jun 21, 2014 10:14 pm

Evil deeds must be done. :twisted: New addition before the Ranma/Ami section, at the cut it'll switch over to Usagi's point of view. Includes general error correction and revisions.

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Mikami Ryuuko slowed to a stop after passing through the turnstile, seeing that her train was already departing without her on it. “Not again.” She groaned and with a tired sigh flipped up the top of her purse to place her pass back inside. On the far platform, most of the passengers were rushing up the steps to the outside but a handful still lingered at the food shops clearly in a rush to get home as well.

“Can’t believe I was late again.” Ryuuko dropped her backpack and purse down on a bench before taking a seat. “Least it was on the way home this time.” Missing another class was not going to do her GPA any favors.

Pulling out her laptop, it came alive with a happy chime, and she was able to get a wireless signal. ‘No clue why I’m in a rush to get home, not like anyone is there.’ She thought morosely. Mindlessly browsing to kill some time was better than doing her database design homework. Everyday was frustrating due to being in such a male dominated field like network administration, that she had to have some time not thinking about it.

Five minutes later she was just starting to feel the urge to use the restroom when she noticed that someone was watching her. Looking up from the soft glow of her laptop screen, she glanced down one side of the deserted platform then to the other. Leaning against the wall next to the turnstiles was a pretty girl around her age with long purple hair. She wore a loose lavender dress that went down to mid thigh and underneath that were black stretch pants to her calves. Simple black slippers completed her understated outfit as she casually waited for something.

Nervously chewing on her lower lip, Ryuuko went back to her browsing briefly before her eyes ended up going back to the girl. Something felt oddly wrong about her and she gulped when she made eye contact with luminescent orange globes.

Deciding to answer nature’s incessant call, she calmly put away her laptop, and left her seat for the short hallway to the lavatory. It was strangely quiet as she entered the women’s room to hurry into a stall. She hadn’t even placed her bags on the door hook when the entrance to the room opened. The feeling of wrongness followed even stronger and she couldn’t place exactly what it was but it caused her to freeze up.

Listening as soft soled shoes stepped across the tiled floor, she found that she couldn’t breath. ‘Is it her again? What does she want?’ Trying to be as quiet as possible, the footsteps briefly made their way past her stall before doubling back to pause briefly right outside. A couple taps and then the footsteps retreated away before the door opened then closed.

Breathing out in relief, Ryuuko found that she had no trouble emptying her bladder. ‘Never had a creepy stalker before.’ She assumed that it had been that weird girl with the bright orange eyes. Exiting the stall, she went to wash her hands, feeling foolish for being so frightened. Nervously laughing to try and clear her nerves, Ryuuko had just turned the water on when her eyes caught a figure with bright orange glowing eyes behind her in the mirror.

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Later that night

“Thanks for the hot water, Ami.” Ranma rushed through drying his hair with a towel, dropping down lazily on a chair next to the other Senshi. He hadn’t had the chance to come over to her home for nearly a month so this was a welcome change from the recent drama at home.

“You don’t have to always thank me for that. You know our water heater has always gone up to scalding.” Ami replied, fingers dancing over the keyboard of the Mercury Computer.

From Artemis’ place sitting on the bed with a cell phone propped up in front of him, he asked. “Ranma, Mina wants to know why I’m now ‘your mascot.’”

“How should I know?” Ranma answered with a dismissive shrug.

“What about me?” Diana asked drowsily, having been curled up next to her father trying to sleep.

“You haven’t been-- assigned to a Senshi yet.” The white cat answered before having to duck his head back to the phone when Minako continued talking on the other end. “Apparently the official forum is close to crashing because of the buzz we created.”

“It seems like Hotaru had an exciting first day.” Ami smiled to herself as she finished pulling something up on her computer.

“Apparently a picture of me in my tux is so popular that I made the local news.” Artemis boasted.

‘This seems vaguely familiar.’ Ranma had a fleeting memory that was too brief to really latch onto and it was gone just as quickly.

“I’m always impressed by our individual pages. Someone went through and tried to fill in a timeline of my appearances. It’s surprisingly accurate.” Ami added in amusement.

“So what have you been up to today, Mina? I was expecting you to show up.” He wrapped the towel around his neck and leaned towards the cellphone.

“Did you hear that Mina?” Artemis asked into the phone. “I should just put this on speaker.” He backed away enough to look for the button.

“It’s all hush hush, can’t really talk about it yet.” Minako’s voice came over the speaker. “But you and me are going to have a long talk mister about using that tux, that I bought you, to introduce Ranma instead of me.”

“He also introduced Hotaru before you.” Ranma playfully taunted his friend.

There was a long paused before Minako curtly responded. “We’ll talk about this later.” The call cut off with an audible click. Ranma fell off his chair laughing while Ami struggled to contain her own mirth.

