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Re: A wish gone horribly wrong chapter 2

PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 1:32 am
by Dumbledork
1) It's a crossover. Ranma went into the 'The Wotch' world.

http://www.thewotch.com/

2) When you talk about bashing, do you mean the NWC's reaction to Belldandy? That's just for comedy purposes. The NWC won't appear again in the story, at least not for a very long time. I think you can only call it bashing in a more serious story, but since this is comedy I don't think it's really that out of the place.

Maybe you could be more specific and tell me what I should change. I'm always open for suggestions.

3) Belldandy won't appear much in the future. She was mainly the means to send Ranma to the other universe.

Re: A wish gone horribly wrong chapter 2

PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:28 pm
by Dumbledork
Revised chapter's up at ff.net. I made a lot of changes to the first version taking into account your opinions and corrections. I hope it's better now.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5006055/2/A ... ibly_wrong