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Postby timdraco » Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:34 pm

Well its been a while since my brother died. I am hoping someone will take over his fic and see if they can do it justice. im posting what he had done and his notes. Anyone who wants to take a crack at it can.

Matt

Story:
Sailor Ranma 3/4 (change title?)

By: Timdraco

Prologue:

As a great battle rages during the rule of the silver moon kingdom, many battles where fought and many combat units deployed. The most famous of these great warriors was the bravo company of the silver knights. There commander was a fierce red headed women who's origins were lost in history. These are the events leading up to the fall of the silver moon kingdom as where recorded in the historical silver moon database.

(extend opening scene some, add more to the background)

Commander! A radio operator yelled, the enemy's foot youma and there commander are attacking sector 5! Good, there heading right into the Queen's trap, we will send the 5th and 6th platoons to reinforce the 3rd and 1st already defending that position. Tell the platoon commanders to open fire with the artillery and the soldiers to bunker down till the arty fire is done, if u need to contact me, i will be leading from the front. As the battle began, many soldiers had a morale boost as they watched there commander take charge and fight in the front lines of battle. Many youma died to her fierce attacks and massive skill. The soldiers knew that as long as the commander fought with them they would win. After a fierce battle where the many enemy youma where destroyed thanks to mass artillery fire and many small skirmishes the enemy commander finally called for a retreat.
(might extend this scene some, add some more soldier battle's and maybe enemy commander battle.)

Later after the battle clean up, and sending the wounded to the mage healers, the commander was then ordered to report to the moon palace to give a report of her company's status and followup reports on the wounded. There was also several dispatches that needed to be responded to as well as reports to file to headquarters. Several days later, with her reports filed and many of her wounded healed, the commander left for the moon.

(add space scene)

As her command ships shuttle landed on the moon near the palace, the commander felt that it was good to be home. As she walked into the waiting area of the palace, a young girl in a gown ran into her. With a startled ouch the young girl fell to the floor. Princess Serenity! The commander exclaimed, Are you ok? If your hurt i can call a medic and i don't think your guards are happy when u run off, they are there to protect u from assassins and such. I am fine exclaimed the princess, just a little bruised. I am sorry for running into you. And i know about the guards but i hate being treated like a little kid! They follow me around and don't let me have any fun at all! I wish i could lead soldiers like u do. Oh, The Queen wants to see you about your wedding plans. Princess, what are you talking about exclaimed the commander, i am not getting married! I think that's what she meant about wedding plans. Bye! Yelled the young princess serenity, as the only living princess of the moon she knew all about weddings and how her mother loved to surprise the ones she thought worthy. As the young princess ran off with her guards following closely behind, the commander looked amused. Kids, it's going to be one of those days i think. The commander thought. The kind of day you knew something bad was being foreshadowed.

(add more maybe princess runs off to her other senshi?)

As she entered into the throne room she noticed several of the kingdoms army generals and admirals where smirking at her. The commander then knew that she was in deep and sinking fast, as a chill went up her spine when she noticed the Queen sitting on her throne with a happy smile on her face, and even the ice princess herself, the guardian of the time gates princess Pluto looking at her with pity. She wished she could just go right back to the battlefield, at least there where no politics! If she only knew that the princess Pluto had already known what she was thinking and agreed she would have ran as fast and far as she could.

(think i might extend this to add more detail, thrown room etc.)

Hmm much foreshadowing methinks. Chaos must be coming soon!


Ideas:
1: ranma gets caught with a cure, and the nerima wrecking crew end up getting him stuck as a female. Now a she decides to move to juuban and gets caught up in the whole sailor moon arc season 1.
2: Do a complete arc on what life was like in silver millennium then do arc where season 1 of ranma merges with season 1 of sailor moon.
3: maybe a marvel/ranma/sailor moon crossover???? (venom would look cool)
4: hmmm add maybe a lemon or two into the fic. Maybe do a pg one for ff.net and do the lemon version on ficwad.
5: add more omakes!
6: tribute to Michael Jackson somewhere hidden in fic, then do contest where who ever spots it gets there name in fic.
7: add lots of action, romance and wackiness into fic.
8: make chapters longer.
9: look up marine squad movements and add them into fic (side note check out marine call signs and radio ideas).
10: hmm add a weapon that ranma can unlock after awhile to help out instead of increasing her power. think something that hasn't been done before. (slingshot? axe something like that)
11: costume design's a must! find a artist and see if they would do a uniform ranma pic. Thinking maybe take a marine uniform and make it more sailor moonish. Add maybe a visor ala mercury.
12: find beta writer to check fic!
13: get fukufic writers to check out fic! add a note on top of new chapter to thank fukufic.com for there help and all they achieve.
14: hmmm time travel? ranma meet ranma? Pluto pissed off? maybe
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