Career Opportunities Chapter San

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Re: Career Opportunities Chapter San

Postby Tentai21 » Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:21 pm

PCHeintz72 wrote:It is not like Seina seemed to know or care what was happening with a portion of his pay, he certainly seemed surprised when he went home.


From my understanding i would think Seina would to to overwhelmed with what he is doing and with amaina taking him into her home during his training to control his enhancement and her buying things for him i would think it never crossed his mind to ask what was happening with his money.

When you think about it with seina he is getting what to hims seems to be a very strange dream. A fantasy with all this hightechnology and such around, aliens and royalty he probably forgot that it is a job, that ahd he was signing up for a job.

With ranma he could remember that this is a job at some point and ask either his dormates or airi or maybe seto her self at some point or whats her name the woman with seto about how the money and such is being done.

I was going to ask about the hint but realised after reading what you wrote back that this was the hint thanks.
Though it was a bit foolish of me as i started putting up the sentance in a quote here and after i reread it i realised that you had answered it.

LawOhki wrote:No old connection to Jurai. It's a little too close to my other story No Need for Nerima.


Well from you other story ranmas connection from what i understand is from his mothers side like ryoko, but not a jurain connection.
By the meaning of the strange power it make ranma closer to the space trees of jurai and able to communicate with them though he would have to train to make active use of it, not like i was saying that ranma would start using the lighth hawk wings like tenchi does.

Just that he would have a far closer relationship to the trees and so able to some extent command them if he need to or stop them if their bonded is acting poorly.

LawOhki wrote:That was because Ryo-Ohki is a pirate ship, Seina attracted her.


Well i was using that idea as ranma having such a strange connection to the trees of jurai that he can do something similar when he is introuble in space and ends up calling a few space trees to him.
Which would be funny as the bonded of that tree would be wondering how and why that their partner came to help.

Though it does beg the question in the end what will ranma job be with seto as will he be acting like seina or doing something else though i think only seto and tsunami will really know what ranmas job will be in the end.

Though in some way its sort of wondering what will ranma have going for him?

Though Lawohki wha did you think of the enhancement idea or the mental trigger for the water curse or the armband?

Off topic just a weird idea and question.
Though in this last peice is just something i thought of what would be the most powerful the power that the wings of the light hawk are created from or represents of the power cosmic that galactis uses?
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Re: Career Opportunities Chapter San

Postby Tentai21 » Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:52 pm

LawOhki wrote:Ranma is also not part of the GP, merely attending their academy along with Seina to learn about life in space. Ranma is part of Jurai's military, though as soon as he's bonded to a tree he'll be part of the royal family making that irrelevant. Hence why his pay won't matter, things will simply be taken care of.



Though i do wonder what ranma life at the academy will be like, and with his dormates what will they be doing after ranma leaves to start learning in jurais military?

That and how will ranmas next meeting with mihoshi be like?

Though if ranma were to bond with the first generation and i think this seed and the other are one of the oldest around besides tsunamis tree would also put him like seina 3rd or 4th in line to the throne of jurai.
Something i think ranma if this happend would be horrified to learn as it would mean he could have more than one wife. Something ranma had been dodging as well as thankful that he didn't have to marry any of the girls or all of them.


That said i still hope ranma does get someone he can like enough to marry and not any of those his father has made engagments to like akane.
though i personally don't mind kasumi, maybe Mitoto even Minaho.

Though just something else i thought of was something a bit crazy with seto coming with ranma on his holiday to earth and seeing ranmas mother nodoka and thinking in some strange way how much nodoka is like a lost daughter of hers.
Though by that i mean her obssecion of ranma having a lot of girls, though seto would most likely also thing that nodoka has potential to be something like her.
Another horror would her adopting nodoka as her daughter meaning she would have more fun in toying with ranma outside his duties. Though that woul also mean that Genma would become her son-in-law and either someone she wants gone or who she can work on making into a better person or just someone she can torment besides others like normal.

That said i can also see how azura and yosho plus ayeka and other would feel sorry for ranma as he would be under setos thumb in eye in more ways than one and unable to escape from it.
bad enough serving under her another having her as your adopted grandmother.
Drinking and comiserating with ranma over this sad but halarius turn of events as it may mean that they personally wont have to much of her attention, that and seina suffering later.

Though i think ranma would click to seeing how seto has seina grouped with females and also from the stories he may get told before or after he joins seto. Thinking thank god its seina and not him before realising that he's alot closer to seto than seina and so she will have more oppertunity to make such arrangements.