“Mina! Hey Mina!” Artemis pawed at the phone. “Honestly, what is wrong with her?” He asked in a huff.

“I don’t know, father. But there’s no need to yell.” Diana picked her head up long enough to berate her father.

“You want to try tracking her down tomorrow to surprise her?” Ranma offered, curious as well over what Minako was doing after learning from Ami that she hadn’t been in school.

“Yes--.” Artemis chuckled darkly. “A surprise.”

Diana groaned at her father and sat up fully. “Ami-sama, I hate to intrude upon your studies, but would you happen to have anything to drink?”

“I should have some milk in the fridge. Why don’t you go ask my mom? I think she’s preparing her lunch for tomorrow.” Ami suggested.

“I’ll do that.” The grey kitten nodded and bounded off the bed to skip out of the room.

“I’d like some too!” Artemis started to follow after his daughter. “Ya know-- just to make sure it’s good for her.” He added defensively, quickly speeding up.

“Everything’s good with your mom?” Ranma asked, watching as the white cat’s tail vanished behind the door frame.

“Yes.” Ami answered and cast her eyes downwards. “I can tell that she’s worried I’ll get hurt. Occasionally she’ll come and just sit with me to talk. It’s nice but-- awkward.”

“That’s good-- I’d be happy to have just awkward at the moment.” Things around his own home were getting quite complicated.

“I’m sure everything will work out.” Ami smiled reassuringly at him before leveling a suggestive gaze at him. “And how was Hotaru’s first day at Furinkan?” She asked and began to type on the Mercury computer.

Glad for the quick change in subject, he wheeled his rolling chair over to watch the computers display. “She’ll fit right in.” He answered vaguely.

“I can’t imagine her screaming about some slight and causing property damage.” Ami joked, rhythmically tapping her fingers.

‘Could be easier than you think.’ Ranma knew to never underestimate Hotaru. “How are the simulations going? It’s been going for a while hasn’t it?” He tried to change the subject away from his other friend or personal life.

“All clean, here take a look.” She pushed the Mercury Computer closer so that he could see the screen better. “It only took five million, six hundred thirty six thousand, and forty two passes to isolate all the enslavement spells.”

“Wow.” As much of a genius as Euryphaessa had been when creating magical constructs, it would have taken Ranma centuries to figure out the complex and layered creation contained within the gold bracelet with the help of the Mercury Computer. “If she could make something like this-- Galaxia could have done so much good.” He remarked sadly.

“Absolute power is said to corrupt absolutely.” Ami nodded slowly in agreement.

He leaned back heavily in his chair as two months of work had finally come to fruition. Shortly after becoming a Senshi again, he had tried to develop new spells and abilities but hit a barrier that seemed hard wired into them. Eury had done research on the process in the past but had been unable to do more than influence an already defined ability set.

As Ranma regained more of Eury’s memories and reconnected with the other Senshi, he found out everything that had happened to them in his absence. Including their deaths and reincarnations by Galaxia to fight against Sailor Moon. His hands tightened into fists, furious over how he had missed out on so much. As Sailor Theia he was strong enough that he could have protected them. Kept them from being killed one by one until only Usagi was left. (1)

As soon as he had heard of where the climactic battle had occurred, he had to see it for himself. The place where all life originated. Where Usagi, a girl incapable of even getting to school on time, had decided the fate of the universe.

Ranma had been so enthusiastic to go, to witness where stars were born, but when she got there she had shied away from the great precipice. Incapable of handling the enormity of seeing all of creation in front of her eyes. For a week, she had wandered amongst the ruins of Galaxia’s castle before she had found it. A flash of gold hiding in the rubble, covered in brightly colored jewels twinkling in the light from a billion billion stars shining overhead. There had been an innocent temptation to put it on, but she had seen the cruel magic lingering on it, and realized that it was one of the horrific bracers that enslaved anyone made to wear it.

“Ranma?” Ami asked, breaking him out of his memory.

“Huh?” He asked in a daze, noticing that he had pulled the last bracelet from Galaxia from it’s hiding place under Ami’s desk. Contained in a wood case, neither of them had wanted to handle it more than absolutely necessary. “Sorry-- was just thinking.” He apologized and placed the box near the Mercury Computer, letting his hand trail over the surface.

“I don’t like it either.” Ami stared down at her hands in her lap. “We really should destroy it.”

“We can now.” Ranma knew that Ami had found this far more difficult, having been a victim of Galaxia. “And we can make sure it’ll never happen again.” He added, and grabbed her hands to squeeze reassuringly.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby Dumbledork » Sun Jun 22, 2014 2:27 pm

Not much happening. Glad for an update, though.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Sun Jun 22, 2014 3:10 pm

Dumbledork wrote:Not much happening. Glad for an update, though.

