The White Princess of Belka: A Sailor Moon/Nanoha Crossover

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The White Princess of Belka: A Sailor Moon/Nanoha Crossover

Postby Comartemis » Wed Aug 12, 2009 2:11 pm

Somewhere in the multiverse there exists a small and unassuming planet inhabited only by a handful of scientists and the local wildlife. This planet, far outside the reach of the TSAB, is home to an illegal cloning facility experimenting in the resurrection of the dead via the application of the techniques pioneered by Jail Scaglietti and Precia Testarossa's Project FATE. Their latest project is the resurrection of none other than the Saint King of Belka herself, using genetic material and funding provided by Jail Scaglietti.

But one scientist is having second thoughts about this project. Sierra Altmann, head researcher and erstwhile "mother" of Vivio, has grave misgivings about entrusting a clone of her beloved monarch into the hands of a madman like Scaglietti, and in the midst of preparing Vivio for her role in Jail's plot, decides that she cannot allow "her" child to suffer at Jail's hands, and begins to sabotage Vivio's "development", simultaneously beginning a plot to remove Vivio from Jail's reach. Several weeks later, Sierra makes her move, abducting Vivio from her stasis capsule and transporting her to a planet on the far side of the multiverse. However the design of the lab's teleportation grid prevents Sierra from leaving with Vivio, and before Sierra can escape herself, her treachery is discovered by her co-workers. Sierra is killed for her betrayal just after destroying all records of Vivio's location.

All is not lost, however. While Vivio is all alone and stranded on a distant planet, Sierra's sabotage involved partially linking Vivio to her relic, simultaneously aging her up slightly (due to the partial activation of the Saint's Armor mode) and rendering her capable of defending herself. She also possesses a small device Sierra created for her, and while Vivio's memories of being the Saint King have been almost entirely stripped from her, she retains enough of her former self to come across more as an amnesiac pre-teen and not a useless toddler like she was in StrikerS.

Lastly, and most importantly, she's not alone on this new planet. As a matter of fact, she's right smack in the middle of the Juuban district of Tokyo... and you all know where this is going. :twisted:

Vivio has been on her own for less than a day before she finds herself running for her life from a particularly persistent daimon (leftovers from S, not the current monsters of the week). Vivio doesn't yet have the strength or reflexes necessary to pose a threat to even a standard youma, much less a daimon, but just as it looks like her heart crystal is about to be eaten, Saturn and Mercury come to the rescue.

With Vivio's situation brought to the attention of the Senshi, it is quickly determined by Usagi that they can't possibly leave Vivio alone, not only because she's apparently an orphan with no idea where she came from, but also because her enormous and uncontained magical energy signature is attracting the attention of demons from all across Tokyo; leaving her alone is tantamount to killing her, so the Senshi collectively adopt Vivio into their extended family.

((Meanwhile, beyond the Fourth Wall, I'll see your Nanoha-mama and Feito-mama and raise you Usagi-mama, Mamoru-papa, Ami-mama, Rei-mama, Minako-mama, Makoto-mama, Michiru-mama, Haruka-papa, Setsuna-mama, Hotaru-neesan, and Chibi-Usa-neesan! :P ))

Vivio's adoption brings about... complications, however. First, demons of all sorts are flooding into Juuban in huge numbers to get at Vivio's energy, so the Senshi are pressed harder than they've ever been to keep the people of Tokyo safe. Vivio is legally adopted by Haruka and Michiru and has to go to school with Hotaru, leading to conflicts with the same bullies Hotaru has to deal with. And of course just because Sierra deleted Vivio's transit coordinates doesn't mean Jail isn't going to be looking for her with all the resources at his disposal...
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Re: The White Princess of Belka: A Sailor Moon/Nanoha Crossover

Postby Sky » Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:13 pm

Fascinating idea.

A couple of thoughts:

Vivio might not take to Ami (or might REALLY take to her) depending on how Ami handles her first few meetings with her or how geeky she's written because Vivio might start thinking about being poked and prodded earlier. Having said that, I think that Vivio might take to Hotaru really well.

Would Nanoha, Fate and Section 6 come to Vivio's rescue in the end or to help the Senshi with Jail?

Vivio's adoption by Michiru and Haruka would still take time and depending on how fast the story moves, that might not be plausible...would they just take her in in the meantime? Failing that, what about Makoto or Ami?
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Re: The White Princess of Belka: A Sailor Moon/Nanoha Crossover

Postby Comartemis » Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:51 am

Vivio might not take to Ami (or might REALLY take to her) depending on how Ami handles her first few meetings with her or how geeky she's written because Vivio might start thinking about being poked and prodded earlier. Having said that, I think that Vivio might take to Hotaru really well.

Definitely. Hotaru is planned to be one of the main characters for this fic (partially because she has practically no good fics focusing on her and partially just because I like her better than the others :P ), and her sisters/friends relationship with Vivio is going to replace Nanoha's mother role, up to and including the final showdown in the Cradle's throne room.

Would Nanoha, Fate and Section 6 come to Vivio's rescue in the end or to help the Senshi with Jail?

They'll definitely be around in the background, but it's likely this change of events means Jail will be able to allocate more of his forces to taking down the Aces, and if that happens they won't be able to muster as much of an offensive effort when Jail makes his move. After focusing on the Senshi for the entire story, it would be somewhat disappointing for the Aces to swoop in and steal the show out from under them.

This, of course, will demand some upgrades to the Senshi arsenal to allow them to keep pace with the Numbers. I've already thought of matching Tre against Pluto (magical bullet time > super speed) and Moon vs Dieci is also probable on account of their respective loves for massive energy attacks. Any upgrades I give them will be less in the way of firepower and more in the way of flexibility and stat boosts.

For instance, it occurred to me during a brainstorming session a while back that the Senshi uniforms are actually a form of ceremonial armor, not something that's actually meant to be worn on the battlefield. The big power-up of the season is receiving their proper armor which looks something like this and provides massively superior damage resistance to the current fukus along with massive strength and speed boosts. Of course, a few new attacks are inevitable at some point, especially for Saturn.

Vivio's adoption by Michiru and Haruka would still take time and depending on how fast the story moves, that might not be plausible...would they just take her in in the meantime? Failing that, what about Makoto or Ami?

Yeah, Michi and Haruka would take Vivio in unofficially until Setsuna pulls some strings. I'm not touching the "Pluto manipulates events with the time gate" cliche, but Setsuna has had a few thousand years to accumulate resources the traditional way to help the Senshi when they really need it, and this would be one of those times.
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