Bishonen Senshi, Unlucky Ranma

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Bishonen Senshi, Unlucky Ranma

Postby WG_Writer » Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:54 pm

Ok, this idea is up for grabs. It is still in very early stages and does draw heavily on already done fics, without being too close.
Here is the basic premsis: Ranma was first born a guy in the silver millineum, but the Silver crystal (could never spell its proper name) almost immediately turns him into a girl so it could bond with 'him'. Vague problem, only girls can use it. The queen decides to shift her back to a guy a month later after the magic sets in and the bond goes passive.
Ranma is barely 1 year old when the Dark kingdom attacks, and the guardian mantles for the sailor senshi are not ready. The chosen guardians are linked to Ranma, so that they will be drawn together by fate (over done, no better ideas). The Queen still does the ultimate attack. Then the Senshi to be get pushed forward to be reborn along with Ranma, Nodoka and Genma.
When they reach the future Nodoka and Genma settle down and get married, they claim Ranma as theirs, however it becomes decided that a few backup plans are needed. The Sepuku contract is setup as a 'blind' incase a dark general gets too close. Which happens when Ranma is 5. Ranma is then taken on the 'training trip' to both learn how to fight, and to hide him, while Nodoka looks for the Senshi.
The Neko-ken happens by accident rather then Genma's foolishness, he rather runs into Ryu Kumon's father teaching his son the technique. Genma manages to stop him but Ranma falls in. The protective magics created a "Psudo-Neko-ken" It works the same, but is caused by self preservation as well as fear of cats.
The rest of the training trip as well occurs similar. The Ukyo incident was much the same, only instead of Genma accepting the proposal he refuses it. Ukyo's father then hides the cart and tells Ukyo that her fiancee abandoned her, and her story is the same from that point out, minus the chasing the cart. (She runs along the road looking, but doesn't find them)
Jusenkyo occurs as it did in the manga, as well as the Amazons, however, Cologne (who has refained her memories knows who they are, she was also the only Senshi from the SM that was old enough to know, the rest were infants) pushes Shampoo to fight them and then chase after them. (she is still given the cat curse after the inital failure to moniter them, something cologne regrets when the neko-ken is exposed)
The Manga follows the same story with little to no change, until Nodoka shows up.
During the first meeting Ranma-chan ends up fighting beside the river/ditch a minor monster, Nodoka shows up and sees the girl and the cresent moon on her forehead, she interviens and holds off the youma long enough to give Ranma-chan the transformation broach. After the fight Nodoka shows her true form (Luna) and Ranma detransforms and runs away sacred. Luna is puzzled by this and does not have a clue its Ranma. She transforms back and continues on her trek to the Tendo Dojo, where she expects to find Sailors Mercury, Mars, and Neptune.
Ranma hides the broach and transforms back to male, he then notices that the brooch disappeared completely. He reverts back to girl form and finds it again, it appears to only be available to his girl form. He keeps it as hidden as he can, and when Nodoka arrives, she is estactic to see her 'son'. (Genma did not hide, since he had no reason)
Before the curse is revieled there is a monster attack down town. The Tendo sisters are in the area and Ranma goes out to protect them, which reminds both of Ranma's true mother.
Ranma arrives on the scene and sees the Monster, he finds water and transforms unnoticed. He had decided to fight with the powers after what he learned in the last fight. Luna and Artemis show up and awaken the Tendo sisters' powers. But when they transform they become guys. The Shock causes them to scream, startling Ranma and the Youma which Ranma recovers from first and finishes the monster. Luna tried to approach Ranma again causing the detransforming Red-head to scream and run into a wall, and gets knocked out. Artemis explains to Luna about the Neko-ken accident, to which he recieves a pounding. both are cats, she has claws, he has learned on his training in the Silver Millenium the Crouch of the White Tiger.
Happosai was in the SM and got sent forward, he arrived like colone, much earlier. He trained Soun who Happosai always compaired to Genma. After Genma arrived the two met, but Happosai was not sealed by them, it was a mob of girls after him that sealed him. The reason for his acting that way in the Manga was mostly himself, but he also knew that Ranma had a hard road comming.
It later gets revieled that the Sailor Terra (female Tuxedo Kamen) that helps time to time is actually him. His true form is actually a ~25 year old man, and he wears a disgusie field (like Yosho from Tenchi Muyo).
Cologne wears the same disguise field for the same reason.
The reason for the gender change has to do with three magics interacting:
1. The silver crystal, it desires all the Senshi to be the same gender as the wielder, (terra) kamen is an abriviation.
2. The magic that the crystal first used, this rated Ranma to it as female regardless of form
3. Jusenkyo caused a 'jam' in the normal magics. since Ranma's male form is read to the silver crystal as female, and he uses non silver crystal magics to switch form, it reads the new form as male, despite being female.
Because of this all the mantals get updated before actually being activated.
Genma would be shown as more careing for Ranma and less impatient and less selfish. But he is still as layed back as ever. He did get the panda curse, but it only affects his human form.
Shampoo's curse also only affects her non-senshi state.
Luna and Artemis, their cat forms are less common due to Ranma's fear, but they would often use them when they can, especially since Genma was stuck human for 10 years.
The basic plot would follow Season 1 of Sailor moon, in terms of who the fight, and the rainbow crystals, and ultimately the Silver Crystal.
character as roll / sent or reborn
Ranma as Sailor Moon /brought to the future
Happosai as Sailor Terra / sent to the future (not reborn)
Nabiki as Tuxedo Mercury / reborn in the future
Shampoo as Tuxedo Venus / reborn in the future
Akane as Tuxedo Mars / reborn in the future
Ukyo as Tuxedo Jupiter / reborn in the future
Hinako as Tuxedo Saturn / reborn in the future
Kodachi as Tuxedo Uranus / reborn in the future
Kasumi as Tuxedo Neptune / reborn in the future
Cologne as Tuxedo Pluto / sent to the future (not reborn), adopted into the amazons
Nodoka as Luna / Sent
Genma as Artemis / Sent
if you want real fun(chaos) use chibi-usa
Storm trooper effect works against good guys as well.
No matter how strong you are, there is always a teenager able to beat you without breaking a sweat.
A blind Paladin can only hear half truths
A deaf Paladin can only see half truths
Either way the Paladin is a berserker
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Re: Bishonen Senshi, Unlucky Ranma

Postby iiradned » Thu Apr 13, 2006 4:44 pm

WarGiver wrote:character as roll / sent or reborn
Ranma as Sailor Moon /brought to the future
Happosai as Sailor Terra / sent to the future (not reborn)
Nabiki as Tuxedo Mercury / reborn in the future
Shampoo as Tuxedo Venus / reborn in the future
Akane as Tuxedo Mars / reborn in the future
Ukyo as Tuxedo Jupiter / reborn in the future
Hinako as Tuxedo Saturn / reborn in the future
Kodachi as Tuxedo Uranus / reborn in the future
Kasumi as Tuxedo Neptune / reborn in the future
Cologne as Tuxedo Pluto / sent to the future (not reborn), adopted into the amazons
Nodoka as Luna / Sent
Genma as Artemis / Sent
if you want real fun(chaos) use chibi-usa

So if you stick to Sailor Moon matchups this would pair up Ranma and Happosai.
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Postby WG_Writer » Thu Apr 13, 2006 6:50 pm

I will leave that to the writter foolish enough to try, besides both are male or female at the same time.
Storm trooper effect works against good guys as well.
No matter how strong you are, there is always a teenager able to beat you without breaking a sweat.
A blind Paladin can only hear half truths
A deaf Paladin can only see half truths
Either way the Paladin is a berserker
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