It's unlikely for me to have put such detail into an OC without her doing something big. :twisted:

And if you've been in the doc, you probably have noticed that Usagi's POV is holding me up. Once again trying to overthink everything. :(
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Fri Oct 17, 2014 11:19 am

Since I'm still having trouble writing Usagi's little blow up scene, here's the start of the next one with Ranma/Ami trying to find her.

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“Where is she?” Ranma worriedly pushed his way through the crowded sidewalk with Ami in tow as they attempted to locate Usagi. Diana had remained back at Ami’s apartment while they searched. Luna was being carried by Ami and Artemis was using his shoulders as a perch. Both Mau were keeping quiet due to the number of people in the area but Ranma could feel Artemis shifting as he scanned the crowd for Usagi.

“She’s not answering her phone.” Ami was rapidly texting on her phone, attempting to find out if anyone had been contacted by their wayward leader.

“We should have put trackers in the cells.” Within his pockets, he tightened his hands into fists, infuriated by how helpless he felt. He had to make this right and the first step to that was finding Usagi, and apologizing for keeping their plans a secret from her.

“Usagi doesn’t like to use the teleport network, so let’s check to see if she’s taking the train home-- or going to Mamoru’s.” Ami suggested and returned her phone to her purse. “The next one arrives in fifteen minutes.” (2)

“It’s a good place to start.” He agreed, relying on Ami’s years of experience with Usagi. “I didn’t know that she would react like this.”

“Me either.” The Senshi of Mercury admitted. "Luna, do you have any ideas?" She discreetly asked the black feline who shook her head side to side in response.

Taking the steps down into the subway, Ranma barely noticed that there weren't any pedestrians entering with them. Since he tended not to use public transportation he had no clue if it was normal or not for their path to open up. Ami led the way to the platform that Usagi would be using, maneuvering past around a dozen people milling about.

It was only after it became clear that there was no sign of Usagi that he took a closer look at the other people on the platform. Many had uniforms like they worked at the various stores that lined the station. None of them were speaking and they all stood staring blankly in the same direction. ‘What’s going on?’ He wondered, trying to act casual as he checked the closest store to find that it was completely empty.

"There's a monster here." Artemis whispered in his ear, his claws digging slightly into Ranma's shoulders.

“I know.” He whispered and lightly tapped Ami to see that she had caught on as well. “But where?” The feeling of wrongness that the monsters exuded was becoming almost overpowering but all around them there were only normal looking, though unnaturally quiet people.

"Let me see if I can scan for it." Ami placed Luna on the floor so she could pull out the Mercury Computer.

Ranma watched the screen as it quickly drew of a floor plan of the subway station and began to sort out the various life forms within. Standing at the very center of the display were two silver dots representing two Senshi. Next were the two Mau in purple. While there should have been bright representations of all the humans around them, they only registered as dark dimly flickering green dots. But that was it, Ami’s computer still couldn’t correctly find the lifeless demons.

"Saotome Ranma." A young woman's voice almost purred and a girl near his age had gotten so close behind him that he nearly jumped. Before he could react, she had latched onto him with a glomp that would make Shampoo proud.

"Uh--." He blinked several times at the human looking monster hanging off of him. “Can I help you?” He asked curiously, having immediately recognized that it was not a pretty girl hanging off of him.

She had the same off putting feeling all the monsters had but looked completely normal save for softly glowing orange eyes. Ranma had no clue what kind of threat this one posed, none of the monsters they had previously encountered appeared remotely human. 'What's it doing and how did it know my name?'

Ami was trying not to be noticed as she quickly tried to get a good quality scan on the monster girl with the Mercury Computer.

"Here I thought you were terrified of cats." The monster woman smirked in a way that immediately set off every warning bell in his mind. Around them, the blankly staring humans turned to look in their direction, revealing that they had all been hiding bits of computer chips and wires protruding from the right side of their faces.

Realizing that they were in some kind of trap, he tried to push the monster away from him but, she held firm to the back of his neck with one hand, and placed the left on his ribs just below his right arm. "Break." She whispered softly, eyes gleaming with malice.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Sun Oct 19, 2014 10:14 pm

And the conclusion to Ryoga's run in with Ranma.

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Ryoga delighted in the feeling of Ranma's ribs breaking under her soft touch. The pigtailed boy collapsed like a puppet who's strings had been cut in the wake of her attack, too paralyzed by pain to even scream. The white cat that had been on his shoulder leapt to attack her and she casually swatted him out of the air. There was a black cat as well that immediately ran to the white ones prone form.

Turning her eyes to the girl who Ranma had been talking to, she dismissed her as anything more than just another empty headed piece of fluff smitten by the pigtailed martial artist. That didn't mean she was safe. Catching the human by the arm, Ryoga casually threw the girl clear across the train rails to bounce her head against the far concrete wall with a heavy thud.