That said i always wonder about a ranma and seto pairing?
Nothing really says i think that a woman can only have one husband so ranma could end up as husband number two.
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Re: Career Opportunities Chapter San

Postby LawOhki » Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:11 pm

Tentai21 wrote:Though i do wonder what ranma life at the academy will be like, and with his dormates what will they be doing after ranma leaves to start learning in jurais military?

Ranma's life at the academy is going to be pretty busy, extra course load on things to expect in space, how things work. Basically trying to go from kindergarten to college in a day.


That and how will ranmas next meeting with mihoshi be like?

Horror from Ranma.


Though if ranma were to bond with the first generation and i think this seed and the other are one of the oldest around besides tsunamis tree would also put him like seina 3rd or 4th in line to the throne of jurai.
Something i think ranma if this happend would be horrified to learn as it would mean he could have more than one wife. Something ranma had been dodging as well as thankful that he didn't have to marry any of the girls or all of them.

No first gen tree.

bad enough serving under her another having her as your adopted grandmother.
Drinking and comiserating with ranma over this sad but halarius turn of events as it may mean that they personally wont have to much of her attention, that and seina suffering later.

Grandmother? I think you mean mother. Basically like Noike.

Ranma's special power is to be immune to Seina's bad luck. If something big happens, Ranma can be caught up in it, but unlike Kai, Kiriko's younger brother, he'll never be the focus of it. Seto has so much fertile ground to play with Seina, that she won't spend much time looking to Ranma, though perhaps a joke or two will be thrown in. Seto's matchmaking isn't set in stone.


That said i always wonder about a ranma and seto pairing?
Nothing really says i think that a woman can only have one husband so ranma could end up as husband number two.

Seto's about 6000 years old, why in the world would she have any desire for someone in the middle of their teens? She has several kids older than him, and they themselves have kids older than him.
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Re: Career Opportunities Chapter San

Postby Tentai21 » Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:27 pm

LawOhki wrote:Seto's about 6000 years old, why in the world would she have any desire for someone in the middle of their teens? She has several kids older than him, and they themselves have kids older than him.


You can never actually tell what she will be up to and frankly she could just go through the motions of taking ranma as her 2nd husband though not publically but do it in a way that ranma thiks that its happening.
That or how ranma does tend to jump to conclusions himself about women wanting to marrying him so say a bath scene where seto takes some time to relax and finds ranma there and has some fun with him making him think that marrage is going to happen.
Though it doesn't but ranma will jump a bit and come to realise that it was just a joke she was playing on him to amuse herself.

LawOhki wrote:Grandmother? I think you mean mother. Basically like Noike.


Yeah Mother is what i ment for Nodoka and grandmother for ranma.

LawOhki wrote:Ranma's special power is to be immune to Seina's bad luck. If something big happens, Ranma can be caught up in it, but unlike Kai, Kiriko's younger brother, he'll never be the focus of it. Seto has so much fertile ground to play with Seina, that she won't spend much time looking to Ranma, though perhaps a joke or two will be thrown in. Seto's matchmaking isn't set in stone.


Well you could look at it another way ranma is right there so she may want to savoir what she can do with ranma, while Seina flying all over the place and not near her means she only has a few moments to play or set things up when she is near or such.

LawOhki wrote:o first gen tree.


:cry: why not it would tie up the only free tree seed of that rank though it doesn't mean that ranma must suffer like tenchi and seina likely going the route like azura parents did.
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Re: Career Opportunities Chapter San

Postby toushin » Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:47 pm

how strong will ranma become when he gets the enhancements. without the enhancement seina was like a snail to a cheetah with the other kids yets once he got them a single step was able to send him flying. ranma however was able to complete and keep up with all the others( even though he was dead tired after the fact).
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Re: Career Opportunities Chapter San

Postby Tentai21 » Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:23 am

well to guess i would think that maybe just maybe ranma would be either x2 - x4 more powerful though this is just a guess.

though i think the first time ranma ran he only used his body's own power and not his ki though after that i would think to keep up with everyone he started to use ki.
great work out and most likely after some time competing with the group ranma may get stronger and possibly refine his ki control.

Though with the enhancement like i said x2-x4 times more powerful and that could be without using ki. though lets say he is x3 then with ki he could by something like x4 more powerful.

That and the first time he gets them he could end up doing the same as seina but likely to either leave an impression of himself in the walls maybe fairly deep or punch right through them.

Which would be funny as well as annoy if its amine if she is the one over looking ranmas training as well as seina's as she may end up having to pay for the damages to the room ranma damaged or wrecked.
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