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Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Jun 15, 2018 8:22 pm

And now the revision process is getting to where the end (or at least Blood Debts) can be seen over the horizon.

This is the part of the story where the former Soviet Combat Cyborgs start up the Canadian Special forces start to be a part of this, and more skeletons in Usagi's and Ranma's families start to emerge.

And chapter one can be read here
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:47 pm

Chapter 2 is up.

And there's actually some divergence from how the chapter originally appeared.
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Jul 06, 2018 10:39 pm

And chapter 3 is now up.

And the divergence from the original version becomes a bit more noticeable.
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Jul 20, 2018 8:26 pm

Chapter 5. Now we get to Cecilia and her girls and Mal de Veste.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Aug 03, 2018 8:13 pm

And chapter 7 is up.

Poor Murdock's car.
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Aug 10, 2018 8:28 pm

Chapter 8 is up.

And Eve and Ranma learn a bit more about Murdock. And Mercury unveils her upgrades...
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Aug 17, 2018 6:09 pm

Chapter 9 is up.

Mercury is exploring more of the moon and Serenity and Minako have plots of their own.
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Aug 24, 2018 9:21 pm

The interlude Down Time is now up.

It's Ranma's day off (and happens to be the one year anniversary of her being a demon.
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Sep 07, 2018 10:46 pm

Chapter 11.

Fun factiod. This is the first time Ranma has hooves in the story. (I'm pretty sure)
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Re: Return Revised Book Three: Raising Trouble

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Sep 21, 2018 6:54 pm

And chapter 13 is posted.

So that's book 3.


All that's left is Book 4 and the revision project will be done!
(Minus some minor edits to Blood Debts)
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