"Ami!" Ranma coughed out before being cut off when Ryoga softly pushed her toe into his side immediately silencing him as another white hot lash of pain rush through his body.

"You don't have to worry about her much longer." Ryoga crouched down and smiled wide enough to show off her enlarged lower canines. "Sailor Theia." She added slowly, savoring every syllable, and enjoying the utter look of terror that overcame her former rival.

"How’d you know--?" Ranma gasped out, struggling futilely to try and sit up.

“Oh! I know everything, Ranma. When I devoured that fool Ryoga from the inside out, I thought I had learned all about you. But now I know so much more.” Taking a step back, she motioned for him to stand. "What's wrong? Aren't you going to change into that fancy little skirt to kill me?" Ryoga taunted, assured of her victory now that she had turned half his ribs into tiny splinters. Even if he was able to somehow find a way to escape, he would die from the injury.

"I swore that I would make your life hell." She sneered and lifted him up by his shirt. This time he did cry out in pain. "To destroy your happiness!" With casual ease, she pinned him against the wall of the subway. Laughing loudly, she slammed him against the concrete once again for emphasis. "I can't believe how lucky I am that you'd just walk into my human trap.”

“Sai-- lor.” She almost missed him summoning a silver half circle broach into his left hand. He weakly fumbled with the item that fell from his fingers, desperately trying to grab it once again.

“Let me help you with that.” She offered and stomped on his wrist. Grinding her heel into the soft underside, Ryoga wished that she could make this last longer. But he was so close to losing consciousness that she worried that she wouldn’t be able to taunt and gloat over her most hated enemy for much longer.

Dropping down to her knees in order to straddle his stomach, she roughly patted his chest, and leaned in to whisper in his ear. “I’ll make sure you have a lot of company in the afterlife. Starting with your new girl cross the way-- rudely bleeding out all over this nice clean floor.”

“Moon Tiara Boomerang!”

Ryoga’s head snapped to the left at the intense bloom of power that appeared. A blindingly bright golden disc cut through her new drones at waist height, their bodies vanishing into dust a heartbeat later. Realizing her peril almost too late, she barely leapt away from Ranma’s unconscious form before the disc could cut her apart.

Sliding to a stop, she watched the golden disc warily as it swung back like its namesake, to be snatched out of the air by Sailor Moon. The Sailor Senshi stood briefly with her hand outstretched before the weapon in her hand morphed into a tiara and she placed it back on her forehead. Long blonde hair streaming down from two odangos swirled as the Senshi pulled out a short pink rod with an offset glittering silver crescent on the end.

‘Interfere all you want, he’s already dead.’ Ryoga sneered internally even though on the outside she nervously took a step away from the leader of the Senshi. Sailor Moon’s blue eyes burned into her like an inferno that made every part of her shiver in horror. ‘Those eyes, they both have the same damn eyes.’ She realized, using her anger to overcome the fear that gripped her.

“How rude!” She exclaimed with an exaggerated sigh and threw her hands up. “Don’t I even get a speech first?”

“No.” Sailor Moon raised her magical weapon in front of her body. With a metallic shing the handle elongated into a long staff and changed to be a pure white color with small wings unfurling underneath the crescent moon at the top. Prismatic flecks of light gathered around the staffs head before falling like snow around the Senshi’s hand. “Redoubt!” She called out and slammed staff down on the floor.

Ryoga barely felt the monster she had recently created teleporting away as a blizzard of rainbow colored light exploded outward around Sailor Moon. The still partially human drones vanished instantly into dust as the attack washed over them. She spared one last glance at Ranma’s unconscious form, knowing that she had finally killed the bastard, before teleporting away from the subway an instant before she could be destroyed.

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Should probably have some more SM-esqe addition to the attacks name but it's kind of different for Usagi's attack not to have some long complicated nonsensical name.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby Cheb » Mon Oct 20, 2014 1:27 pm

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And things were going so nice too.

Once again trying to overthink everything.

It's all right. Better better than hasty, I think.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:48 pm

Cheb wrote:Owie Image

And things were going so nice too.

Wait. :twisted:

Poor Ryoga-chan, she just wants to kill Ranma so badly, even though she also wants to make him suffer for an eternity.
It's all right. Better better than hasty, I think.

I'll be pretty much covering most major character traits of hers. If the confrontation between Ranma/Ami/Ryoga hadn't been so clearly serious I was even going to have Usagi leave them injured in an attempt to play nurse.... badly. But that doesn't fit the tone at all.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby WG_Writer » Tue Oct 21, 2014 10:55 pm

Wow so dark, I aprove. Now how do the others react to one of their own being outed that hard.
Storm trooper effect works against good guys as well.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Wed Oct 22, 2014 11:58 am

WG_Writer wrote:Wow so dark, I aprove. Now how do the others react to one of their own being outed that hard.

