Akuma-sama wrote:Brutally short... Can't say much about how good it it because of that.
I'm curious as to how you'll tie the Mythos into this, though.
Sunshine wrote:My only gripe is the short chapters, but you break them well, and the dialog and setting is solid.
Might want to slow down some of the scenes and have more description to firm up events.
I do enjoy reading this story.
EdenB wrote:Although I should automatically dislike it for being Yet Another Ranma/Akane Fic (YARAF), it's actually well written and an interesting read.
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