Your Destiny is Annulled, Ch10

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Your Destiny is Annulled, Ch10

Postby Cheb » Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:45 am

Boo-hoo-hoo, nobody commented on my previous chapter :cry:

Anyway.

Here's the conclusion of that epic fight I wrote under the impression of watching DBZ-Kai a year ago.

http://217.70.20.10/tuu/your_destiny_is ... _10_e.html
http://www.chebmaster.narod.ru/tuu/your ... _10_e.html

I got no comments from the Orphus JavaScript Ctrl+Enter notifier. It doesn't work from outside of RF? Or nobody cares?

I decided to rename Ranko to Ranma (will retcon the previous chapters when I get time for it) I was calling her Ranko only forthe reader's sake, to easily distignuish Ranma's male and female forms. But as he spends 99% time female (and will be soon locked forever) there's no actual need for it. Anyway all I got from the readers were complaints.

The second reason, "Ranma" inflects normally in Russian while "Ranko" is one of those foreign names that do not. Replacing it with "Ranma" makes writing a tad easier allowing the sentences to flow more naturally. Not to mention you can say "Ranma's" but "Ranko's" just won't form properly leaving one with even less options.

I'm officially releasing Chapter 9 on ffnet.
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