Monsters be monsters.

Since I've been updating out of sync, I'll finally release the doc link and obviously major spoilers below the red text. There's also a new scene after the school club that has Hotaru remaining at the Tendos after dinner and a rather important bit between Kasumi/Akane that'll be fleshed out soon.

Finally... FINALLY I think I'm done with this damn scene.
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Here is the revised version from Usagi's pov where she finds out that Ranma/Ami were doing something that could get hella evil.



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“Ah!” Usagi fumbled wildly with her precious cargo as she tried to knock on the door to Ami’s condo. “School is always so much trouble!” She whined, trying to hold onto three textbooks in one hand while the more important box of chocolates occupied her other. A box that she had made lighter by stealing several of the delicious treats on the way from the store.

“Why didn’t you listen to me when I told you repeatedly to study?” Luna verbally rolled her eyes at Usagi’s procrastination. The black cat sat on her haunches next to the door looking up at her in mute disgust.

“I had more important things to do.” She responded in a low voice.

“Naps and snacks.”

‘I’m sure they won’t mind helping, we can go get more food to help keep our energy up while studying.’ She rationalized while ignoring Luna’s remark, knowing that when looking for significant assistance from the pair, she should always come prepared. ‘Bribery is such an ugly word, it’s really just incentive!’ Usagi giggled to herself, mentally congratulating her own cleverness, and its assured success.

The door opened to reveal Ami’s mother. “Good evening, Usagi-chan.” The woman greeted pleasantly before noticing the black Mau. “And Luna too.”

“Good evening, Mizuno-san.” She returned the greeting brightly. “Is Ami-chan home?”

The woman made a big deal of noticing what Usagi was carrying. “She’s studying with Ranma-kun.”

“Ranma’s here too?” Usagi gasped in mock surprise.

“Artemis and Diana-chan are in the kitchen.”

“Do you mind if we come in?” Luna asked politely but had already entered into the apartment in her excitement to see her daughter.

“Of course not, they're in Ami’s room.” Mizuno Saeko said to Usagi, smiling good naturedly at the felines hasty entrance. “Did you want some help with those?”

“I’m fine.” She answered with a strained chuckle, nearly losing control of her textbooks as she waddled inside awkwardly.

“Don’t be silly.” Saeko snatched a book and her box of chocolates, allowing her to get a better handle on her remaining burden.

“Ah, I can carry that.” She shifted her books around to try and take back the sweets only to have Ami’s mom leave her trying to get her shoes off.

“I’m just bringing it inside, dear. Why don’t you go say hi to Ami while I get you three some healthy snacks.”

Usagi pursed her lips together and glared at the woman’s back. ‘She took my sweets.’ Realizing that what would be returned would likely be something atrociously healthy and not at all good tasting, her left cheek developed an angry tic. ‘This will not stand! She’s a stubborn villain and I’ll need to muster all my loyal senshi to retrieve my precious chocolate!’

Time was of the essence so she made her way directly to Ami’s room. Quickly preparing all manner of tactics in order to raise morale to quickly vanquish the youma of healthy eating. She had to maintain her priorities. Artemis and Diana being greeted by Luna? Adorable! And she would happily squeal over every cute detail later, but she could not be distracted by such things now.

“Ami! You gotta help me!” She whined dramatically.

Ranma and Ami were sitting shoulder to shoulder with each other looking at something on Ami’s desk up until she entered with a purpose to her stride. Both of their heads whirled around to stare at her in wide eyed shock like they had been caught doing something. With a short hop, she glomped onto the pair with enough force to throw them forward into Ami’s desk.

“Usagi! What gives?” Ranma protested.

She was about to go into a rant about Dr. Mizuno until she saw that the pair were holding hands. ‘Hello! Alone without a chaperone and holding hands?’ Giggling in the knowledge that she had caught them having a secret romance. “Did I come at a-- bad time?” She asked suggestively and waggled her eyebrows.

“Ooh! A bracelet!” Usagi didn’t even wait for a response before she had grabbed a cute little box from Ami’s desk.

“Usagi, don’t touch that!” Ranma tried to twist around to take it from her but she avoided his quick hands.

“I just wanna see!” She whined, her blue eyes focusing on the glittering gold band with multiple large jewels embedded within. Her thoughts of beautiful friendships blossoming into something more with gifts vanished when recognition hit her worse than her mother’s disappointment at a bad test score.

“Why do you have this?” Usagi asked flatly, her hands tightening on the wooden box. The two other Senshi hesitated in answering and glanced at each other with guilty looks.

“We were reverse engineering it.” Ranma finally answered.

