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Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:11 pm

And the revision process continues.

This time with the 2nd book. Where things start to... well you'll see.

Right now just have the first two chapters up, but more will come.
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Feb 18, 2018 5:03 pm

Hmm. Okay.

Since the Mercury stuff is happening really soon in this story. And given the mess that happened in the last thread. I am invoking Rule 1E1 and doing so /before/ things get out of hand.

Edit: User was formally warned and post was removed due to rule violation.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Sun Feb 18, 2018 9:18 pm

Right. That's a violation of the rules. Formal warning. And posts deleted.
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:24 pm

And chapter three is up!

Things are developing with both magical girl teams.
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Mar 02, 2018 4:47 pm

And now chapter four: Treacherous Conditions Ahead.

You can guess what that means....
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:46 pm

And chapter 5 is now posted.

Mercury is being quite the busy villaness...
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Apr 06, 2018 7:19 pm

And now the crossover One Shot with Trimatter is up!
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Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri Apr 13, 2018 9:32 pm

And now we have ch7.

And yes this is where we get Eve.
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Fri May 04, 2018 8:48 pm

Chapter 10 is up.

It's the big fight at that Assembly of Man base.
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Ellen Kuhfeld » Sat May 05, 2018 9:02 am

Good Morning, Sunshine!

All along, the revised version has been listed as "complete". It's a bit of a nitpick, but could you take that off until Book Two (Revised) is complete? I read complete stories differently than in-process ones.
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Re: Return Revised Book Two: Betrayed Consequences

Postby Sunshine Temple » Sat May 05, 2018 12:26 pm

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:Good Morning, Sunshine!

All along, the revised version has been listed as "complete". It's a bit of a nitpick, but could you take that off until Book Two (Revised) is complete? I read complete stories differently than in-process ones.


Gah! Apologies about that.

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