Queen Millennia 1/2

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Queen Millennia 1/2

Postby Jerry » Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:20 pm

One day, at the weekly Scout meeting, when the Earth spirit ask them to help one of her sister Earth, who is being attack by the planet and spirit of RaMetal. They meet with Queen Millennia, and learn that Earth history, With help of Ami, they found out that RaMetal was not going to hit Earth, and latter found out that they going to invade Earth.
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Re: Queen Millennia 1/2

Postby Sunshine Temple » Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:12 pm

Could expand that. Not sure where Ranma fits in really.

More details about RaMetal would be nice too.
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Re: Queen Millennia 1/2

Postby Pale Wolf » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:07 am

they found out that RaMetal was not going to hit Earth, and latter found out that they going to invade Earth.


... Meow? I'm confused now. Deeply.

I'm sure this idea is much better shaped in your head, but I comprehended about one sentence, and it was internally contradictory...
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