“The Mercury Computer just finished. With it we can control every aspect of ourselves.” Ami added positively. “It’s like the Senshi master code.”

“Altering our powers or even making new ones! I could give all my training.”

“Maybe even little things-- like better study habits-- we could all find ways to be better.” Ami added timidly.

“Better?” Usagi asked slowly, feeling the faint tingle that signified a golden crescent moon would be visible on her forehead. A sharp metallic crack emphasized her question and the golden bracelet broke in two down the center. Ranma and Ami both stared at her in shock, listening as the item began to fizzle loudly. Fracturing into hundreds of tiny pieces, the former bracelet vanished with a loud crackle, and a bright gold flash.

“Usagi, why’d you do that?” Ranma asked hesitantly.

“We were done with it but it really should have been disposed of properly.” Ami added.

Usagi looked between both of them before slapping Ranma across the face. The black haired boy stared at her in confusion and hurt before she moved onto do the same with Ami. “How could you?” She asked, voice quivering with the strength of her emotion. “I can’t believe you’d think that we need to be fixed and made better. We’re just fine how we are!”

Throwing the burnt remains of the box down on the floor, she couldn’t stand to look at either of them anymore, and ran out of the room.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby LawOhki » Fri Oct 24, 2014 11:39 am

The Silver Millenium

Pyrrha wanted to take a deep calming breath of the freshest most pure air she had even encountered but was so nervous that she could barely gasp. She had been called to Castle Neith for an audience with Sailor Theia. Her, a Terran, in the castle of a Senshi! It was so unbelievable that none of her family would ever believe that it had happened. With her hands clasped so tightly together that they were turning white, she waited on a circular black stone platform for someone to tell her what to do.

‘They had to know I was coming, so why isn’t anyone here?’ She glanced around nervously, having been transported here by a magical spell from a special temple on Terra. Her eyes went upwards to find the Moon, seat of Queen Serenity hanging large enough in the sky that it felt like she could reach out and touch it. Her thoughts came to a halt at the beautiful blue planet to the side of the moon.

“Terra.” She whispered in awe, dumbstruck by the sight of seeing her home in this way.

“What are you staring at?” A soft high pitched feminine voice asked curiously from her right.

Pyrrha quickly composed herself and bowed her head deeply in the direction of the voice. “I apologize for staring-- or if I’m doing anything inappropriate.” She was about to stand up from her bow when she realized that she hadn’t introduced herself and dropped her head once again. “I am Pyrrha Epipoulo and I have traveled here in response to a summons by Princess Euryphaessa.”

“So you have.” The girl noted and Pyrrha finally looked up enough to see who she was addressing. Floating in the air a meter from where she was bowing was a tiny Sailor Senshi wearing the uniform of Sailor Theia. Tiny blue eyes were sizing her up and clearly not finding anything that she liked.

“Oh my, you’re adorable.” She gasped before she could stop herself.

Eyes that were already finding her wanting narrowed in response to her outburst. “Come this way.” She instructed tersely and began to fly towards the large double doors leading into the castle.

“Uh-- oh-- of course.” Pyrrha stuttered ineffectually in response, hurrying to follow.

The miniature Senshi drew up short of the door to turn back to her with a single finger pressed to her lips. “I really should make sure you aren’t bringing any foreign contaminants into my home.”

“I’m sorry?” (3)

“Kasumi?” A new voice cut in.

“Huh?” She blinked several times, her vision of Lautia vanishing to be replaced by the yard around her home. She was kneeling next to the koi pond with a bag of food for the fish to her side. “Nabiki what is it?” Kasumi asked worriedly, seeing the concern on her younger sisters face.

“You were staring at the pond for ten minutes-- and you weren’t moving.” Nabiki pointed out and took a kneeling position next to her. “And you’re talking with that weird accent again. Are you feeling okay?”

“Don’t worry, I just have some things on my mind.” She idly threw some food to the impatiently waiting koi who coiled around each other to get at the food first.

“And what about Akane? Or Ranma and his mom?” Nabiki grabbed some food to dribble into the water. “Not that I’ve noticed that it’s like you’re all part of some big secret or anything like that.” She added in an offhand and flippant manner.

‘I suppose it was too much to hope she wouldn’t notice.’ Kasumi had always known that her sister was very smart, if a little short sighted, and possessing keen observational skills. But it wasn’t her place to explain without asking Ranma first. “There’s nothing to worry about, Nabiki.”

“So you’ll tell me what’s going on?” Her younger sister asked insistently, clearly unwilling to let the matter drop without a fight.

“Soon enough.” She dodged having to give a direct answer.

“Because you have to check with-- Ranma?” Nabiki asked, still fishing for information.

“You’re just going to have to wait, little sister.”

