Seahorse - Complete - One Shot

[borgrabbit]

A number of people have made what seems very good constructive criticism. PCHeinz comes to mind (forget if I spelled that correctly, sorry) for detailed and thorough comments. However, the Heart of the matter is that I like the story very much and it would take many more warts to make me shy away. Find a good beta reader if you can, but this forum of helpful people appears to be doing the job as well. Please let us see how the Nerimoids react to a more worldly Ranma and his girlfriend Michiru. Also, would the enemies of the senshi force Ranma to reach the highest martial levels sooner? After all, blowing up mountain tops ranks pretty high on the WMD scale.
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