Twice in a Millenium for Your Destiny is Annulled

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Twice in a Millenium for Your Destiny is Annulled

Postby khammel » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:01 pm

I was trying to come up with what would be needed to make a version of "Twice in a Millennium" [ http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1044202/1/T ... Millennium ] that was compatible with the "Your Destiny is Annulled" series. What are the discordant plot threads?

Sol vs Sun. could be fixed by word replacement (with care to preserve the entity 'sun' as opposed to the sailor 'sun').

The creation of the transformation device for Sailor Iris. Since we only really have Planetary Senshi to deal with here, it seems reasonable to have the senshi of the 'Shepherd worlds' to create the new transformation [Fill in Type Here]. The wand would still be made of a piece of the asteroid. The two Planetary shepherd senshi would stand at pi radians/180 degrees from each other and channel in a similar manner to what was described in "Twice".

Replacement of the Io transformation with one for Iris.

The disposition of the word millennium might be an issue as well. It depends on how far back 'Cheb' sees the silver millennium occurring. This would also be a good excuse to come up with a new name.

Changing the text that declares Akane the strongest Senshi.

Is Chizuko really needed? She was put in to give Rama an 'animal advisor' who wasn't a ccccccc... cat. But I am not sure of her place in this series.

Any comments?

Thanks, Kevin D. Hammel
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Re: Twice in a Millenium for Your Destiny is Annulled

Postby khammel » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:27 pm

Edited, not used to SI units for angular measure, sorry.

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Re: Twice in a Millenium for Your Destiny is Annulled

Postby Spokavriel » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:48 pm

What if Millenniums are treated line anniversaries? That would mean there are what 49 millenniums of history that was known of. . . Or maybe it could be like Golden Age, Silver Age. They knew of a prior great age of peace but had to flee a conflict and so the hopeful peace they had bought for themselves became the Silver Millennium. That way it is based on earlier history and could be anywhere in the past when looked at from the present day.
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