“I can wait, don’t you worry about that.” Nabiki smirked as though she had just discovered something important.

“Well while you do, why don’t you tell me about your meeting with the Senshi?” She asked sweetly, curious what Nabiki’s thoughts on the magical girls are.

“I’d have been more impressed if they had done something. At first I thought they were just a couple of elaborate cosplayers but there was-- something about them nobody else really had."

"Like?" She asked, even more curious what would catch her sisters eye about the two.

Nabiki shrugged. "I don't know. Whatever it is that makes Akane go all fangirl for them. They almost had me convinced that they truly believed in all those love and justice speeches. It'd be nice to know how Ranma and our little sister knew them, though. Saotome doesn't seem the type who'd want to spend anytime around such girly girls."

Kasumi barely restrained herself from giggling at Nabiki's self-assured declaration, hiding it behind a vacant smile as she recalled the end of her first memory of her past life.

Pyrrha found herself sitting upon a comfortably plush chair, dressed now in a dark red shoulderless gown with a long tailed bow tied at the small of her back. Everyone recognized the style of the Moon when they saw it and knew that the length of the bow was used to signify a rank in society. So why was it that she was given one that indicated she was part of the highest strata? Sure her house was a noble one and highly respected but she was nowhere close to someone from the Moon.

Another mistake perhaps? Like how that tiny magical construct had made when putting her through such a thorough and unnecessary decontamination procedure. Pyrrha knew that her eyes would still hold a haunted look even as her mind shut out the memory.

Hearing footsteps, she looked up to see one of the most beautiful women she had ever seen stride confidently into the room. Vibrant red hair trailed behind her like a silken cape down to her thighs. Her sleeveless golden shirt glittered with reflective threads, loosely hanging from her shoulders as though afraid to touch the perfect form beneath. A flowing pleated black skirt reached down to her knees and simple black sandals adorned her feet.

"Are you alright?" The woman asked in genuine concern, and slid another seat to be closer before sitting down. "I'm really sorry about Lautia, she can be a tiny bit aggressive sometimes." The redhead smiled disarmingly and took Pyrrha's hands in her own.

"I am well." She answered slowly, not really knowing how to look away from the compassionate blue eyes that waited for her response.

"I'm happy." The woman smiled even wider.

"Apologies but I still don't know why I was called here. I know she must be terribly busy but is my audience with Princess Euryphaessa to be soon?" She asked, feeling her courage return now that she was dealing with someone only a few years her senior.

"If by soon you mean now, then yes." The woman's eyes twinkled with good natured amusement.

"But that means you're--." Pyrrha's mind threatened to completely shut down as the redhead nodded. Princess Euryphaessa was sitting before her. With a strangled squeak, she quickly rose to her feet, and stepped away from her chair to bow deeply to the Sailor Senshi. "Please forgive my rudeness and ignorance."

Silence held her in place before Euryphaessa giggled loudly at her action and patted her on the back. "What are you apologizing for? You're the last person who needs to be so deferential to me."

"Pardon?" She straightened up enough to see the Queen's personal guardian hadn't moved from her spot on the chair.

"You're to be my new advisor and obviously that means you have to disagree with me from time to time."

"Pardon?" Pyrrha repeated, feeling even more lost.

"Really, you must learn to relax. Sit, sit." The Senshi gestured to the chair and Pyrrha immediately followed the command. "My former attendant is going to be leave me soon enough to start a family and you've been chosen to fill the position."

"Me? But-- I'm just a Terran. I don't even have any magical talent. Sure I'm from a good family but that doesn't count for much." She quickly prattled on, unable to accept what she had just been told. "There's nothing special or worthy about me." How could she turn down this offer gracefully? She couldn't possibly accept if it was an offer. Some sort of mistake must have been made for anyone to think she was worthy of such a position.

"Everyone is special and worthy in some way. You just haven't found yours yet. But I believe in you, otherwise I wouldn't have picked you for the job." The princess explained reassuringly. "Or are you questioning my judgement?"

"No, of course not!" She quickly agreed blindly hoping that there was someway she could get out of this without a black mark forever hanging over herself and family.

"Great!" Princess Euryphaessa stood up sharply and grabbed Pyrrha by the hand to start dragging her from the room. "Let's go see your room, Lautia has been remodeling it, and will need your input on the finishing touches."

"But." She protested too weakly to be heard.

"Oh and call me Eury or Theia, princess or my full name are such a mouthful, aren't they?" The redhead squeezed her hand reassuringly.

"Oh-- okay." Pyrrha nodded.
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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby Dumbledork » Fri Oct 24, 2014 1:52 pm

Nice to get some infromation about Kasumi's past incarnation. I'd really like to see more of her past life.
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Postby LawOhki » Sat Oct 25, 2014 5:48 am

Dumbledork wrote:Nice to get some infromation about Kasumi's past incarnation. I'd really like to see more of her past life.

