Last Grandmaster 5

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Last Grandmaster 5

Postby genhoss2 » Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:03 am

Okay, I have been teetering back and forth over posting this as besides some small changes this chapter and several more are already completed and making alot of changes would require a massive rewrite to ensure continuety. That said Below you will find half of Chapter 5 and the rest can be found

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7644254/1/T ... randmaster

The reason why I decided to post this is two fold, c and c for those small things i might have over looked in my latest run through as well as to address an issue i keep getting emails over.

I have gotten several emails telling me that what I have been doing to ranma is nothing short of charecter rape and turning him into a gary stu. Some are polite, some are borderline hostile. I've never actually had an issue with this in the past and frankly I know I should just ignore it. So instead of replying to a bunch of emails I figured that i would post this in a forum to open a door if anyone is feeling the urge to discuss what they feel i am doing wrong. Will it change anything? probably not.

Also is Ranma locked. For now but it's part of the long term plot, Ranma-kun will be in this fic though I need to check but i think it is chapter 15 where he makes his first appearance.

What was done to Ranma is plot essential, will he be able to snap out of it? Yes, but not until chapter 10 or 11 I have to look to make sure on that. Could I have used a different plot device? Yes but in the end out of several different idea's this one was the most creative and did not seem as much as a clone as what some of the other ideas might have been. In the NGE series there are a few different agenda's running around, in this crossover I added a few others that revolve around the Ranma verse while keeping the original ones still in play. So if there is a question about it drop a reply and if it is not a potential spoiler issue I would be more than happy to discus it.


Anyway here's a sneek peak at chapter 5


A few days later

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“Oh come on Misato…” Ranma complained, “The doc told me I could use crutches.”

“Not exactly she said you could use them, she didn‘t say anything about you actually using them… Seeing that she also told you to take things easy… And since you don‘t like to listen to things concerning your health…” Misato replied as she continued to push the girl through the hall.

“But a wheel chair?” the redhead protested before grumbling out, “And did you have to chain me to it?”

“It’s for the best.” the purple haired woman answered easily.

“You know I can snap easily snap these chains… Right?” the redhead questioned while leveling a baneful glare down to her waist.

“True… But then you won’t get any ice cream later…”

“I’ll be good.” Ranma supplied quietly while mentally cursing the woman for knowing one of her few weaknesses.

Glancing down at her charge with a victorious smile only to take note of the way the girl was sitting with her legs parted Misato sighed out, “Honestly Yoiko, sometimes you are such a boy.” Leaning over her charge and gently pushing her thighs together she finished, “You don’t want all the boys trying to look up your skirt do you?“

Blushing from the feel of the older woman’s chest briefly brushing against the back of her head Ranma grumbled, “Shouldn’t be wearing a skirt in the first place…”

“Ah, but you look so pretty.“ Misato teased as she leaned forward to ring the bell.

“Hey I can open the door from here.‘ Ranma stated as she made a move for the handle.

“Nope, let Shinji or Rei open the door.” Misato stated as she pulled the chair back earning an indigent squawk from her passenger.

“…” Ranma tried as the door swung open and she was greeted with a loud shout of surprise.

Grinning lightly at the sight before her Ranma offered, “You guy’s didn’t really need to do this.”

Pushing the redhead through the door Misato offered, “Yes we did, it’s been too quiet round here.” After pausing to swipe an offered beer from Shinji the woman added, “Now let’s get his party started… YEEE--HAWW NOW THAT’S THE STUFF!!!”

“Geeze Misato… You just got here and you’re drinking already.” Ritsuko teased as she swooped in behind Ranma and began to wheel her further into the room.

“Hey, all work and no play makes for a bad day.” Misato cheered as she disappeared into the kitchen for another beer.

Stopping in front of Rei and another girl from the redheads school Ritsuko took the bag hanging off the handles and asked, “Rei could you put this stuff away in Yoiko’s room.

“I’ll help…” Hikari offered relieving the woman of the medium sized bag. as she correctly assumed that the blond woman wanted to speak to the redhead for a minute. “Which room is it Rei?”

“This way.” Rei motioned as she stoically tried to ignore the floppy party hat that Misato had made her wear.

“Well she seems to be opening up a little…” Ranma noted as she watched Rei lead the brunette down the hall.

“It seems that way doesn’t it.” Ritsuko noted curiously before coming around to face the seated girl to say, “I’m going to unlock the chains. The way I see it you have two options, you can take my advice as a medical specialist and take things easy for now, or you can continue to disregard your wellbeing and next time I will chain you up and lock you in the darkest dungeon I can find at Nerv until I am satisfied with your health.”

Sweating at the intimidating glare being shot her way Ranma conceded, “I’ll take your advice.

“Good… I’m glad you’ve decided to see things my way.”

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Taking a look around the sparsely decorated room Hikari asked, “This is Yoiko’s room? Seems kind of empty.”

