Sketch of a one-shot

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Sketch of a one-shot

Postby Kadunta » Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:43 am

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Postby Dumbledork » Sat Jul 26, 2008 7:46 am

I like the idea so far. The only sad thing is Junko's death.
And that's the bottom line 'cause Dumbledork said so.

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Postby Tuisto » Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:57 pm

Interesting, very interesting.
About Junko, I agree with DumbleDork, though.
BUT if you are insistent on killing her off, you should have Ranma and gang go on a good-ol' Amazonian slaughter, revenge thing.
Not had one of those in a while...

Just a thought.
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Postby Kadunta » Sun Jul 27, 2008 7:10 am

Mmh, thru other channels I was also pointed out the chance/probable inevitability of Ranma & co going vigilante. I hadn't planned Junko's death to be anything more than a way to remove her and keep Shampoo out of the fic (her name wouldn't even have been mentioned in the fic).

The reason to cut those two out (and hopefully Ukyo, too) is that I try to keep this fic idea very short, because if I tried to make it any longer, it would never be finished. And the fic would really end in the last scene in the previous draft.
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