She'll get some more of her past life but I'm hoping to avoid a lot of flashbacks unless plot relevant because they are just memories and the present day versions are more important.
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Postby LawOhki » Tue Nov 04, 2014 9:00 pm

‘She’s zoned out again.’ Nabiki’s mouth quirked to the side, watching her sister get lost in another daydream. ‘As long as she’s not flailing around like Akane was with that dream incense.’ (4)

Throwing a far too large handful of fish food into the water, she was already bored with the koi, and would have preferred to have access to a certain gray kitten. Or even that white cat, but Ranma had spirited them both away with him when he vanished after dinner. As though he had known she would dig information out of them. Which left her the little pink haired terror as the only other avenue of information since her older sister was being obstinate.

‘Why is it always the Saotomes?’ She wondered as she eyed the young girl through the shoji. ‘Akane better get used to pink.’ Nabiki didn’t know what quirk of genetics brought out Chibi-Usa’s hair and eye color but it had to be a dominant trait that Ranma had been only halfway saved from.

Double checking to make sure Kasumi wasn’t going to go diving into the koi pond, she headed back to the house intent on finding where Usa kept her cat doll stashed. It was way more than a toy and whenever Usagi didn’t have it in her hands it was impossible to find. Nabiki spared a momentary glance into the living room as she passed just to be sure she wouldn’t be interrupted by any of the Saotomes while searching.

The rapid thunking of shoes on the wooden floor made her pause and turn just in time to come face to face with a blonde girl dressed as Sailor Moon.

“Hotaru!? Where are you WAAAA!” The girl’s call turned into a scream of surprise before Nabiki was bowled over.

“Ow.” Nabiki groaned from the floor, tangled up with the other female, and spit out some long blonde hair that had somehow found its way into her mouth.

“Sorry, sorry! So sorry!” The Sailor Moon lookalike apologized as she roughly shoved Nabiki repeatedly to get back up to her feet. “There you are Hotaru! Come quick! I need your help!” She ordered panickedly.

Struggling up into a sitting position, Nabiki barely had time to roll to the side before she was run over again by Sailor Moon dragging Hotaru from the room. “What was that about?” She asked in confusion, seeing the tail ends of Sailor Moon’s long hair rounding the corner along with Hotaru’s legs.

A flash of white light from the koi pond drew her attention and she found that two women had appeared. One was tall and bishounen like, with short sandy blonde hair wearing a long fashionable navy coat, white button up shirt, and blue jeans tailored to accentuate her form. The other was of average height with wavy teal hair falling down past her bare shoulders. Her clothes were decidedly feminine, a darker teal spaghetti strap halter top and flowing white pleated skirt down to her knees.

The blonde’s eyes caught Nabiki’s for a moment before moving on to Kasumi who was still kneeling next to the koi pond looking as confused over the series of events as her. “Kasumi? Where is she?”

“She dragged Hotaru upstairs screaming about how she needed her.” The eldest Tendo sister answered like this was a casual occurrence.

“I didn’t know bunny had it in her.” The blonde remarked impressed.

“Let’s just go find her and figure out what was so urgent.” The teal haired woman gripped the taller blonde’s hand tightly and pulled her past Nabiki like she wasn’t still on the floor.

“Kasumi, is there something that we should know about?” Nodoka asked, finally finding her voice.

“I want to say yes-- but I don’t know what it is.” Kasumi answered and worriedly chewed on her lower lip.

Three more flashes of light punctuated Kasumi’s answer as three Sailor Senshi appeared next to the koi pond. Nabiki’s jaw dropped at seeing Sailor Mars, Venus, and Jupiter looking ready for war. Sailor Mars crossed her arms after seeing that nothing was going on.

“She ran out of ice cream again, didn’t she?” The long raven haired girl asked tiredly.

“Maybe I should prepare some snacks.” Kasumi laughed nervously at all the attention being directed her way.

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Re: Night Shift 5

Postby Dumbledork » Wed Nov 05, 2014 5:05 am

Smooth Usagi... very smooth. The others aren't much better, though. I Nabiki doesn't get of the bottom of this now, with all the things she's seen she's really stupid. But I'd love to see her come up with a completely wrong conclusion... for the lulz.
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Postby LawOhki » Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:42 am

Dumbledork wrote:Smooth Usagi... very smooth. The others aren't much better, though. I Nabiki doesn't get of the bottom of this now, with all the things she's seen she's really stupid. But I'd love to see her come up with a completely wrong conclusion... for the lulz.

Obviously Ranma is Tuxedo Mask. Cause the real Tuxedo Mask avoids Ranma like the plague for things hinted at in the last chapter. :twisted:
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