Pausing as she entered the room Rei once again re-evaluated her orders. She had not been having much success in finding Yoiko doing anything of a really suspicious manner. After doing a lot of research she had decided that perhaps the reason why she wasn’t having any luck was that she did not talk very often and as such could not garner the information the commander wanted. To that end after the class rep had decided to approach her regarding Yoiko’s and Shinji’s health Rei had decided expand on her orders by attempting to befriend the girl thinking that perhaps the other girl with her more talkative nature could unknowingly assist her in her own goals.

To that end Rei answered, “Yoiko does not have many possessions.”

“Oh…” Hikari stated diplomatically before cheerfully adding, “Perhaps when she gets out of the wheel chair we can go shopping or something.” Spotting an empty fish bowl she added, “Does she like fish?”

Tracking the other girls gaze Rei frowned marginally and answered, “Yoiko has two fish, I will be right back.”

“What a strange girl… Though I am glad to see her finally opening up a little, she’s always been so quiet.” Shrugging to herself the brunette began to dig through the bag and arrange its contents in the room.

“Plushy Panda… Set that on the bed… Stuffed pig… Next to the panda… Socks… I’ll just set that on the dresser… Two cards… Next to the socks… Deflated balloons… night stand…”

Splash

Looking up Hikari saw Rei emptying the contents of a plastic bag into the fish bowl. Curios as to what the other girl was doing she moved in a little closer to see that the previously empty fish bowl now had two fish in it.

Not really feeling a need to explain her actions but realizing that if she wanted the other girls unknowing assistance then she should offer an explanation Rei supplied, “Yoiko’s fish have been disappearing in her absence, Misato picked up several replacement fish and has been storing them in the hall closet.”

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“Hey that smells pretty good.” Ranma commented as she wheeled herself into the kitchen. “Who’s cooking?”

“Out…” Misato commanded with a wave of her hand, “Shinji is, and dinner will be ready soon, so go find Rei and Hikari and ask Rei to set the table.”

“I’ll do it.” Shinji stated as he began to rummage through the shelves to get everything ready.

Giving her friend an odd look Ritsuko commented, “You seem to have things well in hand. I would have never guessed that you were this good with kids.”

Snorting in disbelief Misato returned, “Naw, when Shinji cooks I have to keep Yoiko out of the kitchen cause if I don’t the food might not make it to the table. Haven’t you ever seen the girl eat?”

Shaking her head the blond doctor replied, “No not really, just when I was in her room when meals were brought in… I guess she did sort of inhale it.”

“That’s putting it mildly.” Misato stated back while giving a wave to Penpen and adding, “And you… Stay out of the fish bowl… I mean it or so help me no more beer for you.”

“WAARK…” Penpen replied indignantly with a sniff as he made his way into his cooler.

“I heard that mister.” Misato warned with a wag of her finger.

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A little later after dinner.

“That was really good Shinji.” Ritsuko complemented easily before adding, “It’s a definite change since last time I was over, instant ramen in beer.”

“Hey, that was good stuff…” Misato defended.

Turning her attention to the redhead at the table Hikari asked, “Yoiko, Rei mentioned something at lunch today about you aggravating your injuries when you went to go look for Shinji?”

Still feeling embarrassed over his own decision to leave and then return Shinji bowed his head hoping to hide the flush of his cheeks.

Ritsuko looked before the brunette and then the redhead who seemed to be debating her answer. Having not received an answer of her own from when she had asked the girl earlier that day she added, “You mentioned you used a secret technique and that it was supposed to be sealed or something.”

“Yeah…” Ranma started out awkwardly with a tug to her pigtail, “It’s a technique my grandfather came up with…”

“Right you mentioned that earlier, but why is it supposed to be sealed?”

Sweating a little bit from the curious looks she was getting Ranma finally relented, “Well originally, gramps, he well came up with them for stealing, and sealed them once he realized their potential.”

“But they’re unsealed now?” Ritsuko prodded after glancing around the table and seeing the intent looks of interest upon the redhead.

“Uhhh… Not really, but I don’t use any of them unless I think it’s necessary, I was still sort of feeling that concussion when I used it so I probably won’t be using that one again.”

Thinking that perhaps this information might be important Rei decided to ask, “How does probably infer that the technique will remain sealed.”

Surprised at the fact that Rei was asking her that Ranma defended herself with, “Well, some of the other sealed techniques have proven to be very effective in damaging the angels so far, so I really can’t say that turning invisible won’t help at some point. I know of a few other stealth techniques so it all depends on the battle.”

“Yoiko? Might I ask a question, I don’t mean to pry…”

Shrugging Ranma replied, “Hikari? I guess…”

“But did you say that your grandfather created techniques for the sole purpose of stealing?” Hikari blushed.

“Yeah…” Ranma replied, “I don’t know what he was thinking back then but at least he wasn’t like the grandmaster of the school.”

“Ohhh… Do tell…” Misato pleaded wanting to know why her grandfather not being like the grandmaster of their art was a good thing.”

“The letch created a lot of his techniques to make stealing girls underwear easier.”

Snickering Misato shouted out, “Wait so the grandmaster of your school was a panty thief?”

“How… I mean what possible techniques are there that could possibly be used for that?” Ritsuko wondered out loud.

“More than what you would think.” Ranma stated before continuing, “The technique that I was working on with the fish, originally was used to drain the angry ki from nurses at a hospital. And there’s other techniques that go along with it but then there’s several techniques that the letch would use to steal them off of the women wearing them…”

“Yoiko is this guy still around?” Ritsuko asked noticing that the girl seemed to have a small amount of personal venom leaking into her words.

“Not that I know of… He just used to always harass my mother and she would tell me stories… Still makes me angry…” Ranma defended.

“Enough of about that…” Misato slurred slightly, “How was he taking them off the girls wearing them… Was he like…”

Shaking her head the redhead almost wanted to deny it outright but found herself saying, “Sort of, he was mostly harmless just limited himself to groping and stuff.”

“Yeah but… How did he do it, it just seems that there’s really only one way to do it and that’s… well…” Ritsuko leaded wanting to know where the conversation would go.

“You really want to know?” Ranma asked as her shoulders slumped in defeat.”

“As long as it’s something That Shinji-kun can watch…” Misato teased while batting her eyes at the sole physically male in the room.

“Fine…” the redhead finally conceded before adding, “Remember you all asked me to show you so no calling me a pervert…” Looking over at the purple haired women next to her she added, “And I really can’t do this to myself, So I sort of need a volunteer.”

“Yeah yeah…” Misato waved off, “Go ahead and show us this technique.”

Flushing deep scarlet Ranma shakily reached out with her hands before frowning in concentration to keep them still.

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Shinji’s eye’s nearly bogged out of his head while he watched Yoiko shamelessly and blatantly fondle his guardians breasts. Despite being transfixed by the motion the boy colored in embarrassment for his guardian, this was compounded with a face palm as he witnessed what happened once Yoiko withdrew her hands.

Slightly buzzed from drinking Misato’s own cheeks colored in embarrassment as she felt the small hands blatantly but gently feel her up only for her eyes to widen in disbelief when she felt the hands withdrawal leaving her chest in their natural position. Unable to believe it despite knowing it to be true the woman looked down while holding her top away from herself.

Holding the older woman’s bra in her hand Ranma replied uncomfortably, “My mother said he was a bit less gentle about things but that’s pretty much the technique.”

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“I’ll call you tomorrow Rei, maybe we can all do something.” Hikari suggested warmly as she hugged the girl good bye.

Stepping in to the conversation Misato reminded, “Rei has an activation test tomorrow with her Eva so she might be busy.”

“Oh…” Hikari blushed before adding, “Well good luck with that then and call me if you get done early.” Seeing the girl nod at her the brunette then turned her attention to the chair bound redhead and stated, “And you Yoiko, you take care of yourself okay, we don’t want you falling behind any further than what you already are in your school work.”

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Wheeling into her bedroom Ranma paused and hit the lights to look around, for a brief second when she came in she could have sworn that she heard the scurrying of little feet. At first she didn’t see anything out of place, everything seemed to be where it was the last time she entered. Deflated balloons on the nightstand… check… plushy panda on bed… check… stuffed pig next to panda… check… realistic looking penguin in-between stuffed animals… check… one fish swimming in bowl…”




“Wait a sec…” Ranma thought to herself, “Did that penguin have a fin sticking out of it’s mouth…”

“Oh here you are.” Misato interrupted unknowingly aiding her good friend in his endeavors to remain hidden.

“Oh hey Misato. I tried to help clean up but Shinji wouldn’t let me and Rei pushed me into the hall before telling me that my ‘presence was not required.”

“That’s fine, they know that you are supposed to be taking things easy.”

“Yeah but…”

Shrugging the older woman replied, “If it helps just think of yourself as our little princess until I tell you otherwise.” Concerned over the loud gagging noises coming from Yoiko Misato asked, “Are you okay?”

“No I’m fine…” Ranma stammered out nervously as she continued to mentally choke on the idea of being a princess.

“Okay then, well I guess it’s bath time then… “Misato said before switching to a faux British accent and adding, “My lady… The bath has been drawn and your handmaiden awaits.“

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Re: Last Grandmaster 5

Postby Dumbledork » Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:31 am

Heh. Strange how in every fic where Ranma gets a plush toy it's either a pig or a panda.

I don't see why people say that Ranma is a Gary Stu. So far I don't think he has done anything he can't do in the manga.
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Re: Last Grandmaster 5

Postby genhoss2 » Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:56 am

I don't either, Every technique he's done I've had him train to be able to do. I even had some blow up in his face. I think the only original technique EDIT--- sorry there was a little spoiler for the later-----. I haven't even really come up with any real new techniques for him to use though, most of the ones are just slight variations of ones from Ranma cannon where he has adapted them to suit his needs which I think that Ranma in cannon would do if it was nessisary.

Actually the pig plushy was a whim but then I got to thinking about it and added the panda plushy for the plot. Well it plays a small part in the plot.
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Re: Last Grandmaster 5

Postby Dumbledork » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:06 am

I liked the Pen Pen appearances.
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